I was watching Beyblade and this just kinda came into my head. Please R and R to let me know what you think. this is the first thing I've posted so honest opinions welcome.

My world

It's like I'm living my life inside this dream,

I don't know where it started or where it will end,

I need to wake up but I'm to tired to even try,

I feel safe in this world inside my head,

But the only trouble is I'm dreaming my life away,

Making up my own illusion as I go along,

There is no place for my in the world out side,

Though I worked my life away,

Where I started is where I've stayed,

Through my mind I soar like an eagle,

But how could I fly through your skies on these broken wings,

In this head of mine no one can hurt me,

This is the only place that I am free to breathe,

Everyone is telling me that it is time I woke up,

But why should I when the real world has brought my nothing but pain,

Just leave me alone and just let me dream,

I'd rather be anywhere than wide-awake,

After all it's my decision and I'm not really hurting anyone,

I've spent my time building a castle in the clouds,

A safe place to hide with my hopes and fears,

This is the kind of world only I can offer me,

You're just looking at my life through a shattered mirror,

All I want is to live deep inside my mind,

Sometimes it feels like I'm fighting reality,

Just let me stay here safe in my world,

Please let my know what you think kay? Happy New Year

lol see ya