Akito Uzurano: First off, I'd like to thank Xamusel for letting me use this concept, as well as Takeshi Yamato for agreeing to work with me on this. Since he and I have Xamusel as a mutual friend, we thought it might do some good to get this completed this way.
Also, as this story is a rated M story, please be advised that there will be things not fit for those under the age of 18 (even though the M rating is for those 16 and up)... giving you that warning now.
So, without further ado… here we go!
Disclaimer: Akito Uzurano and Takeshi Yamato do not own anything regarding the story except for specific characters (except Kyou Yamato, the property of Xamusel, who was given to us for use in this project).
Mobile Suit Gundam SEED Revised
Story originally written by Xamusel, now rewritten by Akito Uzurano and Takeshi Yamato
Phase 000 - Prologue
March 25th, Cosmic Era 68
A trio of young teenagers, a boy and two girls, were standing in the middle of a pathway in the spring season, full of cherry blossoms floating around the air. The boy had dark blue hair and aquamarine eyes, while the girls in front of him had chestnut brown hair and amethyst hair for the elder of the two, and sky blue hair and amethyst eyes for the younger.
"The PLANTs and Earth will see eye to eye," the boy said to the girls. "There will be no war."
"Are you sure, Athrun-kun?" the younger of the girls asked the boy. "For all we know, the United Nations might have a war come about sooner than later."
"I'm sure," Athrun Zala replied. "The evacuation doesn't mean a thing. You'll be joining me in the PLANTs, right, Kira-chan, Kyou-chan?"
"I dunno… onee-chan and I have little reason to disobey our parents about going with them," Kyou Yamato answered. "We're not sure if we're headed for the PLANTs at all, you see."
"Yeah, they're seriously considering heading to Heliopolis," Kira Yamato added. "It's out of the way, and decidedly neutral."
"I see," Athrun sighed dejectedly. "Well, hopefully, we won't end up in the middle of a battlefield together, with me fighting Orb… considering how the PLANTs tend to act at times, I'm just glad that war hasn't sprung yet."
"Agreed," Kira replied. "Well, let's at least try and keep in touch, alright?"
Athrun nodded. "Alright," he said.
Kyou put a hand to her chin, asking, "Now… is there any way for us to talk with your fiance about getting tickets to her next concert?"
Athrun chuckled a bit. "I'll see what I can do," he said. "Though honestly, I don't think that's going to work out - I see Lacus more as a sister than anything."
Kira then looked at the two. "I'll let you two keep talking," she said. "I need to take care of something. See you back at home, Kyou-chan!"
"Huh?" Kyou looked at her elder sister. "Onee-chan? What are you- HEY!"
Athrun watched as Kira ran off. "Wow," he remarked. "Guess what she needs to do is rather important."
"I never knew onee-chan was like that…" Kyou commented. "What could she be running after? A boy that she wants to pummel for owing her money?"
"Who knows?" Athrun replied. "And what do you mean owing her money?"
"As far as I remember, she paid someone's tab at a restaurant about a mile from where we live, but the boy who she paid for didn't pay her back yet…" Kyou answered. "She's pretty stingy with her money sometimes."
Athrun winced. "Well, hopefully she can get him to pay her back without much bloodshed…"
#
As it turned out…
"Hey, Akito-kun!" Kira called out as she ran up to another boy.
This boy, a young teenager with blonde hair and heterochromia, namely a blue left eye and a green right, turned around to face Kira and blinked. "Huh? I thought I was supposed to be unnoticeable…? Wait, Kira-chan?!"
"Good to see you again, Akito-kun," Kira replied. "I had something of a favor to ask."
Blinking, Akito Uzurano asked, "Um… what sort of favor is it you have?"
"You introduced me to magic when we first met, Akito-kun," Kira replied. "And you said I had a lot of potential as well… I want you to teach me."
Standing stock still, Akito was about to teeter on the edge when he was caught by Kira, holding his wrist. "Um… thanks, Kira-chan… but, seriously, why do you want me to teach you?"
"You're the only magic user I know, Akito-kun," Kira replied. "I mean, I've learned that Takeshi-nii's also training in magic, but for some reason I'd rather not learn under his teacher, and learning from him directly might be awkward… and, to be honest… I would like to get to know you better, even as you teach me."
Blinking again, Akito realized that there was absolutely no arguing on this with his friend, so he sighed. "Alright, Kira-chan, I'll teach you. However… don't take this road if you want quick results. You'll need to have patience and a hell of a lot of dedication, especially to do the more advanced stuff. Even knowing all this, do you still wish to learn under me… Kira-chan?"
"Yes," Kira replied. "I do… help me learn the ways of magic, Akito-kun."
"All right, then," Akito answered. "I'll help you learn the ways of magic. For now, though, I need to know this bit of info. Are you going to move to Heliopolis any time soon?"
"My parents are considering it, to get away from the war," Kira replied.
"Good to know… that means we can start your training there, as soon as you can move to your new home," Akito explained. "Now, what say you to a hot fudge sundae, Kira-chan?"
Kira grinned. "That would be great, Akito-kun!" she said. "Thank you!"
"It is my pleasure, your majesty Queen Yamato Kira," Akito bowed with one hand under his torso, the other outstretched behind him. "Now, your majesty… which ice cream parlor wouldst thou wish to dine at?"
Kira giggled at Akito as the two headed off.
Though part of her was curious what her older brother was learning now…
#
Meanwhile, elsewhere in Copernicus…
Takeshi Yamato, sharing the same hair and eye color as Kira only with his hair in a buzz cut, was blushing as he'd finished explaining to his girlfriend Sayane (who had waist-length hair, blue eyes, a slender figure, and a D-Cup bosom) just what his teacher had told him.
Takeshi had actually almost finished his training as a Mage. In order to 'graduate', he had been assigned a series of tasks by his teacher. Most of them had already been accomplished, but there was one last one - finding a Magical Partner, who served as a protector and assistant to a Mage, and gained their own magical powers as a result.
However, there was a very special ritual needed for the Partnership to set in…
"Let me get this straight… you're saying that you need to have sex with me to finish your Magical training?" Sayane questioned.
"Y… yeah," Takeshi replied, his blush deepening. "My Master was quite clear - all Mages have at least one Partner, and a Tantric Ritual is required for the bond to set in… And I love you so much, I wouldn't dream of asking anyone else, Sayane."
Sayane blinked at the loyalty to her that Takeshi had, before she sighed. "Not saying that I believe you, Takeshi, but, well… what comes out of it for me if I agreed and we finally do it?"
"You'd gain your own magic, which I could help you train, for one," Takeshi replied. "Also, I think Partners can gain unique items or weapons specifically tailored to their skills and personalities."
Sayane blinked, before she pulled Takeshi into her apartment and closed the door behind her. "I take it the reason you've been celibate before was because of your training, Takeshi?" she asked him.
"Yeah," he said. "Never understood why my Master didn't want me having sex before my training was done… makes a bit more sense now." He chuckled, before he frowned again. "Also, apparently Mages can, and often do, have more than one Partner… They don't need them right off the bat, many Mages often just starting with one… and I wouldn't ask anyone else to join us unless you approved…"
"Go ahead, Takeshi," Sayane said, catching her boyfriend off guard. "I… honestly, I wanted to be the, and I mean this, 'Head Bitch' of a harem for a rather long time… ever since I'd gone through puberty. Believe me, you have absolutely no idea what this means to me, the effective Alpha of your own harem."
Takeshi blinked, wide-eyed, before he smiled. "Thank you, Sayane…" he said, before he claimed her lips in a kiss.
Sayane moaned into the kiss, mentally cheering at her boyfriend's boldness. Before too much longer, she saw him part from her lips, leading her to say, "No gentleness for me, Takeshi… dominate me in every way possible. Hell, when we get to the bedroom, you can even trash my clothes I have on!"
Takeshi nodded, before kissing her more forcefully, practically shoving his tongue down her throat as he guided them towards the bedroom.
Sayane moaned even more into the kiss than the previous one, feeling the passion coming from her boyfriend, even with her really high libido. Eventually, they made it to the bedroom, and they made it to the bed itself shortly after.
Takeshi pushed Sayane onto the bed, tearing her shirt free from her body as he began kissing his way down her body, ripping her bra off as he reached her breasts, pausing for a moment to suckle on them before going lower.
Sayane moaned into the room around her, even as Takeshi did what she wanted, to be dominated. Even so, she still had some clothes left, and she was sure that he would need a… slave to help him.
Takeshi tore her skirt away as he reached her waistline, before he did the same to her panties, exposing her damp pussy, causing his developing erection to harden further. "You're already so wet, Sayane…" he said, before bending down to lick at her slit.
"Ahn~!" Sayane moaned in pleasure, tongue hanging out of her mouth and eyes rolled into the back of her head, unable to think even the slightest bit coherently. "More… more… I want MORE!"
Takeshi dove in, continuing to lick at her slit and begin probing her depths. He knew not to bring her over the edge, though - part of the Tantric Ritual was for them both to release at the same time. In the future, they might have more flexibility, but for this first time, they needed to cum as one.
"Ahn… Ma… master," Sayane said, getting Takeshi's attention again. "What do you require of this lowly slave?"
Takeshi grinned as he got up from her crotch. "Strip me," he ordered her.
"Yes, master!" Sayane did as she was told to, taking Takeshi's clothes off carefully to reveal his birthday suit… and incredibly endowed cock, one that hit her in the face when she wasn't careful.
"Now, lay back on the bed," he commanded.
"Yes, master!" Sayane did that, too.
Takeshi then mounted the bed over her, carefully positioning his cock at her entrance before pushing it in.
Sayane moaned in pleasure, feeling the girth of Takeshi's cock fill her very being, all before he reached the inner barrier to her virginity.
Takeshi pulled back slightly, before thrusting forward, breaking past her hymen and fully sheathing himself within her.
Sayane screamed in pain as her hymen was destroyed, only for the pain to subside faster than expected. As soon as the pain went away, Sayane started moaning in pleasure again… he was so big, so thick, it was amazing!
Takeshi grunted as he began thrusting within her. Her pussy was so tight… it seemed to continually be sucking him in whenever he pulled out! He could feel his pleasure approaching its limits as his cock began to throb, but he did his best to hold it back - he needed to wait for Sayane to cum before he could.
"Master… I'm… about… to… cum!" Sayane yelled for the world to hear.
"M… Me, too… Sayane!" Takeshi yelled back. "Cum with me!"
With a wordless yell, Sayane released the load she was having, even as Takeshi shot his baby batter into her.
As the two rode out their orgasms, Takeshi could feel the magical bond settling between them, bestowing Sayane with her own magical power that was tied to, and yet different from, his own. As they came down from their highs, he rolled over so he was on his back on the bed, Sayane resting atop him, his cock still in her pussy. "Sayane… I love you so much…" he whispered.
"I love you, too, Takeshi…" Sayane whispered back as she started to feel the effects of what she did just now.
"Can you feel it?" Takeshi asked her. "The new bond between us… and the new power you possess?"
"Yes… I can," Sayane answered. "But… for now, I need to sleep this off. Good night."
Takeshi chuckled, feeling tired, himself. "Good night, Sayane…" he whispered, his eyelids drooping closed.
They could begin her training tomorrow…
#
March 26th, Cosmic Era 68
"Hurry up, onee-chan, onii-chan! The next flight to Heliopolis is about to leave without us!" Kyou called out, headed towards the terminal.
"Slow up, Kyou!" Kira called out after Kyou. "Not all of us are as energetic as you are!"
Takeshi, Sayane next to him, chuckled. "She sure is eager," he remarked.
"I'm glad I was headed for Heliopolis as it stands… I don't want to be away from you after what we did," Sayane said.
"Onii-chan… you never mentioned what you did with Sayane-san last night that made you come home super late," Kyou said.
Takeshi and Sayane both flushed. "Well… it was a very special activity," he said. "Something that can only be done with two people."
"Yes, the sort of thing you're too young to know about," Sayane added.
Kyou blinked, before she narrowed her eyes. "I hope you two aren't trying to pull wool over my eyes, because you have another thing coming in that regard."
Before Takeshi could reply, Kira interjected with, "And I'm hopeful you don't need to have a Shotgun Wedding, Takeshi-nii."
As Kyou attempted to process the information Kira had brought up, she looked at her flight info again, realizing that the flight she needed was a fair distance away. "I'll hurry on ahead of you, onee-chan, onii-chan!"
Kira looked at her flight info, before looking up to see Kyou was running in the wrong direction. "Kyou-imouto, wait!" she called out, but Kyou was already out of earshot.
"I wonder if she got the wrong flight info due to a mixup?" Takeshi asked.
Sayane could only shrug her shoulders in confusion. Before she could say anything…
"Excuse me, I think I'm lost," an orange-haired young man said from near their position. "Which way is it to Flight Number 1010220H?"
…an interruption happened.
"Follow us," Takeshi replied. "That's the flight we're taking… you heading to Heliopolis, too?"
"Huh? Heliopolis?!" the young man shot out. "I thought I was headed for the PLANTs!"
"Let me see your flight info," Takeshi said, taking the sheet from the young man. "Yeah, that's our flight to Heliopolis - must have been some kind of mix-up."
"Ugh… just great," the young man muttered, head drooped to face the ground. "My life sucks… well, at least I can contact my mom about this later, to see what happened."
Takeshi nodded. "Yeah… hopefully we can figure out what happened… I'm thinking another member of our party had a similar mix up, since she ran in completely the wrong direction after looking at her own flight info."
"Okay, that's not fun," the young man sighed. "I hope this can be resolved, and that she can get switched with me, in this case." Looking up, he said, "The name's Rusty McKenzie. What about you guys?"
"Takeshi Yamato," Takeshi replied, introducing himself. "This is my girlfriend, Sayane Tokiha, and my younger sister, Kira." Both of the aforementioned women nodded as they were introduced. "The member of our party who ran the other direction is Kira and my youngest sister, Kyou."
"Pleased to meet you three, at least," Rusty said. "Though… what about any other relatives?"
"We're going to Heliopolis with our parents, Haruma and Caridad," Takeshi informed. "Don't think they've said anything about other living relatives."
"I see… well, at least you have a functional family, compared to having both parents divorce," Rusty said, looking down. "My father is the PLANT councilman Jeremy Maxwell… I was forced to take my mom's maiden name."
"Ouch," Kira remarked. "Well, once we get to Heliopolis, we can try getting in touch with her, see what the mix-up is."
"Oi! Kira-chan!" Akito called out from a fair distance ahead of the group. "The flight's about to call for all passengers in five minutes!"
Kira's eyes widened. "Thanks, Akito-kun!" she called out. "Come on, you three, let's go!"
"H-hey!" Rusty yelled out as Kira grabbed onto his wrist and pulled him along for the trip to the terminal. "Slow down, will ya?!"
Takeshi just chuckled as he and Sayane ran after them. "She's rather energetic, too," he remarked.
"I think I have yet to meet a non-energetic Yamato," Sayane giggled.
Takeshi chuckled again. "True," he said. "Anyway, let's hurry!"
February 3rd, Cosmic Era 70
A locked door held a lot of mysteries, mainly 'what's on the other side of this door?', and 'what's going on in the room on the other side?'. Sometimes, the reward for solving the mystery was good, but… there were times when the reward was negative.
This would be one of those times when the reward was negative.
A group of 22 people decided to meet in this room in Copernicus City, 21 of them having agreed to use Astral Projections to meet in a room full of top-secret United Nations files, while the last one was the one to enter via the door that he almost immediately locked behind him. "Okay, everyone," the man to arrive via the door said. "The acceptance phrase is 'From the Gates of Yerushalayim comes the Throne of the Divine', am I wrong?"
"That is correct," one of the projections said.
"And now, let us commence the 637th meeting of the Council," a second projection said from their spot.
"First, what do you have to report?" the first projection asked the one to come in via the door.
"The UN has gotten complacent on the issue of the inferiors, Magician," the newcomer said. "They're willing to let them have autonomy and free will… we need to stop this mess now!"
"We will, Fool," the one known as 'Magician' said. "But first, we need to determine 'how'. Does anyone have any ideas?"
"If I may, Lord Magician?" a female projection spoke up. "It is with great pride that I can safely say the younger of the Azrael brothers will be of great use to us, considering that his group has been meaning to kickstart a war with the inferiors for a long time. He is completely malleable and someone that will listen to us without problems… supposing we hide our true nature to him."
"A good idea, High Priestess," Magician replied. "Justice, would you take care of that?"
"With pleasure… supposing I can keep my younger daughter out of the crossfire of taint," Justice said. "My eldest… is too much a rebel for the right training to hold, regrettably."
"I see," Magician informed. "What do you wish the rest of us to do regarding your daughters? Do you want help with the youngest? And do you want us to… deal with… your eldest?"
"I would prefer it if my youngest was on Heliopolis, where she would meet with her betrothed, who happens to be in service to Judgement's family… the only one of his ilk to make it onto the Council," Justice said.
"Very well," Judgement said. "I shall make the arrangements."
"And what of your eldest?" Magician enquired again. "Do you want her… dealt with?"
"Only if she manages to become a threat to our existence, one that can't be overlooked," Justice said. "For now, her magical power is severely limited, which will mean that it would take a lot of effort to restore her to better power."
"Very well," Magician replied. "And what of the search for Newtypes? How is that going, Tower?"
"Regrettably, not going so well," Tower answered. "Our scrying spells are being jammed whenever we look for Newtypes… not a good thing to consider."
"Agreed," Magician replied. "There could be another group out there, hiding new Newtypes from our gaze..."
"Whatever the case might be, our first step in thoroughly defeating the inferiors is to destroy the UN and replace it with a puppet government of our own," the as yet unnamed figure said. "We mustn't let anyone get in the way… no matter what."
"Yes, World," Fool said, before his ears picked up on something. "Did any of you hear that?"
"I did not hear anything," Magician replied, soon followed by head shakes from the rest of the assembled figures. "What did you hear, Fool?"
"It's probably my imagination, actually," Fool said. "For a moment, I thought that someone was spying on us… but, that was discarded because hardly anyone ever comes into this part of the UN building."
"I see…" Magician replied. "Well, we should be cautious, in case someone was spying on us. Does anyone else have anything to discuss?"
With a chorus of "no" answers, World coughed into his hand, saying, "Alright… with that, this meeting is adjourned."
The group nodded, before the figures began disappearing as they canceled their projections, one by one.
None of them realized that they had been spied on… by one of the people they had sworn to destroy. 'I have to inform Chairman Clyne about this catastrophe in the making!' the spy thought as he ran in the direction of the space port.
(BGM: Kalafina - "Heavenly Blue" [Opening Version])
(Instrumentals)
A stream of water flows and parts around the feet of a younger, roughly nine years old, version of Kira Yamato, before the camera pans up to the left side of her face, a cheery innocence in her eyes. Standing behind her is a 15-16-year old version of her, facing the other way, steel in her eyes.
(Kimi ga miru yume wa [The dream you have])
Akito Uzurano looks behind his left shoulder and sees Kira sleeping while doing her magical studies in his house, somehow making things float while dreaming of something, before he goes back to work on his own research.
(Furui INKU de kami ni kaita inori no you [Is like a prayer in ink on parchment])
Flay Allster pulls a book off a library shelf, flips through the pages, and puts it back, a sigh on her lips.
(Chiisana sono te ga sugaru mono mo [The thing that your small hands cling onto])
Kyou Yamato is seen in a firing range, shooting her pistol at a target, before ejecting the clip and showing that she hit the target through the heart multiple times.
(Ima wa mada doko ni mo nai [Does not yet exist])
Takeshi Yamato is seen practicing his fire spells, with Sayane Tokiha practicing her wind spells, working together in unison to create a combination spell.
(Soredemo kimi no yukumichi wo [Even so I wish to protect])
Rusty McKenzie is seen making a model of a robot his friend developed, before he wistfully looks in the direction of the spaceport in Heliopolis, as if wondering about a life he would never have.
(Kirei na mono wa kirei na mama de [That road you will travel down])
Athrun Zala looks up from a model of a Mobile Suit to see Kyou walking over to him in a blue sundress, extending a hand to him, before he takes said hand and walks with her.
(Mamori tsuzuketai to omou yo [And to keep what's beautiful as beautiful])
An image of Rau Le Creuset gets erased as another image replaces it, one of a man who wears a red uniform and has a mask and helmet on his head, with a grim grin on his face.
(Sora to mizu ga hoshi wo somete [The sky and water dye the Earth])
A bright sunny sky shows itself to two different people, both of whom are laying down and holding a hand up to the sky above, though both are separated by a split screen.
(Awaku niji wo egaite chitte [And paint a fleeting rainbow, scattering])
The one on the left, Cagalli Yula Athha, is laying in a shallow body of water as the sun beats down on her face, while the one on the right, Lacus Clyne, is laying on a grassy field, with both protecting their eyes in sync and eventually laying their hands back down next to them.
(Mabushii yoru kimi ga utau [On this brilliant night you sing])
Kyou is seen inside the cockpit of a blue GINN shooting down a Nuclear Missile that was getting dangerously close to Junius 7, while Athrun cries tears of sorrow and joy, sorrow for his mother, and joy for Junius 7 staying intact. Kira watches the news on the TV with her family, while Flay gets told the news from her older sister Linda Allster, with the true aggressors are seen seething at the news.
(Koe wa dokomade todoku no darou [How far will your voice reach])
The man in the helmet and mask stands on a command deck, giving orders to his subordinates, while Jeremy Maxwell gives off an evil smirk as an explosion the size of Long Island hits the Atlantic Federation, with a Mobile Armor shooting encased fire and ice at an off-screen target, while a ZAFT warship (not Nazca or Laurasia-class) fires off a large amount of missiles in all directions.
(Akogare no sumau [We have just fallen in love])
A snow globe showing Mu and the masked man on the outside edge is soon formed into the Planet Earth.
(Aoi hoshi no hikari [With the light of the blue Earth])
The Planet Earth is soon made into a ball of light, being held by Stella Louissier, who closes her eyes in the middle of doing so.
(Tada bokura wa koi wo shite [That we longed to live on])
Kira, in the cockpit of the Strike Gundam, starts activating her unit's features from within. Kyou, in the meantime, is seen inside the cockpit of the Vanguard Gundam with a map of the area of the debris belt, before turning off the map and grunting in her Mobile Suit.
(Tatta hitotsu no mirai no tame ni [We sing these arias])
The sun starts shining over the Earth, with the Archangel bridge getting the benefit of the light in their dark times.
(Ima no subete kanadete miru [For the sake of just that one future])
In the cockpit of Huntsman Gundam, Akito is seen looking at the approaching sunlight from the east side of the Earth's orbit, while the Lion Gundam and Eagle Gundam flank him and watch the sunlight arrive.
(Tobitatsu yo [We will take off])
Cagalli is seen inside the Lion Gundam's cockpit, looking decidedly grim about something.
(Mada kurai sora e [Towards the black of the night sky])
Flay is seen inside the Eagle Gundam's cockpit, just as she raises her unit's beam rifle at an off-screen enemy, sorrow and determination in her eyes.
Takeshi Yamato: And so it begins again… with a bit of smut right from the get-go!
OK, before we go any further, let me just say this - unlike when Xam, Astral, and I did the original SEED Revised, Akito and I have agreed that we will not do MASSIVE Harems. There will still be Harems, yes, but with no more than four girls per harem. Takeshi, himself, will have three lovers - and you'll find out who the other two are next chapter.
Also, on Magical Partnerships - think of them like Pactios from the Negima series, only requiring a full-on Tantric Ritual as opposed to a simple kiss for a Pactio. They have all of the same advantages as Negima Pactios, however.
Next chapter, we get to the start of the main story. Definitely look forward to that - I know I am. :D
