The ghost of Past

by Anishine

Tims sister is Kidnapped and his past comes back to get revenge, but NCIS think he's on holiday and there is no one he can turn to please review

1. Chapter 1

I do not own NCIS

This is my first story so please comment

Timothy McGee just got back from a hard day's work and he was going on holiday tomorrow which is just what he needed.

He made sure he had no emails from anyone, just for a reason to go on the computer. There was one new message from an unknown user. Strange he thought. He opened it and it said

HELLO TIMOTHY MCGEE,

I know you are supposed to be going on holiday tomorrow but change of plans, well if you value your sister's life that is.

Follow my instructions and you will find her with me unharmed but if you don't, well you won't see her again ever! There is a car outside and the key is under your precious little type writer, there is a sat nav which will tell you where to go so drive there immediately. There is a change of clothes on your bed, so change, oh and make your room look like you are going on holiday, hide your bag or something.

The hotel you will go to, there will be a message waiting for you there, obey it to the strictest of rules. There is a false ID with the clothes and I suggest you hide all your NCIS stuff.

Oh and what you already should have figured out is don't tell anyone because I'm watching you, especially NCIS.

From

The Ghost of Past ;)

OMG he thought" I got to go!"

While he changed he thought and remembered why that name seemed so familiar and then he remembered. "Oh NO…"

I killed your brother when I was 12 …. And now he's come back for revenge.

Once he was dressed he grabbed the keys, he already dropped jethro off thank god, so he went outside and found the car and drove off…..