I just finished reading Angel. So this story takes place pre-Fang, post-Max
I am Gwen (not my real name) . Not James Patterson.
Let's begin
Chapter One
Max's POV
I was back at my own home. Safe, well fed, united with Mom.
I was so stressed.
I went flying, it was one thing that made me happy. And distracted me by the saving-the-world gig.
I look down at the desert, then I see something with my almightily raptor vision.
I see a girl. Out in the desert, sleeping. She looks about Nudge's age. She had jet-black hair, and was extremely skinny for her age.
"Hey Max," said a voice
I quickly turn around. It was Fang. He had a serious expression, as usual. And was flying behind me, I could see his black wings. He was the only one is the flock that had pure-black wings
"Do you see that girl?" I ask, ignoring my thoughts and feelings.
He nods, "I'll check it out," he says.
We land. The girl wakes up and nearly jumps out of her skin. Even before we land. She screams. I see two guys about our age. One of them has short blackish-brown hair and dark brown eyes. The other had red hair, green eyes, and freckles.
"Julia, what's wrong?" said the dark haired guy. He see's us and says "Who are you?"
The girl, Julia, had big, grey eyes. She was scared.
"I'm Max, this is Fang." I say "We saw that girl, and we wanted to see what was going on."
The red headed guy looked at us and said "I'm Zack, the guy standing next to me is Shane. 'That girl' has a name, and it's Julia. What is it?"
I look at Fang and send him a we-need-to-help-them look. He nods and says "Do you need help?"
The three kids look at each other "Of course," said Zack "we'll come."
I nod, "Are you mutants?" I ask.
Zack sighs and exposes reptilian scales and eyes like a cat. He had a forked tounge. His fingers where webbed.
Shane turned into a wolf. I could still see that it was him, I could see that his fur was dark-brown. I could see that the wolf's eyes where brown.
Julia had wings. They where grey. Like ashes.
"Define 'mutant' ," said Zack
And, SCENE.
R&RΩ