Disclaimer I don't own Ranma ½ he belongs to Rumiko Takahashi so don't sue
me I only write for fun
Author notes part 1: A rather big rewrite of the prologue I think the grammar is better but still is not perfect so I hope you'll bepatient, Now thank you for your reviews I think is helping me a lot with my english even if I still need help with the grammar I hope soon I can correct those mistakes The author notes were divided because the second part contains spoilers
Nabiki's amazon way
The Tendo household was distressed, she was very sick and the doctors couldn't save her, Ranma grabbed the man "what do you mean you cannot save her" Ranma asked with a voice full of sorrow.
The doctor was a bit scared Nerima was a center of chaos and martial artist and if he believe the stories this young man could kill him if he wasn't careful he swallowed "sorry I cant do nothing her sickness is too advanced now her only hope is a miracle" the doctor said with dread.
Ranma sat angry "why I can't save her" he thought angrily he was a powerful martial artist but he was powerless against a stupid sickness maybe she wasn't his favorite person but she still was like a friend, he was going to save her.
Ranma watched the reactions of the rest of the family Soun was wailing like a big baby and his father trying to comfort him Akane, was in rage like always but fortunately it wasn't directed at him and Kasumi was with a sad smile trying to hide the fact that she internally was broken.
Later Ranma was looking for in every shop in the street he always was a bit uneasy about magic but a life was worth of the sacrifice then suddenly something caught his attention a mirror that was reflecting his female form. "ah you have good taste" the vendor said with a smile.
Ranma was surprised that someone sneaked on him, the fact that happosai, dr. tofu and Cologne can do that was conveniently forgotten "yeah , yeah I was looking for some magical junk, something that can cure people" mumbled Ranma with disgust.
The vendor arched an eyebrow "well you are looking the mirror of ydnadllebdluksdru the legend says that it can cure any disease and curse" the vendor said.
"how much is going to cost me?" Ranma said with anxiety he only had 1000 yens and that mirror should be a very valuable item.
"only 500 yens, is a good deal, don you think so?" the vendor replied
"WHAT? No exactly the same money that I have or something like that" Ranma said
"I think you read a lot of mangas" the vendor replied.
Ranma went to his room still wondering how the mirror works, the mirror still reflects his female form "I can save her" Onna-Ranma said
"what is the catch" Ranma said
"an smart one indeed, don't worry there isn't a catch I even cure your curse talk about this with her and when you are ready broke the mirror" Onna Ranma explained
some time later
"I don't know, there is something fishy with this cure" Ranma said
"I think I'll take the risk there is not another option" Nabiki replied weakly she wasn't too eager to that but that was her last hope.
Ranma broke the mirror and Onna-Ranma appeared "are you ready?" she asked with a smirk.
"I think so" Ranma replied still unsure if this was a good idea. Then they disappeared
Shampoo was happy this was a powerful potion capable of ensnare any man and she saw Ranma walking right to the Nekohanten "airen come to see Shampoo" Shampoo said sweetly while he get an amazon hug.
"get off " he protested while he tried to escape from the passionate amazon embrace
suddenly Shampoo drooped her embrace "Shampoo glad you come to Nekohanten, Shampoo will cook some ramen to Ranma " she said and began to prepare the ramen "Shampoo only need to add this potion and." she thought and then she served the food to Ranma.
Apparently he was hungry so he forgot to check if the food has something like a potion or poison or something similar when he finished he seems to be dizzy, Shampoo was excited, then they went to her bedroom "ah young love, if only I were 300 hundred years younger" Cologne sighed while she was hearing what happened in Shampoo's room.
Later he woke up embraced by Shampoo, a very naked Shampoo "no no no" he whispered like a mantra he quickly got dressed he still was a bit dizzy, but he wanted to run, his escape was cut by Cologne.
Cologne was surprised "how is possible this potion at least should last at least two years" she thought "why are escaping of your wife son-in-law?" Cologne asked.
"I'm not Ranma" was his reply Cologne arched an eyebrow, that was unexpected, her thoughts were interrupted "look " he said while pouring hot water over his head then Cologne almost fainted because that Ranma become Nabiki Tendo.
"How is possible?" Cologne asked
"well as you know, I was sick" Nabiki began "and Ranma found a cure but the problem is that the cure made a connection between us, we need to find a permanent cure or we'll die that's why I came for advice" she explained
Cologne sighed "as always another plan wasted and I cannot force the marriage or son-in-law will die" she thought "I cannot think in any cure to your condition" she finally said
"I actually didn't expect any, but I wanted to take every chance before we'll go to that place, the person who bind us said its name is the spring of no return, and that name don't inspire me a lot of confidence" Nabiki said with a shudder
"I want to ask you a favor please don't mention my little adventure with Shampoo to anybody" Nabiki requested "its only I don't want to anybody to know that I lost my virginity to a girl" she said
BONK(Nabiki was hit by a wooden staff by Cologne) "do you think I am a fool" Cologne exclaimed "of course I will no do that Shampoo is already too dishonored, so go and be sure that both of you are cured " Cologne said 'and be sure to broke that binding' she mentally added then Nabiki left
Nabiki enter in an alley and took the form of Onna-Ranma "few that was easy" she whispered "although to fool the old woman was difficult" she thought then she vanished
Meanwhile in Ucchan's
" That was wonderful Ranchan" Ukyo said slightly disoriented, she at last had her way with Ranma even if was a little forced "so now you'll go to that spring" she asked
"yeah I expect to return soon" Ranma replied with a shrug
" I don't know but that name don't inspire a lot of confidence" she said
"I know you said before and that's why I agreed to sleep with you in first place but don't worry, who I am? He said smiling
"Ranma Saotome" she replied
"and.?" he asked
"he never loses" she completed
"good bye Ucchan I will miss you but I will return I promise" he said waving his hand at his best friend.
He turned around a corner and become Onna-Ranma "time to see the others" she said and vanished in thin air
At the same time in the Tendo dojo
"I already told you its her only chance" Ranma exclaimed
"Then why she isn't here" Akane replied mallet in hand
"She went to the Nekohanten, maybe the old ghoul can cure both of us and then we don't need to go to that spring" he replied
"It was very irresponsible of you to try a magical mean to cure her," she screamed
"It was her last chance you uncute tomboy" he replied "besides is not the end of the world we'll be back before you know" he said
"You better don't think anything pervert with my sister" she said
Then the phone rang "Ranma here" Ranma said "no way," he exclaimed "ok I'll be ready don't worry" he said and cut the phone call.
"Who was in the phone?" Akane said with a red aura and mallet in hand
"It was your sister we'll need to go now "he replied and Akane dropped her weapon
"See ya" he said while jumping the wall and began to roofhopping
Later in an unknown park
"Good to see you how the mission went?"Onna-Ranma#1 asked "Fine Shampoo thought I was Ranma and the old ghoul thought I was Nabiki in Ranma's body thanks for the warning about the potions" Onna-Ranma#2 replied "Shampoo has the baby with Nabiki's soul my mission was complete".
"My mission was easy, Ukyo was easier to manipulate than Shampoo now she has the baby with Ranma's soul" Onna-Ranma #3 said "and you?"
"Mission complete I only ensured that Akane don't get jealous about the others and probably they thought each other are lying I also ensured that Akane meet a nice fellow to marry him and forget about Ranma" Onna-Ranma#1 said
"Don't you think we were a bit manipulative?, we could asked them about this" Onna-Ranma#2 asked with a nod of Onna-Ranma#3
"and cut our fun, I don't think so, besides is for the best" Onna-Ranma#1 said
"agreed, then is settled, they will regain their memories at the age we accorded" they said and the three redheads vanished in thin air.
Author notes part 2:
So I finished a remake of the chapter, added how Shampoo and Ukyo got pregnant also added a bit of Akane's reactions I think I should be more careful in the future I let a lot of slips in the teaser, added the name of the mirror also changed the situation with the mirror so I think its finished
Author notes part 1: A rather big rewrite of the prologue I think the grammar is better but still is not perfect so I hope you'll bepatient, Now thank you for your reviews I think is helping me a lot with my english even if I still need help with the grammar I hope soon I can correct those mistakes The author notes were divided because the second part contains spoilers
Nabiki's amazon way
The Tendo household was distressed, she was very sick and the doctors couldn't save her, Ranma grabbed the man "what do you mean you cannot save her" Ranma asked with a voice full of sorrow.
The doctor was a bit scared Nerima was a center of chaos and martial artist and if he believe the stories this young man could kill him if he wasn't careful he swallowed "sorry I cant do nothing her sickness is too advanced now her only hope is a miracle" the doctor said with dread.
Ranma sat angry "why I can't save her" he thought angrily he was a powerful martial artist but he was powerless against a stupid sickness maybe she wasn't his favorite person but she still was like a friend, he was going to save her.
Ranma watched the reactions of the rest of the family Soun was wailing like a big baby and his father trying to comfort him Akane, was in rage like always but fortunately it wasn't directed at him and Kasumi was with a sad smile trying to hide the fact that she internally was broken.
Later Ranma was looking for in every shop in the street he always was a bit uneasy about magic but a life was worth of the sacrifice then suddenly something caught his attention a mirror that was reflecting his female form. "ah you have good taste" the vendor said with a smile.
Ranma was surprised that someone sneaked on him, the fact that happosai, dr. tofu and Cologne can do that was conveniently forgotten "yeah , yeah I was looking for some magical junk, something that can cure people" mumbled Ranma with disgust.
The vendor arched an eyebrow "well you are looking the mirror of ydnadllebdluksdru the legend says that it can cure any disease and curse" the vendor said.
"how much is going to cost me?" Ranma said with anxiety he only had 1000 yens and that mirror should be a very valuable item.
"only 500 yens, is a good deal, don you think so?" the vendor replied
"WHAT? No exactly the same money that I have or something like that" Ranma said
"I think you read a lot of mangas" the vendor replied.
Ranma went to his room still wondering how the mirror works, the mirror still reflects his female form "I can save her" Onna-Ranma said
"what is the catch" Ranma said
"an smart one indeed, don't worry there isn't a catch I even cure your curse talk about this with her and when you are ready broke the mirror" Onna Ranma explained
some time later
"I don't know, there is something fishy with this cure" Ranma said
"I think I'll take the risk there is not another option" Nabiki replied weakly she wasn't too eager to that but that was her last hope.
Ranma broke the mirror and Onna-Ranma appeared "are you ready?" she asked with a smirk.
"I think so" Ranma replied still unsure if this was a good idea. Then they disappeared
Shampoo was happy this was a powerful potion capable of ensnare any man and she saw Ranma walking right to the Nekohanten "airen come to see Shampoo" Shampoo said sweetly while he get an amazon hug.
"get off " he protested while he tried to escape from the passionate amazon embrace
suddenly Shampoo drooped her embrace "Shampoo glad you come to Nekohanten, Shampoo will cook some ramen to Ranma " she said and began to prepare the ramen "Shampoo only need to add this potion and." she thought and then she served the food to Ranma.
Apparently he was hungry so he forgot to check if the food has something like a potion or poison or something similar when he finished he seems to be dizzy, Shampoo was excited, then they went to her bedroom "ah young love, if only I were 300 hundred years younger" Cologne sighed while she was hearing what happened in Shampoo's room.
Later he woke up embraced by Shampoo, a very naked Shampoo "no no no" he whispered like a mantra he quickly got dressed he still was a bit dizzy, but he wanted to run, his escape was cut by Cologne.
Cologne was surprised "how is possible this potion at least should last at least two years" she thought "why are escaping of your wife son-in-law?" Cologne asked.
"I'm not Ranma" was his reply Cologne arched an eyebrow, that was unexpected, her thoughts were interrupted "look " he said while pouring hot water over his head then Cologne almost fainted because that Ranma become Nabiki Tendo.
"How is possible?" Cologne asked
"well as you know, I was sick" Nabiki began "and Ranma found a cure but the problem is that the cure made a connection between us, we need to find a permanent cure or we'll die that's why I came for advice" she explained
Cologne sighed "as always another plan wasted and I cannot force the marriage or son-in-law will die" she thought "I cannot think in any cure to your condition" she finally said
"I actually didn't expect any, but I wanted to take every chance before we'll go to that place, the person who bind us said its name is the spring of no return, and that name don't inspire me a lot of confidence" Nabiki said with a shudder
"I want to ask you a favor please don't mention my little adventure with Shampoo to anybody" Nabiki requested "its only I don't want to anybody to know that I lost my virginity to a girl" she said
BONK(Nabiki was hit by a wooden staff by Cologne) "do you think I am a fool" Cologne exclaimed "of course I will no do that Shampoo is already too dishonored, so go and be sure that both of you are cured " Cologne said 'and be sure to broke that binding' she mentally added then Nabiki left
Nabiki enter in an alley and took the form of Onna-Ranma "few that was easy" she whispered "although to fool the old woman was difficult" she thought then she vanished
Meanwhile in Ucchan's
" That was wonderful Ranchan" Ukyo said slightly disoriented, she at last had her way with Ranma even if was a little forced "so now you'll go to that spring" she asked
"yeah I expect to return soon" Ranma replied with a shrug
" I don't know but that name don't inspire a lot of confidence" she said
"I know you said before and that's why I agreed to sleep with you in first place but don't worry, who I am? He said smiling
"Ranma Saotome" she replied
"and.?" he asked
"he never loses" she completed
"good bye Ucchan I will miss you but I will return I promise" he said waving his hand at his best friend.
He turned around a corner and become Onna-Ranma "time to see the others" she said and vanished in thin air
At the same time in the Tendo dojo
"I already told you its her only chance" Ranma exclaimed
"Then why she isn't here" Akane replied mallet in hand
"She went to the Nekohanten, maybe the old ghoul can cure both of us and then we don't need to go to that spring" he replied
"It was very irresponsible of you to try a magical mean to cure her," she screamed
"It was her last chance you uncute tomboy" he replied "besides is not the end of the world we'll be back before you know" he said
"You better don't think anything pervert with my sister" she said
Then the phone rang "Ranma here" Ranma said "no way," he exclaimed "ok I'll be ready don't worry" he said and cut the phone call.
"Who was in the phone?" Akane said with a red aura and mallet in hand
"It was your sister we'll need to go now "he replied and Akane dropped her weapon
"See ya" he said while jumping the wall and began to roofhopping
Later in an unknown park
"Good to see you how the mission went?"Onna-Ranma#1 asked "Fine Shampoo thought I was Ranma and the old ghoul thought I was Nabiki in Ranma's body thanks for the warning about the potions" Onna-Ranma#2 replied "Shampoo has the baby with Nabiki's soul my mission was complete".
"My mission was easy, Ukyo was easier to manipulate than Shampoo now she has the baby with Ranma's soul" Onna-Ranma #3 said "and you?"
"Mission complete I only ensured that Akane don't get jealous about the others and probably they thought each other are lying I also ensured that Akane meet a nice fellow to marry him and forget about Ranma" Onna-Ranma#1 said
"Don't you think we were a bit manipulative?, we could asked them about this" Onna-Ranma#2 asked with a nod of Onna-Ranma#3
"and cut our fun, I don't think so, besides is for the best" Onna-Ranma#1 said
"agreed, then is settled, they will regain their memories at the age we accorded" they said and the three redheads vanished in thin air.
Author notes part 2:
So I finished a remake of the chapter, added how Shampoo and Ukyo got pregnant also added a bit of Akane's reactions I think I should be more careful in the future I let a lot of slips in the teaser, added the name of the mirror also changed the situation with the mirror so I think its finished
