Heya. this will be a reboot of "the demon awakes". The original is going to be reviewed by Kecleon352, a fellow pokemon and fnaf author, who has a reaction story. The reason i'm making a reboot, is because the original had too many faults and little to no true story. And also a lot of cringe.
Anyway's, let us begin, TDA:R
'Blood… the pain… I...I can't feel my…' A eight year old fell, his gut ripped open. In Front of him, his father stood. His partner umbra bleed next to him, his flesh in the mouth of his father's houndoom.
"Why…" The boy asked his father, body trembling. His 'father' smiled.
"Simple, you are in the way of my plan. Your 'mom' wasn't supposed to ever give birth to you, and i'm not going to delay my mission anymore. Hound, rip him apart." at the orders, houndoom lunged at the boy, aiming to kill. Time seemed to slow for the boy, and his life passed by him. Hate boiled within him. As a last ditch effort, the boy swung his remaining fist at the hound. As he struck it, his knuckles shattered, and the houndoom ripped into his shoulder. Blood flew as the hound went nuts, ripping away at her owner's 'son'. Soon, the boy was barely alive. Tears fell from his quivering eye, and his hate boiled even more. Soon, the light left his eyes. The father smiled
"Always hated that brat." And with that, he left the forest. The houndoom stayed, for a few minutes, before vomiting up the flesh and blood, tears flowing from her eyes.
Chapter one, end.