A/N: REWRITE~! I have to explain what some places looked like.
Me: Hidan! Don't try to go to Natsumi's room! She's gonna go ballistic if she caught you!
Hidan: I don't care, Bitch!
Itachi: I suggest you try to listen to her.
Me: Yeah, listen to me you cursed Jashinist!
Hidan: Shut up, Fucker! *slowly opens door* HOLY SHIT! *runs off*
Natsumi: *she emerged from her room dressed only in a towel* Stuuupid Jashinist…
Me: Uh-oh… I warned you…
Natsumi: I'M GOING TO KILL YOU! *chases Hidan*
Hidan: STUPID BITCH! You can't catch m- *tackled in the ground by Natsumi* SHIT!
Natsumi: You're going to DIE!
Everyone: *sweatdrops*
Sasori: While Natsumi is still trying to kill Hidan, Eu*** will do the disclaimer.
Me: Of course~ I do not own Naruto except from my OCs.
Kisame: And the plot.
Me: Yup~ On with the story while we watch Natsumi go in a rampage~!
Hidan: BITCH!
OC 1:
Name: Millhiore Horie
Nick Name: Millie or Mill
Age: 17 yrs old
Looks: Golden blond hair that's tied up in high pigtails. Green-blue eyes. Average height (about 5'6").
Current Hometown: New York. Moved from Japan because of her parents who wanted to witness her very very rich and very very sick (A/N: I meant that~) grandfather's last moments.
Attitude: A little reserved and quiet around new people but really crazy when at home or with her best friend. Can hide her emotions really well but tries to be truthful around her closest friends. Had a really cute habit of pouting when turned down or upset. Also, very emotional. A really huge Otaku and fan of all popular Animes
History: Her relatives hate her because she is going to inherit her grandfather's wealth, which happened to be entrusted to her parents, when she turned 18. She also thinks that her parents hate her because they always left her to go in a business trip, which normally lasts for 3-4 days max. She has three siblings, two are twins. She also have an Inner.
OC 2:
Name: Hannah Launters
Age: 23 yrs old
Looks: Silverish hair that goes to her mid back. Light brown eyes. Very tall like a model (about 5'11).
Current Hometown: New York. Moved from England to find work in the US and ended up in New York.
Attitude: A bit quiet and only interrupts when needed. Can get worried about her Mistress very quickly. She is very close to Millhiore and treats her like her little sister. Very kind and loves kids. She gets angry when someone hurts Millhiore but she never gets worried about herself. Also has a maternal side for Millhiore's friends.
History: She's a maid before in England but she ran away from her Master because she always gets mistreated. She has no parents, which is why Millhiore's parents accepted her as their maid and allowed her to live with them. (She also has a British accent)
A/N: On with the story~
The S-Class Criminal… Kids?! And Co.?!
Millhiore's POV
'It's finally the last day of school!'
I thought happily and was smiling for the very first time to everyone when I past by them after school. The peoples were shocked about what they probably saw and quickly looked away from me.
You're scaring themInner said annoyingly so I ignored her.
'I hope I get to spend some time with Mother and Father when I get home'
I reached the house and I quickly raced in the front of the door before I yanked it open.
"I'm home!" I yelled softly after I entered the house.
"Welcome home, Mistress" Hannah, my trusty maid, greeted me a bit happily.
"Thank you, Hannah!" I thanked her and quickly asked her where my parents are.
'No reply…'
Odd…
Hannah's face saddened but I ignored that.
I got no reply from Hannah so I decided to go to the living room to see if Mother and Father left a note or message for me on where they are. I raced to the living room and found a paper and under it was money, stacks of money, "…wait…"
I counted the money and it was…
"$10,000!"
Hannah must've heard my outburst because she quickly raced to the living room and asked, "What's wrong, Mistress?!"
I looked at Hannah stupidly and merely said, "Ha?"
Inner facepalmed and decided to repeat Hannah's question,
She said, 'What's wrong, Mistress?'
"Oh! Look, Hannah~! They left me $10,000 for no reason~!" I sang to her happily. They gave my everyday allowance much to early though I have my own money, I could probably feed the entire country buffet for ten years and still have a thrice of all of I spent.
Hannah sighed before she pointed to the small paper, that I almost forgot, on the table then she left. I placed the money in my pocket then I fetched the paper. They, indeed, left a message for me and it says…
Millie,
Me and your Father was called by our company to go in a
business trip to Las Vegas. Were gonna be gone for 5 months.
We're sorry, honey, but we can't turn them down because it's
a very important trip. Please believe us that we tried really hard
to stay until you got home from school but we're running really
late. Your Father will send you $7,000 every day for Hannah's
salary. We left you $10,000 in the table because we already
know we're gonna be busy this week and won't be
able to send some for Hannah. Please stay safe, honey…
Mom.
I sat down and stared at it for a moment, reading it over and over again, before I lowered my head to stare at the floor. "For… 5… Months?" I repeated to myself. Tears streamed down my cheeks, I didn't know why, but it just did.
Maybe it's because my PARENTS were going away to ditch me and leave me in our house ALL ALONE.
'They only left me for days but not months…'
Our PARENTS must be having a hellu'va day in their so-called business trip considering they ditch you
I wiped away my tears but it's no use because it still flowed. Inner's right. They must be having fun right now and not worrying a single bit for their kids.
Blackness surrounds me as I felt I'm going to passed out. My head connected with the coffee table with a barely audible thud. There's only one thought that crossed my mind before I passed out,
'I… wish… I wasn't so alone… anymore'
And with that, I passed out in the table, crying.
Author's POV
A tear dropped to the floor after her wish and before she passed out. The tear gave off a subtle glow before it transformed into a bright sparkle of light.
The light hovered over Millhiore and it suddenly spoke in a dangerous but sweet voice in her ear, "Your wish… is my command, My Lady."
The light disappeared into small sparkles above her. And the room was, once again, engulfed in darkness.
Millhiore's POV
I woke up with someone tugging at my skirt. Of course, knowing me, I ignored it but I still woke up. I rubbed my eyes sleepily, still a bit tired, "I must've dozed off…"
I let my vision cleared before I looked down to see who tugged at my skirt. There's a little girl with Lavender hair and a paper flower on top of her hair. Not just one, but there were 10 kids looking up at me and they looked about 2-3 yrs of age. And they looked familiar like the Akatsuki from my favorite… Naruto…
"..."
I stared at them and dared not to speak but I swallowed the lump in my throat,
'They're the… Akatsuki?'
Duuuhhh
Pein was giving me glares that I almost ignored. The one that is emotionlessly looking at me is Itachi.
Deidara is playing with clay, Sasori was playing with a mini puppet, Kakuzu and Hidan are arguing, while Pein and Konan were staring intently at me.
They ARE the Akatsuki. It's obvious because of what they look.
'But how did they get here?'
They looked at each other then back to me. That made me wonder what I look to them.
'Do I look that stupid to them?'
Hmmm… Maaaybee…
'Ha… Oookaay…'
Back to business!
'Right! Maybe it's some new Jutsu that they tried to create to revive the dead that brought them here…'
But WHY?
I was surprised when one of them spoke cutely. And I mean CUTELY. Aaand because it's cute like what I said, it snapped me out of my thoughts.
"Um…?" Little Konan said with a cute voice. Of course, because she's so cute, I couldn't help but squeal.
"How cute~!" I said as I lifted Little Konan off the ground. I twirled once while I was holding Konan. I stopped to put Konan down and to sit on the couch because of the annoyed glare that most of them gave me. Pein's glare from before intensified tenfold. Though a bit scared, I still looked at them smiling as I spoke, "Why are you all here in my house? Especially when this house is heavily guarded?"
Most didn't intend to listen and instead started discussing their own things. Pein gave the others glares to shut them up then he stood up, "I'm Pe-" I cut him off.
"Or Nagato?" I said smiling but only received a glare from Pein, "… S-sorry…" I said, lowering my head. I looked at Konan, who was suddenly next to me and smiling, and asked, "Do you know where you are?" I asked smiling, as well. Konan shook her head, still smiling, "Do you know what happened to all of you?" Konan, once again, shook her head. Her smile never leaving her face.
The others yawned, indicating they're tired. Itachi looked like he was feeling tired himself. So that night's discussion was brought to an end.
"Hannah…" I called softly then Hannah came in the room in a few minutes.
"What is it, Mistress?" Hannah asked after she bowed. I looked over at the Akatsuki as I stood up, straightening my uniform. Hannah traced her look to the Akatsuki as well, looking shocked. She came over to them then she lifted Itachi, which he didn't struggled, and said, "They're simply adorable, Mistress"
I smiled happily and lifted Konan and Deidara who fell asleep, "Aren't they? Can you help me carry them to my room, Hannah?" I asked nicely.
Hannah let Itachi down, "Gladly" she said straightening. Then she lifted Tobi and Kisame, who fell asleep awhile ago. We led the way out of the living room as the others trailed behind us.
"Here we are~" I announced as I opened the door that leads to my bedroom. It was pretty obvious that it was my room because my name is written in the door in purple sparkly letters. People who's finding my room and having no luck finding it, would facepalm if they saw this door with my name written on it, thinking 'So obvious…'
My room was really big, the paint in the walls are light colored ones like Pink, Red, Violet, and Yellow. My bed is a King sized one and in a nice light shade of pink. It was placed in the middle of the room, the frame of the bed is backed up in the wall. One nightstand on each side of the bed with the same lamp.
A little bit far away from the bed's front is Red, Green, Violet, and Blue beanbags. In front of the beanbags, are an XBOX 360 Console, 4 controllers sprawled out, and a 24 inch flat screen TV.
There are other two doors in the room, as well. One leads to a bathroom and another leads to my walk-in closet. There's also a large window-door glass that leads to the balcony that gives a beautiful view of the garden.
The others went exploring my room, so me and Hannah went ahead of them to my bed to place the four and let them sleep. Hannah said she's going to finish some stuff and will inform me tomorrow if breakfast is ready, then she left. I look over to the others and was surprise that Hidan was unbelievably quiet for once.
"*Doushu tano?" I asked him. (A/N: *It means "What's wrong?")
The others looked at each other, probably wondering how I can switch language. They can't blame me, I lived in Japan before, remember?
Little Hidan only ignored me and plopped down in the bed beside Kisame. He murmured something about Jashin, Sacrifice, and Bitch then he fell asleep really fast.
I laid on the right side of the bed next to Little Deidara. The others who are still awake, laid in the available space in the bed then fell asleep. I felt tiredness take over me so I let it. And soon enough, I, too, fell asleep.
'You're gonna freak out if you saw this… Ricotta…'
She SURE will
A/N: Yay~! First Chapter done~ I wonder who's Ricotta? You'll know next chapter~ I'll post it if I had the time~! Review while squealing at the Akatsuki's cuteness~! Kidding!