New beginning again. Come on people. I need a review so I can tell which beginning is better. PLEASE REVIEW TO TELL ME WHICH BEGINNING IS BETTER.
I am back in Kohona after 10 whole years. I am back in this forsaken village so I can participate in the Chunin exam. You might be wondering how I shall be able to participate in this exam. I am allowed to participate in this exam because of my good friend Gaara. He allowed me to be a sand nin because I am able to use more powerful sand abilities than him. He and I also met a long time ago.
*Flashback*
Master wanted me to meet every tailed demon so I could find their weaknesses. First I shall find the demon that is also sealed in a ninja but he lives in a sand village. I believe he is also stored in a five year old boy like me. Kyuubi master wants me to defeat the demon so I can have his power with all the other tailed demons. Master has helped me much after those three horrible years in that village.
Right now my appearance is different than the one he says will change in a few years time. I still look like the younger me but I am much stronger. Master taught me a few new moves but he shall tell me more when my body is ready to accept his chakra. I am now wearing a black shirt with a blood red jacket that says demon in pure black on the back. I am also wearing black pants that have red flames shooting on the bottom that look like they can burn you when they touch you.
Appearances aside I am now in the sand village and see the young boy who is the jinnchuuriki of the tailed demon. He is being beaten. Just like me. I rushed in and used a jutsu that Master taught me that unleashed a thousand spiders that each bit the attackers who then fell unconscious. I then walked up the weak boy and thrust my hand into his seal and disappeared inside of it.
I am now in front of the tailed demon. He and I had a talk and he agreed to become my other Master. My real Master then showed me a jutsu that transferred the weak boy's demon into myself. I then got out of the weak boy's seal.
When the boy saw that his seal was gone I seemed to grant his wish. He is now accepted by the village and has told people that I am his cousin. My body soon accepted Master and new Master's charka. In the next seven years I defeated and accepted new Master's which included the ten tailed demon. My power is strong and my supposed cousin let me participate in his village's genin exam so I am supposedly part of his village and am going to participate in the chuunin exam in the disgraceful village of Konoha.
After those years my appearance has drastically changed again. I have kept the same outfit, but the words on my back have changed. They now say King of Hell in which I shall be in three years. I also have seven swords on my back in which the colors of the elements in which they control. Red for fire, blue for water, white for wind, brown for earth, purple for lightning, yellow for life, and pure black evil for death. I only keep these swords for appearances since I can already control the elements. I also have a black fox mask on me which have a mouth that shows blood streaming out of it like a fresh kill. I have the mask so it can hide my blood red slitted eyes and my sharp teeth. Those teeth can tear flesh into shreds. I also have black gloves on my hands and black bandages to hide the claws. Finally I have pointed ears in which I do not keep hidden.
Gaara the weak boy has also changed. He still looks the same but is now nice when you get to know him and smiles often. Many girls have also seemed to prefer him before me. I do not care about that now because with being the King of Hell they do not have wives or anything of the matter. Gaara also has a companion who is his sister. She seems strong like her brother but I do not know.
They have followed me to the village to also participate in the exams even though they know they cannot win against me.
In the village the villagers to not seem to except us or me the most. They still do the same thing they did to me those many years ago even thought they do not know who I am. In the arena we are waiting to start the first part of the exam.
A weird kid with glasses then pulls out some cards that have chakra in them that say stuff about the ninja in the room. The emo kid named Sasuke asked to see Gaara's card and mine. Gaara's card did not have much to say on it but when the kid pulled out mine he seemed stunned. Sasuke grabbed the card and it showed me in my true form and only said King of Hell on it. The ninja seemed stunned at what they saw and backed away from me.
I grabbed the card and just said the card has been tampered with and used a jutsu that supposedly changed it back to normal. The jutsu actually allowed me to change the picture and the words into a normal picture of myself and did not say a word on it. The ninja still seemed scared of me and the banshee has already fainted when she saw my picture.
Soon enough the first part of the exam started.
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