The day we accidentally lost Teddy
Disclaimer: Not mine.
Okay this is my first Harry Potter Fic, and I'm a little nervous. I do accept constructive critisism, but flames are just mean. Anywho this is how the story goes...
It had all started out perfectly fine, then again most disasters do. Remus and Tonks asked Harry to babysit their son Teddy for a day, while they went out for some 'alone time'. It seemed fit that Harry should agree, after all he is Teddy's godfather and as the Gryffindor hero he was, how could he not? I mean he had defeated Voldemort, how hard could looking after little Teddy Lupin?
Very, very hard.
Looking back, it was probably not wise for Harry to ask Fred and George to help, hell, now that you think about it; it was insane for Harry to go to them for help.
One moment Teddy was playing with a new Weasley Wizard Wheezes toy (the candy-brush, based on the muggle electric tooth brush, it would brush over your teeth and turn them rainbow), but the product was still in its experimental stages and Harry didn't want something to happen to Teddy on his watch. He had snatched the brush out of Teddy's hands and turned around to scold Fred and George on how stupid it was to give a prototype to him.
And when he swivelled back around to give Teddy his pacifier, it occurred to him that Teddy was no longer on the counter top of the Weasley Wizard Wheezes shop. It took him a few seconds for Harry to process. He blinked several times and swallowed the lump that had just formed in his throat. It didn't help when Fred asked Harry "Hey, Harry? Isn't there supposed to be a kid there?"
The first thing that popped into Harry's mind was to deck Fred, but he resisted after realising that it wouldn't help the situation.
After he had fully registered the fact that Teddy was in fact missing, he sprung to action searching for Teddy around the shop, Fred and George doing the same. While they were searching in the boxes of stock, the bell on the door chimed, signalling that someone had left or had come into the shop. And since the shop was closed today, and no one was coming in, that only meant one thing.
"Teddy!" They all yelled, running to the door, grabbing their coats and bounding out into Diagon Alley in search for Teddy Lupin.
So tell me what you think, please.