Hey guys! I know I'm not that good, but if anyone can give me any advice feel free to give it!!!I don't own any of the Yu-Yu-Gang when they show up, but I own my characters!! And Vincent is the Name my bro wanted so it's not Vincent from FF7 okay!

    Title: Thief's story

Las Vegas... a town of luxury, entertainment, and gambling. A place to win big... or lose it all. Most of the things that happen are good, yet sometimes things go wrong...very wrong. This is one of those times that something went wrong, when four of the best casino's where robbed at the same time by four women. This is there story...

She went through the room as fast as lightning. She saw the vault. It was one that was voice activated, scanned the retina, and matched fingerprints "No way... too easy." She took out a leaf and changed her form to the president and walked up to the vault. She stood in front of it and waited for the process to start.

It began a moment later and scanned her eyes, and fingerprints. It approved, and then spoke "Name." "Dante Strife. President of Lady's Luck." "Enter."  The vault door swung open and "Dante" walked in. She laughed as she changed to her normal form. She had her human desicse hair, yet her amber eyes. "That was too easy. I thought that it would be harder than that!" She walked to where the money was held.

She opened it up and took out everything. "Man...I can't carry this!" She took out another leaf, and made it shrink to a small size. "All right!" She put it in her bag, and uses another spell to make it look like text books. "Time to get outta this joint!!" She took off running, got through the security cameras, and out of the casino. "Too easy for Ace!" She went to her new Chevy convertible Corvette and it open for her. She got in and it started for Ace, and it took if off.

"That was too easy, and Vincent said that was really hard to break into! Now I have everything I need to get to Japan!!" She puts in her cd, and plays Tsugaru really loud. She picked up her cell phone, and dialed up a number. "Hello?" Hey Vincent!!" "Jamie." "How ya doing?" "Fine." "Hey bro, you know that temple that I wanted in Japan?" "Yeah." "Buy it; I'm finally going to Japan!" "Okay...Later!" "Later."

She smiled, and hung up. 'Everything's going according to plan. And Vinny said I couldn't do it...ha!'Jamie pulled into her driveway, and went in. It was a normal enough house, made of pine and built in the hill, but for one person it was big enough. She walked in and smiled. "Home sweet home!" She threw the bag on her bed. "Now time for along shower!" Thirty min. later she got out. "Now...what to wear." She went in her walk-in closet. "Perfect!" She came out wearing a miko kimono with navy blue pants with a silver fox on the right side, and a gray dragon on the left. She heard a sound outside. 'What was that?'

Jamie took out a blue rose and willed it to become a whip. She then transformed into her real form. Her hair went to the lower part of her back and was whitesh/silverish color, amber eyes, and ears on the top of her head. She grew a few inches, and had a white/silver tail around her waist. She stepped outside, and listened for any noise. 'There are three...no two youki, and a hanyu out here. What do they want!! ?' She saw something move in shadows. 'It's one of the youki!' "Show yourself!!"

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                         Artia: Yay!! First chappy done!

                         Ashley: When do I show up!!

                         Artia: Next chapter!

                         Ashley: Yes!

                         Artia: Now... review and I'll get the next chapter soon...Later!! Oh...and Tsugaru is from DDRMAX2. I just love that game. Bye!!