Hi! This is my first fanfic so please R&R, Hope you enjoy :D
Preface:
Ziva walked over to her red mini parked a few meters from her apartment. The trees across the street swayed in the cool evening breeze. A street lamp flickered, creating a small buzz in the silence. Ziva pulled a black coat on as she walked. As she neared her car, Ziva opened her handbag searching for her keys. She arrived at her car, still searching through her bag. Finally her fingers touched the cold metal of her keys. As she pulled them out, a dark purple, silk scarf fell, floating to the ground.
Groaning, Ziva bent down to pick it up. At that moment the back doors of a dark 1978 Chevrolet G van parked a few cars away were flung open and three men sprinted out towards her.
Just as she looked up, one of the men grabbed her, putting his hand over her mouth. Ziva kicked out as the second man came in front of her, she hit him squarely in the chest and he fell backwards onto her car. Ziva dropped her bag and struggled with the first man, his hand still clasped firmly over her mouth. She bit down hard. He stifled a scream and let go.
The third man learned from his partner's mistakes and came at her from the side, this time catching Ziva unaware. She was knocked over and pinned down. The second man back on his feet came to help. With her body completely immobile Ziva could only watch in horror as the first man pulled a syringe out of his jacket. He brushed her hair aside and injected something into her neck. Once the syringe was removed the two men on top of her pulled her up and dragged her to the van's open doors. The third man picked up her bag making sure nothing was left behind. During this Ziva felt the energy seep out of her. As her body slowly fell into unconsciousness she saw the van doors shut and felt the hum of the engine as it roared to life, shooting out of the parking space and down the street. Darkness filled her vision and she fell into a black abyss of nothingness.
Please tell me any suggestions/improvements I can make, thanks :D