I stand in the front of my battalion, taking in the surrounding beauty of the planet.

So sad that Coruscant is not like this, I thought. The lush green flora, all growing naturally and not in greenhouses, where their growth would be so restricted. The fauna here is wild and natural and incredibly liberating, definitely not domesticated where I come from, where you'd be hard-pressed to find creatures outside of thrantcills that are so free. We Jedi love the natural beauty, whether a forest or a planet, and we hate to see it so shattered. I was so not letting the Seperatists ruin this, where they would decimate and annihilate all that is beautiful for the sake of making a quick credit.

I sigh and yell ''Alright boys! You know what to do! Shoot the enemy on sight!'' I grab my lightsaber hanging off my belt and ignite it, A deep blue plasma flame hissing out in less than a second.

Less than a minute into our trek, however, I hear their guns raising. I quickly turn around and see that their weapons were raised at me.

Wh-What the--?!

They immediately begin shooting and before I have a chance to react, one bolt hits, and another, and another, an explosion of pain with each hit and strike. I feel myself in more pain than I have ever felt.

Until I feel nothing left...


So what do you guys think? This is my first one-shot, so I'm not sure of what to make of it. Reviews are very appreciated, so please do so.