Chapter 1
Challenge story Zeta Project 1
It was a dark stormy night, all quiet yet it was loud. She was scared yet fierce to face whatever was terrifying her. "Zee, Zee where are you?" Ro said. "I'm over here", yelled Zee. "Oh there you are", Ro said with a look of stupidity. She could never find Zee in their house it was just way too big. She always wondered why they got the house but Zee always told her that she decided to buy it and as her friend that he decided to buy to be nice. Then, she asked him to live in there because it was too creepy in house this gigantic. "Let's go to the mall," said Ro. "mmm. ok" agreed Zee. Zee and Ro had got in this big house to run away from the N.S.A. because Zee was of the N.S.A.'s robot to kill innocent people till he got a conscience and stopped killing innocent people and started hurting the guilty. (For those who forgot) Anyway, the giant house helped them hide easily because they wouldn't sleep in the same room together or 2 nights in a row so people didn't know where they were. They had luxury beds in every room but some nights they slept on the floor. "Do you wonder if anyone will ever find us?" Ro inquired. "When you take a chance you have to take a precaution" Zee said as if he were a famous philosopher like Homer (author of the odyssey) or Confucius himself.
So you heard that this was a challenge story if so, you were right if you are just a beta reader than just read the story. If not than send me the next chapter in this story with these requirements
*no bad words not even if they're censored if your writing is really, really good I want everyone to read and it kinda brings a story down in quality to me.
*please put the best effort that you want to do in editing because I will edit and I want to get the meaning that you wrote.
*Send it bluemonkey@writing.com
*leave your e-mail at the bottom (I will delete this after the story's done)
*to make it a little diffucult I want Ro and Zee on a talk or Improve show (in the audience or on stage) and have it busted by the N.S.A.
*Also agent west has to say "What the ." (the only time you can swear) and Agent Lee says "That's Zee you dweeb"
It was a dark stormy night, all quiet yet it was loud. She was scared yet fierce to face whatever was terrifying her. "Zee, Zee where are you?" Ro said. "I'm over here", yelled Zee. "Oh there you are", Ro said with a look of stupidity. She could never find Zee in their house it was just way too big. She always wondered why they got the house but Zee always told her that she decided to buy it and as her friend that he decided to buy to be nice. Then, she asked him to live in there because it was too creepy in house this gigantic. "Let's go to the mall," said Ro. "mmm. ok" agreed Zee. Zee and Ro had got in this big house to run away from the N.S.A. because Zee was of the N.S.A.'s robot to kill innocent people till he got a conscience and stopped killing innocent people and started hurting the guilty. (For those who forgot) Anyway, the giant house helped them hide easily because they wouldn't sleep in the same room together or 2 nights in a row so people didn't know where they were. They had luxury beds in every room but some nights they slept on the floor. "Do you wonder if anyone will ever find us?" Ro inquired. "When you take a chance you have to take a precaution" Zee said as if he were a famous philosopher like Homer (author of the odyssey) or Confucius himself.
So you heard that this was a challenge story if so, you were right if you are just a beta reader than just read the story. If not than send me the next chapter in this story with these requirements
*no bad words not even if they're censored if your writing is really, really good I want everyone to read and it kinda brings a story down in quality to me.
*please put the best effort that you want to do in editing because I will edit and I want to get the meaning that you wrote.
*Send it bluemonkey@writing.com
*leave your e-mail at the bottom (I will delete this after the story's done)
*to make it a little diffucult I want Ro and Zee on a talk or Improve show (in the audience or on stage) and have it busted by the N.S.A.
*Also agent west has to say "What the ." (the only time you can swear) and Agent Lee says "That's Zee you dweeb"