The Date

On February 25th shun had finally asked Alice out and she said they decide to meet in the woods. Alice was so excited that when it was time for the date she forgot to brush her hair. When her hair was brushed she ran out of the house and headed for the woods. When she got to the woods Shun was leaning on one of the trees waiting for her. Then Alice stopped right in front of him. Shun asked, "you ready for our date?" She answered, "Of course I'm ready for our date and I wouldn't miss it for the world." Then they started to walk through the woods . while they were walking through the woods neither of them talked to each other. Then all of a sudden a deer and her baby jumped right in front them. When the deer and her baby jumped right in front of them Alice screamed and started to run ahead of Shun. But while she was running she tripped or little log and she started to fall forward. When she was falling Shun ran to her and caught her right hand and that stopped her from falling forward.

If you guys have any ideas for how this story ends I would appreciate it.