I hope you guys like it, this is my first CATCF fic although this story has been brewing in my mind for awhile now, please review! It would the world to me!!*hugz*
Willy: When do I show up in this story!
KG: All in good time.
Willy: Hey that's my line!
KG: I do not owm CATCF Rold Dahl does and most likey Tim Burtton does to....lucky ducks.
On with the storry!!!
Chapter 1: The begging.
"Charlotte hurry up!"
I looked up to see my little brother waving at me to come along. I smiled to myself and brushed my long ebony hair out of my blue eyes. "Hold your horses I'm coming!" I yelled back to Charlie.
"that's impossible sis You know I don't own any horses." Charlie replied.
"You are such a smart allack."I said while ruffling his hair.
As we were walking home we happened to walk past a factory, but not just any ordinary factory This one happed to belong to the famous Willy Wonka. I had always looked up to Wonka,
I also felt he was the most brilliant man that walked the earth, he made gum that never lost it's flavor and Ice-cream that would never melt even on the hottest days! I remember how I always looked forward to the storys grandfather always told to us when he use to work for him. My favorite story was of an Idian prince, Pondercherry was the name if I recalled. What a fool! wanting to live in a palace made of chocolate, "If it were me I would have been eating it as fast as I could." I thought to myself. What I wouldn't give to be able to see inside that amazing factory.
"Hi mom, hi dad." Charlie and I said while giving our parents hugs.
"How was work today darling?" Mom asked me.
"Gosh it was crazy! Sence Wonka sent out those golden tickets it's been hectic."
"Things will get better soon dear." Her mother said while patting her shoulder.
that was one thing I was really thankfull for, Having a loving supportive family, I wouldn't trade that for all the money in the world. I looked over at Charlie who looked a little sad, It would be a dream come true for that boy if he could win one of those tickets, He deserved it, he was such a sweet boy. "It's almost your birthday Charlie, Maybe you'll win one of those tickets." I said with a smile.
"Boulderdash! the kids who are going to find those tickets are the ones who can afford to buy candybars everyday. Charlie dosn't stand a chance." Grandpa George said.
"Grandfather!" I while said giving him a warning glare.
"Well it's true. But mark my words the first child to win will be fat fat fat!"
And how right he was. The first kid to win was named Agustus Gloop. "What a repulsive boy."
I said to myself as I was walking to my apartment. "Poor Charlie, Well good things happen to good people right?"
-W.W-
The next morning was extremely busy at the candy shop I worked at. It seemed to get even more busy sence the last child Veruca Salt won. Rich spoiled brat, Nothing good can come from spoiling a child as repulsive as that. I set aside a Wonka bar for Chalies birthday present before the store opened this morning and boy was I glad that I did, all the candybars were gone within 2 hours!
As I closed up for the night I caught a glimpseof something in a garbage can of a newspaper with the headline "3rd golden ticket found!"On the front. I picked it up and read how a world champion gum chewer miss Violet Bulegard had won the ticket. "Gross." I said. "Gum chewing is just digusting."
I stopped infront of the gates to look at Wonkas factory and said a little prayer for Charlie.
I then took one last glance and headed back to my place.
-W.W-
"Hello everyone!" I said as I walked into my parents home.
"Well hello dear." Mother said while walking up to me and giving me a hug."What are you doing here? I thougth you had to work today?"
"Nope today is my day off and I thought I would see if Charlie would like to join me for a walk in the park."
"Charlotte!" Charlie exclaimed and huged me.
"Hey sweetie! Would you like to acompany me to the park today?"
"Sure just let me get my coat."
"Im sorry you didn't find the ticket last night."
"It's alright, it would have been nice but I didn't get my hopes up." He said while kicking a stone out of the way.
"It's not fair you're a good kid and you desreve that ticket."
"It's alright really."
I smiled down at my little brother he was so mature for his age then I rememberd that I still haven't given him my birthday present yet. "Oh! Wait Charlie I've got your birthday present with me!"
"You didn't have to."
"Of course I did your my little brother!" I said while pinching his cheeks. I then reached into my purse and pulled out a fudgemellow delight bar and handed it to him.
"Sorry it's not much but it's all I could afford."
"This is great thanks." He then gave me a hug.
We started walking again."I wonder what it's like in that factory, I bet there's...." I turned around noticing that Charlie wasn't following me anymore. "What's the matter?" He just stood there with a look of shock on his face."Charlie your starting to worry me." It was then that I noticed he was holding something in his hands, but not just something something, it was a gold something."Charlie is that what I think it is?"
He noded.
"You won, you won!!!" I grabed his arm and we ran back to our parents house. When we ran through the door Charlie yelled "I won! I actually won!" He then ran to our grandfather handing him the ticket.
His eyes got really big and then he jumped out of bed which I didn't think he was capable of doing and yelled "Yippee!!!" Mother and father had just walked in looking rather confused.
"Well Charlie what does it say?" I urged him to read it.
"Greetings to you, the lucky finder of this golden ticket, From Mr. Willy Wonka. I shake you warmly by the hand. For now, I do invite you to come to my factory and be my guest for one whole day. I Will Wonka will conduct you around the factory myself showing you everthing thing there is to see. Afterwards when it is time to leave you will be escorted home by a procession of large trucks each one filled with all the chocolate you could ever eat. And remember, one of you lucky five children will receive an extra prize beyond your wildest imagination. Now here are your instructions, on the first of February, you must come to the factory gates at 10 A.M. 're allowed to bring one member of your family to look after you, untill then, Willy Wonka."
"The 1st of February, but that's tomorrow!" Mom said to us.
"Then there's not a moment to lose.!" Grandpa Joe said." Wash your face, comb your hair, scrub your hands,
brush your teeth, blow your nose.." He continued.
"And get that mud of your pants!" Grandpa George said.
"Now we all must try and stay calm." Mom said. " Fir things first we need to decide who is going with Charlie to the factory."
"How about you Charlotte?" Charlie asked me. "You did buy me the candy that had the ticket in it."
I then proceded to copy Grandpa Joe from earlier and yelled "Yippee!!!!" I then picked up Charlie and spun him around." Now let's get that mud off your pant's, we've got a factory to go to!"
