This is my first story in fan fiction, so please review so I can know how to improve! This is short little story about Harry and Hermione in their fourth year, now, I haven't read all the books so forgive me if my facts are off! Enjoy!
Should I ask her to dance or not? Krum's gone, so he can't beat me up…
Ok I'll do it!
"OW!" I realized that I had ran into a table in a rush to see Hermione. "Hey Hermione…" I said dumbly.
"Yeah, Harry?" she sounded so elegant.
"Erm, well, I thought, maybe, well, if you wanted, you know…. wanna dance?" Of course I had to sound like I just had seen a ghost.
" Um… well… sure, but you do know I'm here with some one, don't you?" Her voice sounding like she belonged at a Debutant ball not the Yule ball.
"Well, yeah, but…" And as luck would have I sounded like I should be having speech classes, instead of being at the ball.
So after we danced she went and sat back down. Then Krum came along and told her that something had come up and that he had to go. They said goodbye and he walked off.
Hermione and I walked back together, in silence. Then right when we got to The Fat Lady I had a sudden impulse to ask her this question,
"Hey Hermione, we should do this again some time."
"Yeah, totally, it was really fun." For once she didn't seem so elegant and I didn't seem so stupid.
We entered the common room and while I was walking up the stairs I heard the best thing in the world:
"Hermione, what happened? You look all flushed!" I heard Ginny inquire.
Then I heard the best thing I could possibly hear:
" I'm not sure, but I think Harry just asked me out!"
I walked up the stairs into my room and flung myself on to my bed, this was a job well done.
PLEASE REVIEW! Ahem, anyway, thanks to Quidditchgirl30 and FelixFelicis11 for editing my story and getting it in tip top shape, please review their stories too! AND REVIEW MINE TOO!…please….