My very first NCIS fanfic. Here goes nothing...
Disclaimer: I do not own anything from the NCIS world. But their are some new characters of my own creation.
A little background info for my fanfic: Ducky and Palmer are at a medical convention, so wont see them until the end.
"McGee, any family members?" Gibbs asked for the second time
"erm... yeah he has a wife and daughter who live at this address" McGee said as he gave Gibbs the piece of paper.
"Ziva and Tony go with McGee and escort Mrs Mackenzie back here" Gibbs said shoving the piece of paper back into McGee's hand.
"On it boss" Dinozzo said.
They all grabbed their gear and left in the elevator. They got there in 10 minutes. Tony pulled in outside Mrs Mackenzie's house. Ziva went to knock at the door but stopped as she noticed the door was ajar.
"Never a good sign" Dinozzo whispered.
Simultaneously McGee, Tony and Ziva drew out their weapons. Ziva took upstairs, Tony took the back way round and Tim took the front entrance.
Ziva cleared all of upstairs finding her daughter Melanie, only seven years old, hiding in the bathroom and came down to assist Tony. Tony had cleared the back with no problems.
Mrs Mackenzie was hiding behind the couch with a handgun, she shot the unknown assailant in the shoulder. The assailant fell to the ground. The shot had made all the team run towards this spot. McGee first arrived. His sudden appearance had made Mrs Mackenzie forget to kick the gun off the assailant.
"Give me the gun, NCIS" Tim had said flashing his badge at his waist.
"OK" she said handing over the weapon slowly.
The assailant had swiftly risen and used their good arm to raise their gun and shot at Mrs Mackenzie, the bullet ripped through her top left section and carried through and hit McGee's right shoulder. Tim didn't have enough time to react as Mrs Mackenzie started to fall forward and was heading right for him.
Lucky for him though Ziva had arrived and pushed Melanie to Tony and shot the assailant in the heart and kicked the gun away for good measure. Tony outside in the corridor flipped out his cell phone and dialled 911 and then called Gibbs to tell him what happened. Gibbs said to bring Mel in once the EMT's got there.
The EMT's arrived there in 5 minutes flat. Meanwhile Mrs Mackenzie was barely conscious, now next to McGee; Tim had hit his head on the way down, resulting in him being unconscious and Ziva was keeping pressure on Mrs Mackenzie's wound as hers was the more serious and Tim wasn't bleeding that much.
Mrs Mackenzie was mumbling about Mel that was until the EMT's walked in the door.
"Mrs Mackenzie can you tell me your name?"
"It's, Sarah" was all she got out before she passed out probably due to blood loss and shock.
The EMT's took Sarah off Tim and put her on the gurney and wheeled her out then one of the paramedics checked out McGee, he started to come around and tried to stand up but said he felt dizzy.
"Concussion and gunshot wound to the shoulder, bring in the other gurney" one of the EMT's ordered.
"Nonsense, I'm fine" He took one step then Ziva had to steady him.
"McGee if you don't go... I shall tell Abby, and you can deal with her"
"Right, to the hospital!" McGee said.
As soon as the EMT's helped him on to the gurney he passed out again.
"He's still going to have to deal with Abby" Ziva said quietly.
I thought that was a good note to end the chapter on.
What do you think of my first chapter, review til' your hand's sore.