"Aiko Trilogy"
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I decided that I'd redo Aiko, because when I first started to write it, I
was just starting to learn how to write. Um, I still suck, but hey, I'll
keep trying.
Aiko, the New Girl
Rain. Rain all week, rain all day, rain pounding on the hard cement floor outside for hours, minutes, and seconds. Dib analyzed this. It was raining. Dib wondered if it didn't stop, would there be a flood? Dib fiddled with a pen. This was a perfectly normal day at Skool. None of the children were paying attention to Ms. Bitters, an old woman who was rather scary, who also had spiders in her nose. Some of the children were looking longingly out the window, dreaming of things that would never happen. Zim was dreaming, too. And you'd consider him as one of the children, wouldn't you? Well, he wasn't one if the children. In fact, he was an alien. Only Dib could see that. Zim was green, had no ears, no nose and wore a wig. Did the simple-minded people of Earth ever consider him as an alien? Not at all, except for Dib, but we already know that. Ms. Bitters realized that the children weren't paying attention. She didn't care. She didn't care about any of them, but proceeded with her talking. Her voice was like a lullaby to the children, as most of them were becoming drowsy. The door slammed open. And a girl, drenched, stepped inside. Ms. Bitters stopped her talking and turned her head to face the girl. The girl grudgingly stepped inside the classroom, and she stared up at Ms. Bitters with fiery look in her eyes. The children all stopped daydreaming, as did Zim, and their heads shifted to the direction of the girl. "Hello," She began. Ms. Bitters picked up a phone that sprung out from her desk. "You didn't tell me we'd be getting a new one." She said, cutting off the girl completely. The girl gritted her teeth. "He wouldn't know. I am the exchange student from Japan. My name," She stopped and folded her arms. "My name is Aiko." She said. There was an elusive look about her. Dib wondered for a moment. "Is there a possibility.that she is an alien?" He asked himself. He looked at her. They all did. They scanned her, to make sure she was normal; one of them. Short, spiky, dark blue hair, dagger eyes, a skull hair clip, an un-explainable dress that not even the mind could clarify. It was like a bunch of unclear fishnet sewed up into a dress, but not sloppily. There were horizontal striped sleeves, a black apron and shiny boots. Nope, she was unique.
Dib sighed. She seemed not to make much of an effort to pretend that she was normal, unlike Zim, who had actually tried to fit in. Dib shrugged began to draw. Zim, however, thought differently about this earthen, 'Aiko'. A threat? Or an ally? Aiko was directed to take a seat behind Dib, which in fact had been the seat of Tak, who was actually a very cool irken invader trying to steal Earth from Zim. The bell rang. Lunch time.
Wait for chapter two, you mooches. :D PLEASE R&R!
Does it differ from the original version of Aiko? Tell me!
Aiko, the New Girl
Rain. Rain all week, rain all day, rain pounding on the hard cement floor outside for hours, minutes, and seconds. Dib analyzed this. It was raining. Dib wondered if it didn't stop, would there be a flood? Dib fiddled with a pen. This was a perfectly normal day at Skool. None of the children were paying attention to Ms. Bitters, an old woman who was rather scary, who also had spiders in her nose. Some of the children were looking longingly out the window, dreaming of things that would never happen. Zim was dreaming, too. And you'd consider him as one of the children, wouldn't you? Well, he wasn't one if the children. In fact, he was an alien. Only Dib could see that. Zim was green, had no ears, no nose and wore a wig. Did the simple-minded people of Earth ever consider him as an alien? Not at all, except for Dib, but we already know that. Ms. Bitters realized that the children weren't paying attention. She didn't care. She didn't care about any of them, but proceeded with her talking. Her voice was like a lullaby to the children, as most of them were becoming drowsy. The door slammed open. And a girl, drenched, stepped inside. Ms. Bitters stopped her talking and turned her head to face the girl. The girl grudgingly stepped inside the classroom, and she stared up at Ms. Bitters with fiery look in her eyes. The children all stopped daydreaming, as did Zim, and their heads shifted to the direction of the girl. "Hello," She began. Ms. Bitters picked up a phone that sprung out from her desk. "You didn't tell me we'd be getting a new one." She said, cutting off the girl completely. The girl gritted her teeth. "He wouldn't know. I am the exchange student from Japan. My name," She stopped and folded her arms. "My name is Aiko." She said. There was an elusive look about her. Dib wondered for a moment. "Is there a possibility.that she is an alien?" He asked himself. He looked at her. They all did. They scanned her, to make sure she was normal; one of them. Short, spiky, dark blue hair, dagger eyes, a skull hair clip, an un-explainable dress that not even the mind could clarify. It was like a bunch of unclear fishnet sewed up into a dress, but not sloppily. There were horizontal striped sleeves, a black apron and shiny boots. Nope, she was unique.
Dib sighed. She seemed not to make much of an effort to pretend that she was normal, unlike Zim, who had actually tried to fit in. Dib shrugged began to draw. Zim, however, thought differently about this earthen, 'Aiko'. A threat? Or an ally? Aiko was directed to take a seat behind Dib, which in fact had been the seat of Tak, who was actually a very cool irken invader trying to steal Earth from Zim. The bell rang. Lunch time.
Wait for chapter two, you mooches. :D PLEASE R&R!
Does it differ from the original version of Aiko? Tell me!