First story so please review to help writing and readability also first chapters are Little short they will get long as the story goes on thanks.
Vex strolled down the street at a leisure pace clearing his head. A soft breeze blows on his face pulling on his hood but not blowing it off. The smell of the speeder's people and pollution fill his nostrils. Almost mixing in to a pleasurable smell. He loves Coruscant's smell. He often did this out on the streets because it felt more alive than the temple.
It has a rush of life; the force flowing through every living being hurrying on their way. To their loved ones or work all with a purpose a meaning to live. Unlike the temple where everything is all calm and soothing. Where everything seems to pause and life is peaceful.
So he prefers the hectic streets to the calm temple. It feels like where he belongs outdoing something not meditating in a quite room. But that doesn't surprise him because hes never been really the same as all the others. Always more energetic than others wanting to be doing something, but also more aggressive when dealing with tough situations. When most would use reasoning a patience he would rather turn to dueling and combat.
Which almost stopped him from becoming a knight but alas skill and knowledge override his heated temper, and aggressive styles. He continued to walk down the street lost in thought. He almost didn't notice the padawans walking down the street past him. One was a Zabrak with exotic facial tattoos. The other a human with short cropped white hair that was defiantly dyed.
He had trained the Zabrak to fight dueling short vibroblades. Shes an impressive duelist but way overconfident that could get her in to trouble if she was fighting more than a common thug or a battle droid. The human he had never seen or noticed before. She was rather short well the zabrak was impressive tall. At the time when he was training the Zabrak he thought about picking her for a padawan, but decided he wasn't ready to train one full time.
"But why are they out here?" He thought. "Padawans aren't allowed out this late at night" . The temple doesn't allow padawans out in the city much, let alone at night. Deciding to find out where they are going he waits a few moments and turns around and tails them. Keeping an OK distance between them and himself. Padawans wont expect any one following them" he thought.
He followed them down the street slowly gaining ground on them hoping to reach them unnoticed. They moved with purpose clearly heading somewhere. The zabrak was slightly ahead leading the shorter girl to their destination. The shorter girl glanced back at his direction as they walked. Hoping she thinks he's just a man he keeps following at a short distance.
They started speeding up. "Did i spook them?" he thought as they hurried down the street. Suddenly they dashed down a back alley. Not expecting padawans to be so observant he got to close and scared them "damn it" he muttered.
Sprinting after them he cut the corner of the alley seeing them turn right. Then slipping on some loose ground He hit the ground sliding ignoring the cuts on his hands he jumped up dashed down the alley. As he turned the corner they were not insight. But the alley was to long for then to of got out?
Where did they go he thought? "ohhh hell"He said. As the two padawan's dropped down on both sides of him. "Now this is where the fun begins" he mutters as the padawans Igniting their sabers simultaneously.