OKIE DOKEY! since most of you voted for...um, C I think? Dunno, too lazy to look back XD, here is the first chapter rewritten, this is for you CrazyAnime3!
Oh yeah almost forgot, Crona's a girl in this, don't like don't read...that's all I gots to say.
Disclaimer: I DO NOT OWN SOUL EATER DAMN IT, HOW MANY TIMES YOU GUNNA MAKE ME SAY IT!? *cries eyes out*
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Kid sat silently outside of the DWMA building, feet crossed. He sat back and watched the blue sky...which was kinda depressing him. Kid wasn't a big fan of blue skies (1), especially when they were this asymmetrical. But having nothing to do, he waited and kept on starring at the sky, which looked a lot like- Crona's eyes were blue.
"hum..." Kid sighed again, Crona had been attending his father's school for about 6 months now. And Kid had really come to like her, a lot. A lot more than he liked any of his other friends. She was just so sweet and quiet, and her stutter was so cute."K-Kid?" The wind whistled it in the exact same tone Crona would, great, now he was imagining things. "Kid?" Wait, that wasn't the wind. Kid looked behind his shoulder to find Crona standing right there. "Hello Crona." He said surprised, she almost always stayed in her cell.
"H-Hello Kid.." She said, looking away a tiny bit. Kid sat confused there for a second as Crona kept on starring at him, then it hit him why he had been waiting by the building in the first place. Oh yeah! Crona had asked him to meet her after school in this exact spot! How could he have forgotten?
*Flashback*
Crona stood in front of Kid at the begining of class, right hand clutching her left arm as Kid starred at her absolutly silent. "S-so, Kid, there is something I have to tell you...but I kind of need to talk to you after school.." Crona said shifting her weight as she nervously looked away. Crona looked a little at Maka and Liz who grinned and offered her a thumbs up as if to say 'you can do this!' Crona smiled a little as she looked at Kid a little to see if he would say yes. But Kid wasn't paying attention to a thing Crona was saying, he was too busy gawking at her.
Gosh, do you think she would mind if I adjusted her hair a little? I mean it's cute but...some of it is kind of covering her face...and it's a little asymmetrical.
He kept scanning her face while Crona stood in front of him starting to feel a little awkward at the loud silence, he hadn't said anything in a while. Kid scanned her face some more, now looking at her lips. Her lips are pretty symmetrical though, and they look really soft too..."Um, Kid?" Crona said, looking at him now completley lost.
Her eyes were nice too, Kid had never really cared for blue eyes before, but Crona's were a shade that he had never seen before. It was kinda like a silvery blue, like the symmetrical plushie he had in his room! (2)
"K-Kid?" Why was he being so quiet, and why was he starring at her!?
He kind of liked blue now...
"K-Kid! Stop starring p-please! I don't think I-I can d-deal with that really!" She said feeling flustered. Kid got sucker punched into reality at her tone, whoopsie daisy, had he been starring again? "P-pardon me Crona! Yes of course!" He said startled. "O-Ok.." Crona said shyly walking away. Wait what had he said yes to?
*End Flashback*
Oh. Guess he had been paying attention self consciously (is that how you spell it?).
"So what is it you wanted to tell me?" He said, he knew what was going on now.
"Well…actually, it's n-not really something I can t-tell.." Crona said shifting her weight.
"oh?" Kid said.
"Yeah, Maka said that since w-we have been doing s-stuff together recently, I should m-make a move…" said Crona.
"…oh?…I'm afraid I am not following…" Kid said looking at her a little closer now, what was she talking about?
"She told me that there is s-something special people do when they r-really really l-like each other." Special people? What kind of things?
"…like each other." That was the only thing Kid could really say, he wasn't following.
"Yeah, and I really like you K-Kid…so.." Crona said. Ok! Was she saying-, was she confessing?
"I think I-I know where you are going with this.." Kid said, speacial people, of course! She means more than friends!
"Maka, and Liz to. They told me to give you a kiss.." Crona said shyly. Kid looked at her shocked, Liz and Maka had told her to do it? That sucked some of the fun out of getting kissed by Crona, what if she ddin't want to do it and the other two girls had pressured her into doing it?
"Crona, this isn't something you have to do.." Kid said looking down, he didn't want to rush her into doing something she wouldn't like, no matter how much it hurt to say it.
"But I want to, I r-really like you.." Kid looked up again at Crona. She had a blush on her cheeks as she looked at him and turned up the corner of her lips. Was she...smiling?
"…." Wow, he was really drawing a blank here. Was this it? Was he really getting his first kiss? Crona wanted to...she actually wanted to!
"C-can I..?" Crona whispered now sitting next to him, twittling her fingers.
"Yeah…I mean yes! Yes! Crona of course.!" Kid said back, he could not believe that this was actually happening to him, he had never thought that Crona would return his feelings. He starred at her awhile, she wasn't doing anything
"Ok…I've never done this before.." She said after a bit.
"Crona.." Kid softly said back, maybe she was nervous..
"Yes?" Crona answered.
"Would you like me to start?" He responded, already getting ready to lean in, it might as well be symmetrical right?
"Actually I think I-I want to do it.." She muttered looking in his eyes.
"Ok." Kid said, loosing himself into her silvery blue eyes again.
"So um…close your eyes." Kid didn't even wait as he closed his eyes, shutting out the blue sky and everything else that bothered him. It was just him and Crona right now.
"Ok." He answered parting his lips.
"Here you go…" Crona whispered.
"…." he waited for her lips to meet his.
"….." yup, any second now.
"…."aaannnnd now!
"….." now!
"…."...now?
"Um…Crona, I think you're supposed to lean in…" Kid said confused, was she scared?
"Huh? Why?" Kid was taken aback at this, she honestly sounded confused.
"?" What did she mean?
"Kid, I already gave it t-to you…"
"What?"
"The kiss, I already gave it to you." She said furrowing her eyebrows, she was looking at him like he had grown another head.
"What? I don't think you did." She hadn't done anything! Had he missed something? Oh man, did he space out and miss his first kiss?
"Um, it's in your hand.." She said looking away and pointing at his hand. Kid looked down and starred at a triangle shaped, tin foil wrapped...chocolate? "…"
"Kid?" She said.
"…." Wait. Chocolate?
"Kid!" She said a little louder this time.
"huh?" He answers.
"So, d-do you like it?" She said timidly looking hopefully at his face.
"Crona…" He said slowley still starring at his hand.
"Y-yes?" She replied cocking her head to the side.
"This is chocolate." He said stating the obvious.
"Yeah….it's a kiss…Tah-dah.." She cheered in the most cheerful way she could, which meant that it sounded a little deadpanned. This was a chololate kiss. So that's what she had meant about-, damn...and he had been really excited about it to.
"Oh." This was a total bummer, talk about anti-climacted endings.
"So d-do you like it?" She said looking at him in anticipation. But it was a sweet from Crona, which made it special. Besides, her face was just so sweet and caring, he couldn't show his dissapointment to a pretty face like that. "Sure, I mean of course. It's wonderful Crona, thank you. This was totally what I wanted…" He said, trying his best to sound as enthusiastic as possible. He smiled at Crona with his pearly whites.
"O-ok! See you later!" Crona said pumped up. Good, he had been convincing! Crona ran off happily at having made one of her friends happy.
"…." This was all right, chocolates were good. He didn't really want that kiss all that much anyways, he could wait a little.
"..." Yup sir, he did not need that kiss, he really did want chocolate. Kid stood straight as a board as he thought this over alone, starring at Crona's retreating back-, crap who was he kidding!
"CRONA WAIT!"
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A/N: Ok! Here's the first chapter rewritten! Tell me if you're all cool with this.
Wasn't sure if I should just leave this or not, but your reviews inspired me! And I'll keep the rest of the chapters non-all-dialouge since most of you guys voted to keep it like chapter too. By the way just in case some of you guys like the first chapy just the way it was, I kept it in the format I submitted it the first time! So just ignore Kid's thoughts and youz gots the first version!
(1) That was inspired by a music vid I say on Youtube, 'too weird too normal?" it was a vid for Death the Kid
Disclaimer: Don't own that video or youtube *raises hands up*
idk if I had to do that or not, but...I just don't want to get my ass sued.
(2) Yeah...come on just picture it! Kid has a plushie? rofl! That would be sooooo cute! And it's symmetrical!
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*Gets down on knees like Kid: PWEASE! PWEASE!
