A/N: This is a remake of my original RED story; not a sequel. It's still on the site if you want to read the first one.
OK the reason im remaking this is because as I wrote the original, I began to get ideas for what might happen if I did it differently, so here is what's different about RED in this story:
SHE will be a girl.
She will be from outer space.
She can't spread herself like a virus or turn into vehicles, only morph weapons from her body and possess people or vehicles.
Her full name will be: Robotic Entity of Defence. (You'll see why in this chapter.)
OK here we go!
The Andromeda galaxy
"Attention Robotic Entity of Defence: you are in violation of direct orders! Destroy that transport immediately!" A captain of a large star cruiser was yelling at the viewscreen. On this screen was the image of a much smaller, one-man fighter ship. It looked a lot like a Pell Silverbolt jet plane, only it had a rocket booster instead of a jet engine, it was black with bright red strip lights across its tiny hull; RED. In front of it was a much larger rectangular shaped ship. It was gold in colour and had wide delta shaped wings.
The transport had accidentally stumbled into restricted space and navel forces along the border had specific orders to completely destroy anything that wasn't authorized to cross the border; even civilians. "RED please! Don't kill us! We didn't know this sector was restricted space! Just let us go…please!" The captain of the transport begged to the small but powerful craft. "I…I must…I don't know…I'm not programmed to kill non-aggressors…what do I do?" RED thought fearfully.
"Please…just let us go! We don't want to die!"
"Destroy the transport RED! That's an order!"
"Please don't kill us! Don't you have a soul RED?"
"Carry out your orders!"
RED couldn't take the conflicting demands any longer; she powered up her weapons and fired red laser blasts...at the star cruiser. She hit one of the massive ship's engines, it was now on fire and venting a stream of blue gas. "She opened fire ON US!" the tactical officer yelled from his control panel. "Scans show the port engine took a direct impact; were venting drive plasma!" the Operations officer stated, pushing buttons like his life depended on it. "I'm gonna initiate emergency core shutdown!"
"FUCK YOU ALL!" RED yelled into the radio, she was now powering up her engines and began to fly away from the star cruiser as the transport went to hyperspace. "She's deserting! If we still have weapons, disable her engines!" The captain ordered. The cruiser then fired a purple energy blast at RED, it hit her boosters just as she activated her hyper drive. Instead of going to hyperspace, RED's damaged engines created a mini black hole directly behind her that began to suck her in. She tried to escape but found she couldn't activate her boosters.
On the star cruiser things had gone from bad to worse; it was too far from the black hole to get sucked in, but its port engine suddenly exploded, showering the surrounding area with debris and a brilliant orange explosion ensured. The sheer force of the blast knocked the large ship into a spin. Knocking everyone on the bridge off their feet.
"Core shutdown negative! We have to eject the damn thing or we're done for!" The Operations officer stated. "We can't do that! The ejection system is off line!" The tactical officer stated. "Fuck! All hands abandon ship! repeat: ALL HANDS ABAN-" Before he could finish the ship blew itself apart, large chunks of flaming metal rocketed off in all directions. The shockwave from the massive explosion smashed RED into the black hole so fast that something amazing happened: Her speed allowed her to travel into the black and end up emerging from another black hole in another galaxy.
The stress of entering the black hole severely damaged RED's systems: her linguistic program had been knocked offline so she could only speak her original robot language, her optical sensors were burned out so she couldn't see and her hyper drive had been completely smashed, so she couldn't fly into hyperspace anymore. "Oh no! I'm stranded!" RED thought as she began to drift towards a blue planet covered mostly in water. As she hit atmosphere, the heat from the atmospheric friction scared her out of her mind because she couldn't see what was going on.
"Help me! Somebody help please!" she tried to scream in a panic. But all that came from her vocal processors was a few screeches and whistles. She crashed through several metal structures before she finally crashed, knocking her offline.
With the Powerpuff girls, several seconds earlier
"What the hell is that?" Buttercup was saying pointing at a fiery streak in the sky. She was a hot teenager with C-cup breasts, light green eyes, short black hair, hour glass figure and thick thighs. "Not sure, maybe we should check it out." Her slightly older sister stated. She had the same looks as Buttercup, only her hair was much longer, was orange in colour, tied up in a red bow and her eyes were pink. "We should, she needs our help!" Bubbles stated suddenly. Her hair was blonde, worn down and ended mid back and her eyes were light blue.
Bubbles sisters looked at her with wide eyes. "She?" they both said in unison. "I heard a voice girls; it was very faint, but it was there!" Bubbles stated. "Lets go girls!" Blossom stated. With that they flew off, leaving their signature rainbow streak in the sky. The crash site was easy to find; whatever had crashed had caused a massive black scar on a road in the city and holes through several skyscrapers behind it. The girls landed at the end of the crash site where they found what looked like a small black jet with a strange engine on the back. "Whoa an alien space craft!" Buttercup said excitedly. "I thought it would be something boring like an asteroid." She continued.
Just as she said that, the craft suddenly came back online, red strip lights streaked across its body and the cockpit glowed bright red. The girls jumped back, leaving small arc in their colours. "Whoa watch out! This thing could be dangerous!" Blossom stated in a commanding voice. The craft then emitted a series off strange noises, a morse code like sound, little beeps and whistles.
"Wait…its speaking to us!" Bubbles stated. "Speaking?" Blossom asked. "In some kind of robot language, wait a minute." Bubbles listened to more sounds the craft made before speaking again. "Its saying it's damaged, it needs our help!" Bubbles said eventually. She turned her head to her sisters with a look of concern on her face. "Its asking why it can't see, or feel its wings or engines…its terrified Blossom!" Bubbles explained. Blossom turned her attention back to the craft, it was still beeping, whistling and morse coding like crazy.
Well tell me if this is any better then the beginning of the first RED story. Any ideas for me?