The agony and the irony is killing me--:whoa:
Sorry I've been listening to too much Green Day.Anyway,here's my latest poem oneshot thingy.Written from the point of view of BB,it's my favorite poem I've written so far.And If you know me,you'll know who 'you' is.
Bitter Sweet
All I ever want to do
Is see your loving smile
But you simply raise an eyebrow
At my obvious lack of guile.
Every single day I spend
Planning ways to make you glad
All I seem to succeed in, though,
Is ways to make you mad.
So my sanctuary, the vent,
Has dented from my weight
But although you seem to hate me
I will not accept my fate.
And every time you push me,
I'll just cling closer to you
Because no matter if you hate me
My love for you is true.
Didja get the 'sanctuary' bit?A couple of my friends had a bit of a problem with understanding it,so I'll explain.Basically,when she's really pissed at him he goes and hides in the vent cause she can't find him there.
I would suggest some of my other stories if you liked this:)What It Takes For Love To Be True got some pretty good reviews,but it could always do with a few more:)
Some reviews for this would be nice:)Come on,I know more than 5 people read my stories.
Oh,and if you do review,could you suggest which name is better?It's a toss-up between:
I'd Wait Forever
When You're In Love
or
Kidnapped
I can't decide:)