This is my first fanfic. I would like some comments, but nothing like: "Your FanFic sucks and you do too! You are a mother fer and I hate you! I'd like it if you don't do that. ;

Chapter One: Kidnapped

InuYasha, the inu-hanyou, pulled out his Tetsusaiga and smirked. He had long white hair, a red kimono, claws and fangs, and cute little dog ears on top of his head that people often played with when they met him. "Do you really think that you can defeat me, demon?" he asked a scrawny looking youkai. The youkai wore rags and was greenish in color and had flabby skin, but was actually quite strong, and fast.

The youkai didn't speak, but looked at all the people around InuYasha. There was a monk, Miroku, that was holding out his right hand and held his staff in his other. He wore a purple kimono and had a cursed void in his right hand, blue eyes and also had dark hair that was pulled into a small ponytail. There was a demon-slayer, Sango, who was holding a hiriakotsu, which was a giant boomerang. She had long dark hair and it was pulled into a ponytail, and a black and pink youkai-slayer's outfit. She usually wears a pink, white and green kimono. There was a small fox youkai, Shippo, with orange hair and green eyes and looked quite frightened, and he also had a fluffy fox tail and feet. There was also a large cat youkai, Kirara, that could transform to fight and fly through the air. And last there was a young miko, Kagome, holding a bow and arrow and was wearing a school outfit. She was rather pretty and had night black hair.

The youkai ran quickly towards Kagome and picked her up easily. He ran as fast as he could away from the others and managed to make smoke to confuse them. The smoke filled the area very fast, and nothing could be seen for miles.

"Kagome!" yelled the worried hanyou. "Kagome! No!" He started to run into the smoke, but soon lost his way and couldn't smell anything but smoke. His sensitive nose soon made him sick and he fainted.

Sango, Miroku, Shippo and Kirara all ran into the smoke, but lost their way like InuYasha. All they could do was take InuYasha out of the smoke and wait for it to clear. Soon InuYasha came to, but the smoke was still there. They were going to have to wait until it was gone, which might take a while.

Meanwhile, the youkai that was kidnapping Kagome kept running and she kicked and screamed as much as she could. "Let me go! Put me down right now!" Kagome said while beating on the youkai's back. She grabbed an arrow from her quiver and held it high. Kagome brought the arrow down quickly onto the youkai's head and he screamed with pain. A bright light filled the area and then a flash. The youkai deteriorated right there and Kagome fell on the ground with a loud i thump/i

Exhausted from trying to free herself, and fighting, she fell to the ground and blacked out.

Light footsteps could soon be heard, and the outline of a young woman came into view. She picked up Kagome and carried the light body towards a fairly large village as it was getting dark. Kagome was brought into a shack and put in bed with her other things.

Yes, the first chapter is short, but don't worry, the fanfic is long... I've got 17 more chapters written, and I still need to write more