~Tragic Love Story~ Chapter 1

I remember like it was yesterday...I was about 8 at that time. I grew up living with my father was always busy with his work,and had to go on business trips all the time.I was always alone,i had no friends,no money and no one to play with day my parents were fighting,it was a rainy day, they were arguing about the house .....my parents got a dad left, i tried to run after him but, he stopped me, and gave me a had a heart locket on it,he than smiled and left,i cried in agony in my room...I would look at my necklace every time i was lonely and remember the past.I would always wonder where the key to the locket was. But i guess the key would be lost forever....I finally got over my sadness months later,but i was still very was the past but I'm different now...

My name is Mi Sun, which stands for beauty and goodness,i don't like my name cause i don't think it suits me.I'm currently 19 i am living with my ill mother and my grandma. Life has changed for me since i was little. Ever since my father left, my mom has been working hard and because of that she became ill. For me i have to attend college and work at the same time. I work at 2 part time jobs and I got to do the cooking and cleaning in the house. I had thought of committing suicide once,but i knew if i died where would my mother go. Until one day my grandma arranged a blind date for me. She told me that my date was her sister's grandson,and she also said "he was very handsome and charming."I said okay to the date, but it was only because my grandma worked hard to arrange this.

I tried to look my best,i wore my best dress and the necklace my father gave me. i arrived at the restaurant where we were suppose to meet. I was waiting outside, than a long black limo stopped right in front of a tall guy stepped out of the car,i was shocked. The guy introduced himself "Hello,my name is Choi Seung Hyun, nice to meet you." I was very shocked by his politeness. We than walked into the restaurant. I had never seen such a gorgeous place,there was silk everywhere, the artwork looked very expensive,and the aroma of the food made my mouth water.

We than took a seat, Seung Hyun asked "do you want anything miss sun? you can order whatever you like." I felt so out of place in the restaurant,i was poor and i feel like i was making the 5 star restaurant dirty. So i excused myself to go to the bathroom. I walked as fast as i could into the bathroom, the bathroom look very gorgeous too. I felt very dizzy,i looked over the stall and saw a large window. I than started to climb out of the window,than i stopped. I felt bad that i was ditching Seung Hyun so i wrote a note and gave it to a waiter,to deliver it to Seung Hyun. Than i tried to climb back out again. When i finally got out, i ran as fast as i could to the nearest bus stop. Back at the restaurant Seung Hyun received the note, he than left the restaurant looking kind of mad.

I was waiting at the bus stop until some guys started to flirt with me.I felt very uncomfortable those guys smelled like alcohol and cigarettes. Than one guy started touching my leg i yelled "stop!! Leave me Alone." Than they started getting angry,i felt like i was about to get raped so i ran. They ran after me than caught me, I was in the most scariest situation i had ever been in. The guys started touching my thighs and my legs. Tears started running down my face. Than suddenly a guy on a motorcycle jumped off he was wearing a helmet so i couldn't see his than kicked the guy touching me. He than fought all of the guys at once. It was 4 against 1, he than punched a guy in the stomach than ran pulling me with him. We got on the motorcycle and left, i was still crying my eyes out. Than in a soft tone the guy told me "It's all right, your safe now please stop crying." I believed him and stopped crying. He than asked where i lived so he could drop me off. I than gave him my address.

I arrived at my house he than took off his helmet and walked me in. When he took off the helmet i saw his face finally. I fell in love at first sight... When he finally walked me to the door i asked him what his name was he than replied "Dong Young-bae" He than left and i was finally home.I was in my room repeating in my head "Dong Young-bae,Dong Young-bae,Dong Young-bae" I hoped if i could ever see him again.


That is the end of Chapter 1. Comment if you would like, i need some advices to make this story even better. thanks ^.^