So this is my first story right now. I might continue it, but I'd love it if you all review it for now.


"Damnit!" Chara couldn't help yelling. "The damn pain though..." They looked at their leg with blood spilling out of a few cuts from the rocks they hit on the way down. "Damn. The pain's unbearable. Hate it."

Chara looked around with all their might, keeping their hands on their injured leg. "Weird..." they muttered under their breath. They looked down at a patch of flowers they landed on. Dandelions. "Their fault for being here." They shook their head. "Anyone here!?" Chara cried out. "Please! Is someone here?"

The legend that made them go to Mt. Ebott rang in Chara's head over and over. Chara wanted to leave forever and decided that it would be best if they went to Mt. Ebott to disappear. They even made a plan for their own death. Sadly for them, these plans are now gone. Chara still lived at the moment. They remembered what they did to get here. They remember all the pain they inflicted and smirked. it was a fun game to say the least. They didn't want to stab themself, shoot themself or at least hang themself. No, they wanted to disappear completely. With no trace of them existing

Their plans for dying came from the story of the past. Long ago, two races ruled over the Earth: humans and monsters. One day, war broke out between the two races because of the humans' greed. Humans attacked any monster they came intact with. The humans slaughtered any monster. Death is unpredictable still. After a long battle, the humans were victorious. They sealed the monsters Underground with a magical spell. Even today, the story is told from generation to generation. The orphanage was now a blood house that they created. It was really fun as they remembered.

"H-hello?" a voice from far away startled Chara. "Is anyone there?" The voice sounded like they were a boy, about Chara's own age. Maybe even the same age.

Chara remained silent. They didn't know whether to answer the voice or not. It was just a boy though, so what harm could it be?

"Yes!" There was an obvious worry in Chara's voice. They were still desperate to live. "I'm over here!"

There was a quiet shuffle of feet that got Chara's immediate attention. Out of a corner peeks a small... goat? He stood, peeking from the corner at them with actual clothes on with a concerned look. He walked a little bit toward them, letting Chara see him fully. He could a monster or something. Maybe he could fulfill the mission Chara had but failed at. He could end Chara and still no one up above would know about Chara or even remember them

"Weird. Not only does he talk in english, but he wears clothes and stands on his back legs..." Chara commented under their breath. He had long floppy ears at his side and surprisingly no shoes. This goat kid is actually about their height too as well.

"Hello? Are you alright?" the goat kid asked them.

"I really don't know anymore. I don't know at all." Chara said under their breath. They shook their head. "I fell down from there." They rose their hand from their leg and point up at the little patch of sky they can see down from here and tilt their head up, but enough that they can still see that kid.

"Above? That means..." Chara's hand slowly falls to my injured leg as they tilted their head down to face the goat kid. "...you're a human!"

The thoughts jumble in and out of Chara's head. The humans. The monsters that were trapped Underground. In here. And Chara just fell from a mountain with an unfortunately temporary memory complex that almost seemed to be living. As if it was pure DETERMINATION. "A MISSION. NEW MISSION. OVER. OVER. AS THIS IS TWO. "

"Yes! And I can't move! I'm hurt!" Chara informed the goat kid. He walked closer to them, though faster than before. "Could you help me?"

He nodded. "Yeah. I can help you over to my mom's house." The boy kneeled down and slided Chara's arm over his shoulder. "It's not far from here. My name's Asriel."

"Chara." they told Asriel as he helped them stand with their possibly broken legs. They couldn't feel them, but they know the legs wobbled as he tried to walk with Chara. They could see him look at them in the corner of their eyes.

"Don't worry. The Ruins aren't very long to get through. I think it might take us about five minutes." Asriel smiles at me. "Come on. Everything is gonna be okay Chara."

On the way to Asriel's house, Chara studied Asriel. He was a good kid it seemed. A bit too nice of what he did compared to what the humans did to monsters though. He had helped them get to the house while noticing the Ruins common pattern on the walls and multiple monsters saying hello to Asriel. It's like the kid is popular or something.

"Mom!" Asriel yelled through the door. "We have company!"

Several locks made sounds as the door finally opened. From inside the house a larger goat with a purple dress with some sort of symbol on it opened the door from inside. "My goodness! A human! Come in! Come in!"

Asriel and the goat lady were strange to Chara. Chara had hoped they would kill them, but now, something felt strange to them. Something different. They knew that they could change somethings here, but they didn't want to interrupt the current timeline. Soon, they knew that Toriel would heal them or something like that and then they would go to the castle and then they would be able to spend all the time in the world with Asriel.

"This is Chara. She's pretty hurt and can't really stand on their own." Asriel informs the larger mother goat as she steps aside to let the two of them in. "Though I think they're legs might have been broken from the fall as well mom."

Asiel's mom walks into a long hallway and disappears from Asriel and Chara's sight. The two off them step inside the house and they got to look around. There's a staircase as they walk in and the living room to my left and a hallway to their right. A regular size kind of house for monsters.

"Asriel bring Chara in here!" the mother calls to Asriel.

He nods and looks at Chara. "My mom can help you, but I think you might have to stay awhile to rest." Asriel says, trying to reassure them. He walks over with Chara into the last room in the hallway.

The room looks almost exactly like a human room. A king size bed. A dresser. A closet. The usual items that a house might have. Asriel's mother looks at us from standing near the bed, adjusting the sheets on the bed.

"Come, come!" she told the two of them, but mostly Asriel, because of Chara's legs. Asriel nodded and led them to the bed slowly. "My name is Toriel. You might have to stay with us now Chara, so rest up..." In those last moments of her sentence, Chara's vision became cloudy, and they fell onto the bed unconscious.

"THE MISSION. THE MISSION. A NEW MISSION." Chara's voice told themself. "YOU WON'T FORGET IT. THESE MONSTERS. THERE NEEDS TO BE SOMEONE HERE THAT CAN HELP ME." And Chara forgot what they were going to do and the voice of DETERMINATION entirely.