Title: The Point of No Return
Part 1: Our Castle of Sand
Author: Clarissa, xoIssaox
Disclaimer: Do you really think if I owned Danny(hehe, Josh Hartnett) I'd be writing fanfiction? No, I didn't think so. Lol, though I wish I did, I don't. I don't own, so don't sue!
Notes: Hey, guys--this is my first time writing a Pearl Harbor fic. Luckly, I'm still the same old cheesy-love girl I've always been. Enjoy.
On FanFiction: Evelyn/Danny story. Takes place before Rafe comes back, but before Danny and Evelyn go on the plane ride.
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Evelyn took a deep breath of the Hawiian air as she stepped out into the morning. The sun was beginning to rise, and everything around her felt wonderful...for most people. She, instead, felt a twinge of meloncholy over the loss of her love.
'Rafe. Rafe McCrawley.' The name kept on repeating over in her head. 'Rafe McCrawley was reported dead.' She could feel tears swelling up behind her eyes.
"Evelyn?" Betty said, placing a hand on her shoulder.
Evelyn jumped back. "Oh, Betty! You scared the daylights out of me!" She replied.
"Golly, Ev, you look awful. You need somethin'?" Betty asked.
"No, no, I'm fine." She sat down on the porch steps. The sun creeping up slowly.
"Hey, whatcha' doin' after church today?" Betty asked sitting next to her, trying to change the mood of the conversation.
Evelyn paused. "I don't know. I might go over to the hospital, straighten somethings out some."
"Don't be silly. Me and the Girls are goin' to the beach today. You have to come with us. I hear some pilots and sailors will be there. Red told me that he'll bring some of his boys." She paused, picking up a blade of Burmuda grass and rubbing it between her fingers, "The funny thing is I don't care much. I just wanna spend a day with a sweetheart like him in Paradise." Betty reposted giddily.
Evelyn smiled at hearing that. She was glad for Betty, to have Red...to have somebody. "Okay," she turned to face Betty with a smile, "I'll come."
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Danny brushed his tassled brown hair. Looking in the mirror, he splashed his face with some cold water, and then wiped it softly with a towel. He noticed one of the barrack windows open. He went to shut it, but noticed a small Tropical Daffodil growing in. He picked it and placed it into his shirt pocket. Content at how beautiful it was, he smiled.
"Danny!" Yelled Red. "C--c--come here!"
Danny ran outside, thinking something had happened.
"We're g--goin' to the b--beach." Red said, as he jumped into the car.
Danny strode to the Jeep. "You son-uva-bitch. I thought something had happened to ya." He said pushing him playfully in the arm.
Anthony ignored him. "Comon, you're comin' with us!" He said pulling Danny into the Jeep, Goose helping.
And with that, the four guys, in Hawiian shirts, were on their way to an afternoon of fun.
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The sun was bright over the Pacific Ocean's warm water. Sandra, Betty, Barbara, and Evelyn were prompted up on colorful beach towels in the sand.
The day had become another beautiful day in Oahu island, where Pearl Harbor lay.
Soon, Danny, Anthony, Goose, and Red came over happily. Goose came over to Sandra giving her a kiss on the cheek, Red doing the same to Betty. Barbara had already stood up to Anthony giving him a kiss and him taking it happily.
Evelyn and Danny smiled akwardly at each other. Evelyn pushed herself up. Danny held his hand out to help her. "Here, let me help you..." Danny replied.
Evelyn stood up quickly, not noticing how close she would get to him when she stood up. "Thank you." She paused, looking down at the sand, trying to ingore his dark brown eyes.
Danny nodded, looking at the sand himself. He noticed the daffodil still laying in his pocket. "Um," He pulled it out, "Here." He said placing in into her hand.
Evelyn took it. "Thank you...again." She looked at the flower. "It's beautiful." She put it onto her chesnut brown hair.
Danny laughed lightly, because she had put it on backwards. "It's--the flower's..." He put his hand in her soft hair, fixing it. "There."
Evelyn smiled. The awkwardness between them slowly fading into humor. She looked at her friends who were completly taken by each other. She began walking towards the ocean. Danny followed with a sly grin on his face. "Our friend's seem to like each other." He muttered jokingly.
"Oh, you noticed that too?" Evelyn replied, playing along.
Danny nodded. "So, how are you doing today, Ms. Stewart?"
"Very well, thank you." Evelyn answered gazing at the ocean. Danny stopped as well. The humor being paused for a moment of thought. "Do you ever think about what it would be like if America entered the war?"
Danny looked at her, to what seemed to him the definition of beautiful. He finally realized why Rafe had fell in love with her. "I try not to."
"Yeah, I feel the same." She hesitated, as a long silence arose between them. She looked at him, and he turned away feeling caught for staring. She smiled nudging him in the arm. "Did you ever--oh, that's dumb."
He turned to her. "No, what?" Danny asked.
"Aw, Gee, Danny, did you ever want to create a world of your own? Where no wars happened, just a world where only the people you loved existed and they would..."
"...would?" He stopped and then smiled. "Live happily ever after?"
Evelyn grinned. That was what she was thinking. "Exactly."
"Of course I have." Danny replied. He ran towards the water a bit, and knelt down. "You know, I actually have a world of my own."
Evelyn looked at him questioningly, as she knelt beside him. "You do?"
He nodded. "Yes, it's called Danny Walker Kingdom." he replied with a smile. Then, he traced a square in the sand, and then pushing sand all around it.
"What are you doing?" Evelyn asked, looking at him. She smiled. He looked like a ten year old boy, enjoying the beach.
"Building the castle of Danny Walker Kingdom." Danny answered gazing at her. This time Evelyn didn't turn away, she stared back at him. He, turned back at his piled of sand, then, looked up at her. "You gonna help me?" He asked.
Evelyn paused, brushing a stran of brown hair off her face. "One condition."
"What's that?"
"That you call it Evelyn Stewart and Danny Walker Kingdom."
Danny smiled. That smile. Evelyn's stomach felt like a billion butterflies.
And then he replied. "I wouldn't imagine calling it anything different." And with that, the two built themselves a castle of sand, all their own.
Part 1: Our Castle of Sand
Author: Clarissa, xoIssaox
Disclaimer: Do you really think if I owned Danny(hehe, Josh Hartnett) I'd be writing fanfiction? No, I didn't think so. Lol, though I wish I did, I don't. I don't own, so don't sue!
Notes: Hey, guys--this is my first time writing a Pearl Harbor fic. Luckly, I'm still the same old cheesy-love girl I've always been. Enjoy.
On FanFiction: Evelyn/Danny story. Takes place before Rafe comes back, but before Danny and Evelyn go on the plane ride.
-----
Evelyn took a deep breath of the Hawiian air as she stepped out into the morning. The sun was beginning to rise, and everything around her felt wonderful...for most people. She, instead, felt a twinge of meloncholy over the loss of her love.
'Rafe. Rafe McCrawley.' The name kept on repeating over in her head. 'Rafe McCrawley was reported dead.' She could feel tears swelling up behind her eyes.
"Evelyn?" Betty said, placing a hand on her shoulder.
Evelyn jumped back. "Oh, Betty! You scared the daylights out of me!" She replied.
"Golly, Ev, you look awful. You need somethin'?" Betty asked.
"No, no, I'm fine." She sat down on the porch steps. The sun creeping up slowly.
"Hey, whatcha' doin' after church today?" Betty asked sitting next to her, trying to change the mood of the conversation.
Evelyn paused. "I don't know. I might go over to the hospital, straighten somethings out some."
"Don't be silly. Me and the Girls are goin' to the beach today. You have to come with us. I hear some pilots and sailors will be there. Red told me that he'll bring some of his boys." She paused, picking up a blade of Burmuda grass and rubbing it between her fingers, "The funny thing is I don't care much. I just wanna spend a day with a sweetheart like him in Paradise." Betty reposted giddily.
Evelyn smiled at hearing that. She was glad for Betty, to have Red...to have somebody. "Okay," she turned to face Betty with a smile, "I'll come."
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Danny brushed his tassled brown hair. Looking in the mirror, he splashed his face with some cold water, and then wiped it softly with a towel. He noticed one of the barrack windows open. He went to shut it, but noticed a small Tropical Daffodil growing in. He picked it and placed it into his shirt pocket. Content at how beautiful it was, he smiled.
"Danny!" Yelled Red. "C--c--come here!"
Danny ran outside, thinking something had happened.
"We're g--goin' to the b--beach." Red said, as he jumped into the car.
Danny strode to the Jeep. "You son-uva-bitch. I thought something had happened to ya." He said pushing him playfully in the arm.
Anthony ignored him. "Comon, you're comin' with us!" He said pulling Danny into the Jeep, Goose helping.
And with that, the four guys, in Hawiian shirts, were on their way to an afternoon of fun.
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The sun was bright over the Pacific Ocean's warm water. Sandra, Betty, Barbara, and Evelyn were prompted up on colorful beach towels in the sand.
The day had become another beautiful day in Oahu island, where Pearl Harbor lay.
Soon, Danny, Anthony, Goose, and Red came over happily. Goose came over to Sandra giving her a kiss on the cheek, Red doing the same to Betty. Barbara had already stood up to Anthony giving him a kiss and him taking it happily.
Evelyn and Danny smiled akwardly at each other. Evelyn pushed herself up. Danny held his hand out to help her. "Here, let me help you..." Danny replied.
Evelyn stood up quickly, not noticing how close she would get to him when she stood up. "Thank you." She paused, looking down at the sand, trying to ingore his dark brown eyes.
Danny nodded, looking at the sand himself. He noticed the daffodil still laying in his pocket. "Um," He pulled it out, "Here." He said placing in into her hand.
Evelyn took it. "Thank you...again." She looked at the flower. "It's beautiful." She put it onto her chesnut brown hair.
Danny laughed lightly, because she had put it on backwards. "It's--the flower's..." He put his hand in her soft hair, fixing it. "There."
Evelyn smiled. The awkwardness between them slowly fading into humor. She looked at her friends who were completly taken by each other. She began walking towards the ocean. Danny followed with a sly grin on his face. "Our friend's seem to like each other." He muttered jokingly.
"Oh, you noticed that too?" Evelyn replied, playing along.
Danny nodded. "So, how are you doing today, Ms. Stewart?"
"Very well, thank you." Evelyn answered gazing at the ocean. Danny stopped as well. The humor being paused for a moment of thought. "Do you ever think about what it would be like if America entered the war?"
Danny looked at her, to what seemed to him the definition of beautiful. He finally realized why Rafe had fell in love with her. "I try not to."
"Yeah, I feel the same." She hesitated, as a long silence arose between them. She looked at him, and he turned away feeling caught for staring. She smiled nudging him in the arm. "Did you ever--oh, that's dumb."
He turned to her. "No, what?" Danny asked.
"Aw, Gee, Danny, did you ever want to create a world of your own? Where no wars happened, just a world where only the people you loved existed and they would..."
"...would?" He stopped and then smiled. "Live happily ever after?"
Evelyn grinned. That was what she was thinking. "Exactly."
"Of course I have." Danny replied. He ran towards the water a bit, and knelt down. "You know, I actually have a world of my own."
Evelyn looked at him questioningly, as she knelt beside him. "You do?"
He nodded. "Yes, it's called Danny Walker Kingdom." he replied with a smile. Then, he traced a square in the sand, and then pushing sand all around it.
"What are you doing?" Evelyn asked, looking at him. She smiled. He looked like a ten year old boy, enjoying the beach.
"Building the castle of Danny Walker Kingdom." Danny answered gazing at her. This time Evelyn didn't turn away, she stared back at him. He, turned back at his piled of sand, then, looked up at her. "You gonna help me?" He asked.
Evelyn paused, brushing a stran of brown hair off her face. "One condition."
"What's that?"
"That you call it Evelyn Stewart and Danny Walker Kingdom."
Danny smiled. That smile. Evelyn's stomach felt like a billion butterflies.
And then he replied. "I wouldn't imagine calling it anything different." And with that, the two built themselves a castle of sand, all their own.