Harry Potter: Taking Revenge

Prologue

1My name is Harry Potter, my godfather Sirius Black has just been realest from Azkaban as it has just been announced that he is innocent as Wormtail or should I say a man my father trusted has sided with the Dark Lord. My parents are dead because of him, I swear that I will kill him, then I will kill all the death eaters and finally I will hurt He Who Must Not Be Named so badly that he can not move and leave him to suffer as he made me suffer by killing my parents. Sending me to live with my mother ass of a sister and her family that treats me like hell. Where am I now the only people that know are my godfather Sirius Black and myself. Right now I am in my godfather mansion hiding in the secret room behind the family tree. No one knows about this room, but Sirius, not even his mother. Sirius friend is taking me as his is student, I am learning martial arts, dark arts, charms, transfiguration, Wandless magic and healing charms, and also there is a document that states, my family founders were vampires, and on my 16th birthday I get to choose if I want to be normal Harry Potter or a changed version of Harry Potter, a vampire. I can also change my name Harry it is if I pick the Vampire change. I also have five houses that aren't in Europe. Two are in America, my cousins are living in them,Africa and one is in the realm of vampires and the last one is in the realm of the elves since my ancestors helped them defeat the faes when they attacked them in the 10 year war. Harry it is now time for you to go for your transformation, but remember what ever you choose I will still be proud of you. I know you will be Sirius...

Thanks I am looking for someone to that is good at grammar and good at writing stories to be my beta because I suck at grammar and this is my first fan fic. Also I would like reviews on how to improve my story.

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