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Harry:
I woke up, I was lying in a beautiful room, with no idea how I got there. I heard an unnaturally chirpy voice telling me to get up cause it was going to be a "big big day" which was soon accompanied by a gruff voice telling me to hurry up; at least I assumed I was "boy". I opened the closet and found a well-fitting shirt and jeans; I also found underwear but decided I'd stick with my own. I walked down the hallway and saw I was on a train, but it was much cleaner and nicer than the Hogwarts Express. I found the dining room where I saw a man sitting at the table, the man had dirty blond slightly wavy hair and slight stubble. The man spoke, "well don't just stand there like a gawking fish sit down and eat" at that moment a bustling pink haired, pink skinned woman came in, "Oh yes, it's going to be a big big day! You're going to the Capitol." The what? I thought to myself, but I was feeling hungry so I sat and ate.
As I was eating I realised I was starving. I was onto my third hot chocolate when a gorgeous girl walked into the room; she looked around 16, but had soft olive skin, with deep grey eyes and a gorgeous braid in her striking black hair. Her dark forest green shirt clung to her in all the right places and his gaze was drawn to the exquisite golden pin on her chest, it was a bird taking flight and it was amazing.
I quickly realised I was staring, and the girl took it the wrong way. "What is it, have I got a stain on my shirt? By the way, last night at the reaping I didn't hear your name. I was upset for my sister" All three pairs of eyes in the room turned to I, and I said, "Oh Harry, Harry Potter. And I don't remember any of your names sorry." The man laughed a deep booming sound that made I decide to try and like him. "Haymitch Abernathy, Victor of the 50th Hunger Games" they went round in a circle, The pink lady, who was wearing a horrid cross between a kimono and a Lady Gaga dress, introduced herself as Effie Trinket, that and her chirpy happy voice made I want to laugh. The girl's name was Katniss Everdeen, and she was a volunteer. I decided I would ask Katniss all his questions.
Katniss spent most of her time trying to get Haymitch to stop drinking; Haymitch finally snapped and pushed her away. That did it for me; I picked a knife up and stabbed the table between Haymitch's fingers and drink. Haymitch looked startled and started laughing so I joined in and suddenly he grabbed my arm, I was shocked and fell backwards onto the floor.
I must have blacked out because when I woke up I was lying on a bed, with Katniss next to me. I turned over and she woke up, "Oh you're up" it was a simple statement, but I thought I sensed unease. "Uh yeah, I have some questions for you. Um, I come from a school in England and I was there yesterday and then I woke up here. What are the Hunger Games and why is that Effie person all pink?" Katniss looked at me like I'd lost my mind, then she decided I must have been telling the truth. "Okay, England is a long way away and we have no contact. This is Panem." She saw my confused look, "Used to be America. Hunger Games are a competition, were 24 children, 2 from each of the twelve districts fight to the death for the wealth and honour of being crowned the victor, it is a way of the capitol, the people in charge, showing us who's boss. And who knows why Effie is pink, just ignore her, I do!"
"Ok, ummm I'm going to have a think" I heard myself say, as I excused myself.
Hermione:
I woke up next to a guy, a very fine, attractive male specimen. Now it wasn't the first time this had happened, but I had no idea where I was, and I could hear the buzz of a train engine. What the hell was happening?
He had blond hair, very blue eyes and muscles to die for, was my verdict when I looked at him under the sheets. I jumped up when I heard the angry knock on the door a harsh woman's voice, with just the right amount of music in it to make it still feminine shouted, "Get up Cato, I'm coming in and if you two are in bed together I will personally kill you both!" The boy on the bed woke up at that, and, seeing me in his room, in an almost see-through night-gown, panicked. He picked me up easily and shoved me into the cupboard, with a soft, "move and you and I are dead, literally" I froze and listened. The woman had come into the room, Cato, the boy said, "Hello Enobaria, how are you?" his voice could barely contain the amount of sarcasm he had layered on. The woman quickly snapped, "Cato you little worm, I find that little runt of a girl I will literally kill you" Cato, strode over to the cupboard opened the doors and gestured to the floor, to my credit I didn't tumble out of the closet, I did something much much worse, I fell into Cato's arms.
There was a moment of silence, until Cato started laughing a gorgeous rich sound, "well you didn't find her" and then he dashed out of the room while hitching me into a piggyback. When we locked ourselves in a bathroom, I asked him, why we were here. He said, as if it were the most obvious thing in the world, "The hunger games! Der" at my unrecognising face he told me all about the hunger games and Panem, I knew that I had to act like I knew what he was talking about so I bluffed, "Oh My God, I cannot believe you fell for that!" he started laughing and I laughed with him.
I was feeling hungry, so I suggested breakfast, as we walked he told me not to worry about Enobaria, and that she wasn't actually going to kill me. When we had finished breakfast Enobaria cornered me and told me to kill a puppy without a knife or anything! I was getting quite good at doing spells in my head without a wand, so I stunned it, and then broke its neck. I felt sorry for it, but I was more worried for myself than the puppy, an arena with 23 other kids trying to kill me. Shit.
Fred:
I woke up, and then remembered that I was no longer in England I was in a world called Panem, where they were trying to get me to kill 23 other kids. Shit. And then there was Glimmer, the lush blond haired, green eyed nymph, who I was convinced was trying to seduce me, not that I needed any help. Double Shit. Cashmere, Glimmer's mentor bears a strong resemblance to Glimmer, they had the same piercing green eyes and lush golden hair, but I didn't go for the whole "older woman" thing.
Yesterday I met Gloss, my mentor. I am convinced he is the most intimidating and beautiful guy I've ever met, he has blond curly angel hair and green and blue eyes. He went straight into interrogating me on my fitness and killing stratagems. It had to be the most intimidating conversation I have ever had.
We were talking about knifing people when Glimmer started shouting, we ran over to her, and she said, "Look! It's the capitol, wave you idiot, I want to win this thing!" something about the demanding way she said it turned me on, I kissed her. The crowd started screaming, they loved it, and Gloss and Cashmere said it was a great angle to play, we should just be careful.
Harry:
I was watching the countryside, when I saw them, the massive crowd, I waved at them and they went wild, I was smiling my face off and turned and called to Katniss, but she frowned and went back to talking strategy with Haymitch, I honestly don't need a strategy, I have my wand.
When we get to the station, we are ushered into a beautiful hallway, and told to eat; there is so much food, soups and cakes and tarts and pies. I restrain from stuffing my face, vomiting after eating good rich food is disgusting, I pace myself eating a little of each, I see Katniss doing the same, we both reach for the same cherry mini tart and our fingers touch, I feel hot and flushed and she only touched my fingers, I ask to be excused and as I stride down the hallway I hear Katniss do the same. When she catches up to me, she kisses me, making my thoughts go into overdrive, I love this girl, but I can't, I love Ginny. Don't I?
Katniss:
The kiss just felt wrong, I could tell he was feeling it, but I hated it, he tasted like cherries and chocolate and champagne, I hate champagne. I found a room full of weapons, and finally found a bow and arrow; they were gorgeous, wood and silver bows with intricately decorated designs. I was shooting arrows into a dummy, hot and heavy, my way. When he walked in, I could tell he was a capitol cause of the way he was dressed. He gestured for me to continue, but I turned to him and asked, "Why are you here? Who are you?" When he answered I was shocked, "Well, I like training, my name is Peeta, Peeta Abernathy.", It was then that I recognised the similarities between them, but this guy was seriously well built. "What you're Haymitch's kid? I thought Haymitch didn't have kids? Or a wife?", "That's cause he doesn't! I'm capitol, Haymitch was "loaned" to my mum, when he first turned 18 and she was in love with him, but eventually he started drinking too much. He was 24 when he left my mum, and by then I was in the picture." I was confused but decided to talk to him, we chatted for two hours about home and family and Haymitch. Then I was too tired to talk.
When I get upstairs I go to Haymitch's room, I don't knock or anything, and in hindsight that might have been a good idea, because nothing would have prepared me to see Enobaria in bed with Haymitch. Haymitch was interesting when I confronted him, he basically avoided it and made me get dressed and go to training.
Hermione:
I wake up the next morning to the wonderful sight of Cato, over the last day we have gotten to know each other, I have told him about we being a witch, and he seems really cool about it, he said it would help me to survive in the games. He said my beauty would get me sponsors, and that he would try to get me with the Elite, the best of the group, I smiled at that, hunting in a pack would help my nerves.
And then Enobaria comes in and demands we go to training, I find some black yoga pants, a black shirt and purple overtunic. And decide to wear that, we walk down together, and he leads me to the swords and deadly knives, I whisper to him that I don't know how to use them and he laughs and tells me it doesn't matter, just manipulate it so that it hits the target. And so I begin "throwing" knives.
Fred:
I walk into the training room, Glimmer at my side, the capitol people had dyed my hair blond, it was interesting when they did it, and they were murmuring and asking about how a kid from one had gotten their hair dyed. They cut it too, and curled it into light ringlets, it was horrible, and I looked like a baby cherub.
My eyes catch sight of Hermione, how is it that she is throwing knifes? I thought I was the only wizard who had learnt common muggle self-defence. I quickly realised that she had cast a spell on the knives so that they always hit the target, what a smart kid.
Glimmer dragged me over to talk to them unaware of my discomfort. The boy introduced himself as Cato and the girl confirmed my suspicions when she answered with Hermione.
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