This is my fiiurst stry. Plz review and tell me how to improve im only 9 and have a great reespet for telltle.

I walked away from the bank where I had fell asleep.

My bones crunched and crak as i run into the bushy woods.

suddenly i am into a dog with fur of gold, around its neck was a blue collar which I realized had the name :sam' written on it,

'SAMMY?" I called as the dog looked at my with a wagging, he smile and led me to a nearby tent, where I then find beans.

I grabbed my nife and stabbed the tin can, inguring the bean inside, sad enough the can was infested with beans. They crawled and ate the beans, oh how fly lavay was a terrible object.

"Gross" I say as I place a hand of maggots and bins into my lips, same looked at me wif pleading eyes, as if saying "Please".

I giggled and held my hand out which was full of food, but he snapped at the tin instead taking it from me and running away.

"Noi! Sum cume back I love you! And thats me foods!" I called but he didn't stop, and soon he disspared.

I got up and fell after him, I splint through trees, swinging on the branches and doing flips as I contuied to run.

Soon I feel missing the branch and ended rolling down a hill and landing in front of a cabin before passing out.

I awoken not long after to c a rifle infront of my eyes, STOP!1!111111!" I called making the bullet be planted in her arm.

I cried out in pain as the silver bullet reached my skin and thought my flush.

"Ahh! Omg!" I said but no tears were released from my sacks.

The man who shot me was helping me stand up "You righ?" He repiled, I nodded my head before slapping his cheek, "YOU JERK! YU ALMOST JILL-

"Clementine you okay?" A sudden man asked as I nodded at him, "he drassed an arm around me before chciking my wound.

My shit was covered in blodd from the man and he kept opolgising like he had killed a diuckligng.

"IT K MAN!" I saod. I then realzed he was a very cute man with spleded eyesbrows.

Plz review love yourmum05. I rly tried hard and I think I did good. My sis introducted me into this web anf I luv the stries.