Forum:Bunnyclan
Title of Challenge:Poor Unfortunate Souls
Here you go. My first challenge.
Adderpaw tried to do a hunting crouch, but got nearly every part of it wrong. Nothing ever went well for him, and the clan didn't want him as a medicine cat because they thought he would bring more harm than healing. Their leader, Violetstar, had nearly refused to make him an apprentice a half-moon ago. But then somecat from the crowd had called out,"We need to get him out of the camp already!If we don't,there won't even be a camp left!" Adderpaw had accidentally crashed into a few dens as a kit, nearly destroying them. But, Violetstar despised him as much as the rest of the clan did, so she continued with the ceremony.
"Come on Adderpaw,you mouse-brain!Do you not know anything?"Adderpaw's mentor,Stoneclaw,growled. Adderpaw tried to get his hunter's crouch right,but failed once more.
Stoneclaw sighed."It's been half a moon since you were apprenticed and you still can't do a hunter's crouch!"
Adderpaw sighed and tried again. He thought he almost got it right this time, but he heard Stoneclaw grumbling and knew he had gotten something wrong. "It's closer,but close catches no prey,"Stoneclaw muttered. "Alright,come on, it's getting dark. We're going back to camp."
A few sunrises later, Adderpaw had finally figured out the hunter's crouch. Maybe things are starting to go my way, he thought hopefully. Stoneclaw was taking him hunting today. He hoped he would be able to catch was Greenleaf,so there would be plenty of prey.
After they got ready, they headed out into the forest. At one point, Adderpaw spotted a mouse and stalked up to it,pounced on it, but then,somehow,it got free. A while later he saw a rabbit. He began creeping towards it, but he had hardly gone a tail-length when he stepped on a twig. The rabbit looked up,saw him,and ran off. Fortunately, Stoneclaw was positioned perfectly so it ran right into him. Well,I guess I helped with that catch.
"Well,you can drive prey towards other cats,"Stoneclaw meowed gruffly,"It's a start."
Adderpaw got up a moon later,feeling good for himself. He had managed to catch some prey in the last moon, and he had started battle practice. The clan was beginning to be a bit less wary of him,although his mother,his sister,and his mentor were the only ones who truly trusted him. His mother was Gingerfur and his sister was Sunpaw. Sunpaw had joined in a bit of Adderpaw's training,although her mentor, Lilypelt, dispised Adderpaw and thought she would catch his bad luck if she was ever near was used to it though, with the rest of the , Stoneclaw hadn't trusted him to show him the whole territory, because he thought that with Adderpaw's luck, a huge wave would burst from out of the river or that a monster would veer off the Thunderpath. Once he even said something about the possibility of a pack of dogs coming from the Twolegplace. Because of this, they hadalways stayed near the heart of the territory.
Today, they were going to be going to see the whole territory, something Adderpaw had wanted to do for what seemed like moons.
They began padding in the direction of what Adderpaw assumed was the river, from Sunpaw's chattering about the trees and the undergrowth on the way when they became apprentices. Although,no sooner that Adderpaw got to the river, a fox jumped out of the undergrowth and killed him.
His luck improved in Starclan and he learned everything he would have been taught by Stoneclaw. He was given the warrior name of Adderheart, and became an extremely important cat. He knew his clanmates would beamazed at what he had become in Starclan, and began waiting patiently for his family and friends.
Author's Note: Yes,I got lazy and decided to kill him. So sue me.