Disclaimer: I do not own Rayearth in any part or in any way... blah blah. I'm just borrowing their characters to make my very OOC fic.
Anyway, this is my first fic, so please R & R. (Yes, you can flame me, but keep the fire low, okay?)
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Chapter 1 - Hikaru's Stalker
By: Cohran
Huff. Huff. Hikaru was late again for her Saturday meetings with Umi and Fuu. They are going to be so mad at me! The short red-head thought. She hurried down the sidewalk towards Tokyo Tower, unaware that someone was watching her. For in a dark corner of street stood a dark figure, eyes following after Hikaru's every move. His name was Karaage Negi.
"Finally," Negi said. "I can finally find out why Hikaru can never go out on Saturday's." He grinned to himself. Negi began to follow Hikaru when...
"NEGI!!!" A little girl with white hair sent Negi crashing to the floor. "Big brother! Wait up for me!" She let Negi get up. "So, what ya doing?"
"None of your business, Oshinko!" Negi told her sister crossly. "Now go home!" With that, Negi ran to follow Hikaru, leaving Oshinko in the dust. Hmph. Oshinko thought. Big brother's up to something, and I'm gonna find out. As quick as her legs would go, she followed her brother towards Tokyo Tower.
No surprise Negi noticed his sister following him. Not only did her steps sound like a monster, he could tell if anyone was following him. Negi was a well-trained fighter. When he was little, he took interest in karate. After receiving a black belt, he moved on, and mastered various forms of Kung-fu and Tae-kwon-do. If that wasn't enough, he knew how to swordfight. Negi was known as one of the best fighters in his hometown, and he was proud of it. Stubborn girl, Negi thought. For once, why won't she listen to me? Negi continued running, white hair pushed back by the wind. Finally, he caught sight of Hikaru, standing next to Umi and Fuu. Good, I didn't loose her. Suddenly, a light began to glow around Hikaru, Umi, and Fuu, who were holding hands in a circle. Negi found the girl he had been following was beginning to disappear into thin air. Without a second of fear of doubt,
he rushed towards the light.
Taraguchi: I'm sorry if this chapter was a little short and it wasn't too great, but please R &
R...
Anyway, this is my first fic, so please R & R. (Yes, you can flame me, but keep the fire low, okay?)
*********** ^_^ **********
Chapter 1 - Hikaru's Stalker
By: Cohran
Huff. Huff. Hikaru was late again for her Saturday meetings with Umi and Fuu. They are going to be so mad at me! The short red-head thought. She hurried down the sidewalk towards Tokyo Tower, unaware that someone was watching her. For in a dark corner of street stood a dark figure, eyes following after Hikaru's every move. His name was Karaage Negi.
"Finally," Negi said. "I can finally find out why Hikaru can never go out on Saturday's." He grinned to himself. Negi began to follow Hikaru when...
"NEGI!!!" A little girl with white hair sent Negi crashing to the floor. "Big brother! Wait up for me!" She let Negi get up. "So, what ya doing?"
"None of your business, Oshinko!" Negi told her sister crossly. "Now go home!" With that, Negi ran to follow Hikaru, leaving Oshinko in the dust. Hmph. Oshinko thought. Big brother's up to something, and I'm gonna find out. As quick as her legs would go, she followed her brother towards Tokyo Tower.
No surprise Negi noticed his sister following him. Not only did her steps sound like a monster, he could tell if anyone was following him. Negi was a well-trained fighter. When he was little, he took interest in karate. After receiving a black belt, he moved on, and mastered various forms of Kung-fu and Tae-kwon-do. If that wasn't enough, he knew how to swordfight. Negi was known as one of the best fighters in his hometown, and he was proud of it. Stubborn girl, Negi thought. For once, why won't she listen to me? Negi continued running, white hair pushed back by the wind. Finally, he caught sight of Hikaru, standing next to Umi and Fuu. Good, I didn't loose her. Suddenly, a light began to glow around Hikaru, Umi, and Fuu, who were holding hands in a circle. Negi found the girl he had been following was beginning to disappear into thin air. Without a second of fear of doubt,
he rushed towards the light.
Taraguchi: I'm sorry if this chapter was a little short and it wasn't too great, but please R &
R...