ok, well before you read anything, i'd just like to let you know that i don't own maximum ride or any other characters!! i also don't know where this story came from, wrote it on a whim i guess. but please r&r!!

We had just flown into San Francisco, and I was standing on top of the Golden Gate Bridge, in awe of the fact that water could look so beautiful.

"You know, Max, there's been a record of suicidal attempts made from that very spot." Fang said, swooping up next to me. He always had to ruin everything.

"You would know." I said playfully, watching his eyes ignite in anger. Angel had got onto him yesterday by calling him emo. I don't blame her. After all, he did listen to "Welcome to the Black Parade" 74 times before we even hit the California border. If only we hadn't found that ipod back in Central Park.

"Max! What're we doing?" Iggy yelled from the other side of the red wiring.

"Leaving." I called back, opening my wings and dropping off the bridge. A couple more miles and we would hit our goal. Disney Land.

Now going to Disney Land was not my idea, as you can probably tell. But Angel, being the persuasive little demon she is, somehow managed to convince me. So here we are, flying over California, on our way to see a smaller verison of the oh-so-magical, Disney World.

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We skidded to a halt in the parking lot, and followed the crowd to the ticket booth. Angel hypnotized the man stamping tickets, and we got in free. At least she was good for some things.

"I wanna go on Splash Mountain!" Nudge screamed.

"No! Indiana Jones!" Gazzy barked and tugged my arm. I managed to get free from his eight year old death grip, and turned around slamming into a giant chipmunk.

"Oh!" The chipmunk said. "I'm sorry. Let me help you."

I took the fuzzy paw, which he had extended, and got to my feet. Talking chipmunk. Hello, nightmares. I thought to myself.

"I'm Dale!" It said, shaking my hand. "Well, no. I'm Chris. I'm really sorry for knocking you down...uh..."

"Max." I offered. "It's fine, really."

"Max. I like that...are you sure? Are you ok?" The big paw let go of my hand and reached up, pulling it's head off. I stared. Chris was no chipmunk.

Chris laughed, probably at my expression, and I blinked, managing to mumble out a "Yeah...I'm ok." before mentally breaking down at the sight of Chris's gorgeous face.

"Ok, well good. But let me make it up to you. I get off in about ten minutes, meet me at the ice cream shop over there and I'll get you something, ok Max?" He brushed his brown hair away from his face, revealing equally amazing green eyes.

"Ok." I smiled, blushing wildly and watched him slide his costume back on. He waved, then turned to some little girl, ready to sign autographs.

I turned around and jumped back a little, to find that the flock was still there.

"Who was that?" Iggy asked, rubbing Total a little to hard.

"Ahhh! Omigosh Max! He totally likes you!" Nudge squealed and grabbed my arm.

I looked at Fang, who was just staring at me. I saw the light in his eyes flicker and then go out.

"You think?" I forced my attention back at Nudge, who was smiling like a deranged homeless old man.

"No duh! Oh this is so great! You've gotta go change...get cleaned up...oh..." She rambled on, leading me towards the bathrooms. I glanced back at Fang, but he was taking Gazzy to some ride up ahead.

alright well i know that was a bit short and fast- paced. please don't leave any bad reviews! any ideas that you have for future chapters i'd love to hear them!