Yay! First chapter is here any info and suggestions welcome also need beta
"Blah" English
"Blah" Japanese
Chapter 1:
Harry Potter was frustrated, no, he was furious how had he gotten there? All he remembered was leaving Hogwarts and then poof! He was right there in the middle of the way to Japan learning Japanese from an old man
'Wow I remember everything he said even when I was 'unconscious'" thought Harry
"Konichiwa Oyamada-san (1)" Said Harry
"You're welcome Potter-san"
"We are arriving at Konohagakure in a few minutes please fasten your seatbelts"
"Finally we're here" said Harry
"Welcome to Konohagakure please have a pleasant stay"
"I will"
Outside the plane Harry saw some strange people: three kids, a girl and two boys, about his age, an old man, about 50, and an adult, probably 30-35, chatting to the old man, a blonde, noticed him and said
"Hey you with the glasses! What's your name?"
"Naruto!! He's an outsider, probably doesn't understand you!" said the girl, who strangely had pink hair.
"Actually the 'the outsider' has a name and understands you" said Harry
"Oh! Gomen-nasai I thought you didn't! I'm Sakura, by the way, Haruno Sakura, the blonde there is Uzumaki Naruto, the black haired boy is Uchiha Sasuke, What's your name?" said the girl Sakura
"Potter Harry I'm from England an outsider as you said"
"Hello Harry" said Sasuke
"Sasuke"
"Hi Harry"
"Naruto"
"Sorry again for calling you an outsider its just we're not used to other people. Are you here to join the ninja academy?"
"Ninja Academy?"
"You don't know?"
"No"
"Well there's an academy that, as said, teaches the skills of a ninja and manipulate chakra"
"Chakra?"
"A skill that permits you to use abilities beyond your imagination" Said Sasuke
"Sounds a bit like magic"
"Magic?"
"Similar to chakra but it uses ones ability to draw upon ones power like so" he took out his wand and the others laughed at him so he shut them up using the silencing spell they shut up instantly but kept moving there mouths.
"Finite incantatum" so they started talking and Sasuke threw something at him it looked like a knife so he transfigured it into a pillow
"How did you do that?" Sasuke demanded
"One of the many arts of magic, Charms and Transfiguration" said Harry
"TEACH ME HOW!" demanded Sasuke
"Sure but I have to do a test here wave the wand"
"OK" He waved it but nothing happened
"You aren't a wizard then"
"Damn it" said Sasuke"Is there a way you could teach me!?"
"No if you aren't a wizard, and why do you want to know?"
"I have to be stronger to kill him"
"And who exactly is 'he'?"
"…"
"Who?"
"My brother"
"What?!" exclaimed Harry "Your brother? Man, you are one messed up kid"
Sasuke then lunged again this time with his body doing signs with his hand
"Ox, hare, monkey! Chidori!"
Then the sound of thousands of bird hit Harry and lightning started to sprout from Sasuke's hand he then started to rush towards him at amazing speeds.
"Impedimenta!" yelled Harry
Sasuke then slowed down to a snail pace at which time a man appeared in front of Harry holding something. He seemed surprised he looked at Sasuke then at his hand then Harry and then repeated the cycle
"How did you do THAT?"
"Ask them" said Harry pointing at the others
"Um… speed him up would you?" said the man pointing to Sasuke
"Stop his attack"
"OK" he then proceeded toward Sasuke and did the seals he did in reverse order and the attack died out "Done"
"Finite incantatum" right then Sasuke moved just like he was earlier unaware that the Chidori had been canceled, when he was about to hit him he didn't feel the flesh being ripped beneath him rather he felt something solid he looked up and saw his hand in a claw like form against Harry's chest
"WH-what?"
"You know that's pretty uncomfortable, having nails on my skin" said Harry jokingly
"HOW DID YOU DO THAT!?!?!?!?"
"Him" he said pointing to Kakashi
"NO THE OTHER THING THE SLOWING ME DOWN THING"
"Earlier said"
Chapter 1 finished
Questions for fic
1)I need a beta
2)should it be aster Wave or After Chuunin exams?
3)NaruHina or NaruHarem