Chapter 1:Prologue

Hello this is my first fanfic (redone) enjoy

Bardock the rogue sayian walks sluggishly around. After the sayains in the bar refuse to believe him "Idiots they'll die... SHIT," Bardock says in his head angrily.

" King Vegeta won't listen to me either the only thing I can do now is get my mate out of here," Bardock says to himself and quickly limps to his home.

Bardock arrives quickly kicking open the door startling his mate who is inside cooking "BARDOCK WHAT THE-" She then glances at the bruises and bloodied state of her mate and runs over to him " What happened Bardock," She sets him onto a chair.

"F-frezia that fucker our loyalty and this is how he repays us," Bardock says angrily not making sense to Gine.

"What happened to you Bardock why do you have all these wounds!" His mate asked worriedly.

"D-Dodoria...my crew went to planet meat and after they were tired and cleared out the planet Dodoria and some other soldiers slaughtered them my best friend died in my arms," Bardock clenches his fists in anger.

Tears appear in Gine's eyes being on the same crew as Bardock for awhile and finding out that all her friends were killed by their employer was hard to process. "We should tell King Vegeta and have him-" Gine is cut off "He won't believe me other members of our race didn't even if Vegeta believed me what would he do Frezia is leagues stronger than anyone on this planet," Bardock tells Gine.

"So what do we do," Gine asks.

"I don't want do it but we should retreat as I know Raditz is with Prince Vegeta and Kakarot was sent on his mission so we should steal a pod not connected to Frezia's network and fly out of here," Bardock tells his Wife.

"So you think we should let everyone else here die!" Gine asks.

"DON'T YOU THINK I THOUGHT OF THAT WOMAN OUR RACE IS TOO FOOLISH TO BELIEVE THAT ANYONE WOULD TRUST A BRUTISH RACE OF WARRIORS," Bardock yells at Gine shocking her.

Gine tears up alittle choking on tears " I will trust you Bardock as you are my mate but is we are caught death will surely come to us," Bardock is silent at this comment.

"Ok let's go," Bardock stands up still in pain "Wait shouldn't you get healed first," Gine asks.

"There isn't anytime Gine come on,"Bardock grabs her hand as they fly with Bardock over Gine's shoulder.

The two sayians reached the pod site and found two pods Gine then managed to get the two pods off of Frezia's network making it impossible for them to be tracked.

"Hey!," A Frezia soldier walks up to the two.

"What are you two doing Lord Frezia's orders were for all sayians to stay on planet," He barks.

Bardock steps infront of Gine as she trembles in fear no being much of a fighter "Well we're leaving you BASTARD," Bardock leaps at the soldier but due to his wounds he's slower and the soldier jumps back and blasts Bardock in the chest with the blaster on his wrist.

"ARGGH," Bardock yells out in pain falling on his back.

"BARDOCK!" Gine yells out she looks at the soldier as her fear transforms into rage.

"DAMN YOU," Gine runs at the soldier throwing a blinding fast punch cracking the soldier in the nose breaking it.

"YOU MONKEY BITCH," The soldier curses punching Gine in the gut making her cough up saliva then blasts Gine point blank in the face slamming her into a wall.

A blast fires through the soldier's chest making him drop dead blood spilling out of his chest.

Bardock stands up slowly still in pain ( He looks like how he did when he fought Frezia just Incase ) "G-Gine,".

Gine stands up blood dripping from her forehead and bruises over her body " I-I'm fine," Gine speaks out in pain.

Bardock looked at his mate in shock he knew he hasn't seen her in awhile nor had she fought in awhile but he didn't think she was so fragile. He needed to fix that the average sayian could kill multiple Frezia soldiers by themselves which makes sense that Freiza would want them imagine if they had room to grow they could take on Frezia's elites.

"Cmon Gine we need to hurry up," Bardock says as the two get in their pods and blast off, before Bardock passes out he looks back watching as a big ki ball the size of the sun careens into Planet Vegeta destroying the planet in a giant explosion. Over the destruction of the planet Bardock hears one thing that made his blood boil he heard Freiza laughing maniacally.

Bardock clenched his fists in anger he enjoyed the destruction sure he killed many people but it wasn't like he enjoyed it "I'll make you pay Freiza," Bardock spat with venom in his tone but he passes out shortly to his injuries.

Gine takes one last look at the tyrant that destroyed her planet before tears stream down her face "He's gonna pay," Her face turns to rage as the docile sayian gets her fighting spirit back.

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Power levels

Bardock:7,500

Gine:600

Bardock(wounded):3,000

Bardock(heavily wounded): 900

Gine(wounded):250

Frezia:530,000

Frezia Soldier:3,125