My first OC story. I'm not very good with OCs, so tell me if I did okay. Look in my profile for her full description and history.
Story time...
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A robot monkey was wandering through the confounds of the Citadel of Bone. She has extremely dark blue fur and dark red eyes, silver armor.
All of a sudden, she heard a noise. Footsteps. They were coming from around the corner in front of her. She noticed it was only one pair, too. She looked frantically back and fourth for a place in which to hide. She found one.
She ran into a cave that was off to her left. It was very shallow and only went back about five feet, but it would have to do. She held her breath closed her eyes, except she kept them open enough to see. The figure walked past.
It was an orange monkey with bone on his face, chest, and fist. She knew this monkey all too well—Mandarin.
He looked around carefully. He walked right up next to the cave. It looked as if was about to walk right past it and the blue monkey braced herself for a feeling of relief. But she was surprised when Mandarin's good hand lashed out at her and grabbed her by the throat. He pulled her out of the cave like that, and then released her.
"Aren't you tired of hiding, young Gizamere?" he asked her.
She rubbed her neck. "Aren't you tired of finding me? And was that neck grab necessary? Also, I told you to label me Gizma."
He snickered. "I never tire of beating you. And, yes, that neck grab was very necessary. And I will continue calling you young Gizamere until your name is changed or the Master tells me to,"
She scowled at him. "Fine, whatever, training sequence over..."
"As you wish, young Gizamere..."
All of a sudden, both of them flinched and became alert, and then looked at each other.
"Seems like Master needs us. I wonder what unsettling disasters he needs us to accompany him with today..." Gizamere wondered. They walked off to Skeleton King's throne room.
When they got there, they walked out in front of him and bowed.
"You needed us, Master Skeleton King?" Mandarin asked as they got up.
"No...I needed young Gizamere." Skeleton King said.
Gizma looked up. "Yes?"
"I need you to become friends with that vile Hyperforce and bring them to a trap I have set up. I will give you two weeks to gain their trust and lead them there. If you fail, there will be dire consequences, am I clear?" Skeleton King asked.
"I understand. When do I leave?"
"B-but, Master, is she ready for that sort of mission? I mean she is only a child and-"
"Silence! It is because she's a child that I'm using her. She will be able to chide them more easily. And you leave now. Go!"
Gizma nodded and ran out to fulfill her mission. Moments later, she was in a separate ship with the coordinates set for Shugazoom.
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Tell me if I did okay. Like I said, first OC story. Oh, well... I tried. Read and review anyway, though, please. Criticism (NOT flames) necessary and welcome anytime!