So I decided to write my first fanfic... Just saying I don't have writing talent I was just trying something new for a change. This...this...I don't really know what I'm suppose to say... Geez I'm awkward.. =w=

Announcement

Winter. It was a cold snowy night in Altera. Deep in Altera there was a large mansion that stood out from the rest of the humble buildings. Within the mansion, inside a room on the top floor was a young sleeping girl, a Nasod to be exact. The silvery-white haired girl curled up tighter and snuggled deeper into her warm blankets, she stirred as she heard a quiet pair of footsteps making its closer to her bedroom door. A couple of moments later she heard gentle rapping on her door. Followed by a familiar voice.

"Eve, are you awake?"

"Mmh," she responded sleepily.

A figure opened the door and came in, followed by a more feminine figure. Oberon and Ophelia, what are they doing? Eve thought sleepily.

"Eve, sorry to bother you while you are resting but this is important." Ophelia started. "As you know Hamel and Altera are at war and our forces are failing ever since the fall of the Nasod King."

"Yeah, I know that." The young girl said quite bitterly, "I was the one who disabled him after all."

"You didn't do anything wrong, you saved us as well as the pongos." Oberon soothed.

She still remembered that night as clearly as if it were yesterday.

She was hiding in a dark corner of the room where the Nasod King operated. He was suppose to be a program that designed and mass produced Nasods to create Altera's force to battle against Hamel's. Something went wrong recently, she saw one of the Nasods act aggressively towards a baby pongo which she had picked up in time to prevent the Nasod from attacking. Another time where Oberon and Ophelia were walking long side Eve when yet another Nasod from the King Nasod lashed out at them.

Eve knew that there was something wrong with the program. She had snuck into the room while no one was looking, and now that it was night time she could hack into the program and see what was wrong. She quietly walked to the control panel and began typing on the translucent blue key board. A few minutes later she gasped at what she saw. Someone had tampered with the production system, before they were made to only identify those from Hamel as threats but now they had free will to attack anything and anyone who they wanted. She scrolled through the system info. Her eyes widened once more, Alterians were set as their enemies so they must have been laying low before. Those random attacks were nothing; they've been waiting for more of their kind to be produced before launching an all out attack against Altera! She tried to set the program to self destruct but an error came up.

She nervously clicked an icon as the edge of the screen. Suddenly El Storage devices rose up, one for each element. She knew what she had to do; she ran towards one and began kicking it. That proved to be painful and ineffective, annoyed, she slapped it as hard as she could. She saw crack appear on the storage device. She felt something stir within her as she tried something she had never done before. She tried summoning Oberon to assist her in destroying it; surprisingly he appeared and stood as a guard slicing the device. She let Oberon take care of that one while she ran to the one next to it. She tried summoning Ophelia next and she appeared and used spitfire causing this device to spark and flicker. She looked desperately at how many were left. Two, she ran to the other side and again had Oberon and Ophelia help her, but just before they finished destroying the last one. The Nasod King had raised his hand and slapped her to the other side of the room. Ophelia destroyed the last device as Oberon assisted her to walk to the meet Ophelia. Before Ophelia could say anything to her a giant storage device had rose in the middle of the room. Eve, with a look of great determination in her eyes asked Ophelia and Oberon to assist her to destroy one last thing. Assault Spear they called it, as Ophelia and Oberon used much of their energy in this last attack. Eve who stepped back before turning around and summoned a giant Nasod fist and aimed it perfectly so it wouldn't hit Oberon and Ophelia. With both attacks at once the final device was destroyed.

Eve collapsed and couldn't even recall why she was there when she came to, but she remembered two words. Heaven's Fist. She smiled, that seemed like a Godly name. But since that day Altera had been losing the war due to the lack of attack force. It was her fault, if only she knew more about programming and could change the Nasod King to its intended state.

Coming out of her daze from thinking about it she noticed Oberon and Ophelia looking at her calmly before resuming their conversation.

"We want you to leave Altera."

"..."

"Tonight."

So what do you guys think..? Bad? Terrible? Want to chop off my head yet?