This is my first ever story ! SO please be nice to me ! But tell me anything that could make the story better !

Finally after the long night Drake Merwin finally rose from his bed , we gumbled and walked over to the mirror stomping loud enough to wake up Caine , Drake looked over and saw that he woke up Caine and walked over to the mirror looking at himself with dirty blonde hair and eyes the colour as a very delicate grey , he scruffed his hair and walked over to his bed, ahhh Caine moned finally getting up .'Have you seen the new girl Lily yet ? '' Caine said in very tired deep voice "no" drake said ''well shes pretty hot'' ''do you think i care Caine and dont you have a girlfriend '' drake said couriously ''yes i do drake '' just checking '' he replyed . They put on there Coates uniform a navy blue formal jacket with the Coates Logo on it with a white formal shirt ,a gold and red tie and Navy blue trousers, ''im going to the cafe''' drake said '' hold up ll come with you'' '' hurry up then i dont wanna wait all day , the stupid kids at this school are going to eat all my food '' '' okay lets go then'' Caine replied.

Caine and Drake went downstairs and down the corridoors and entered the caffiteria there was Diana waiting for them , ''Hurry up'' Diana yelled over , Everyone in the caffitria quietend down, Caine and Drake walked over To Diana ''Finally'' ''Oh shut up Diana and quit your complaining'' Drake said with a smurk. '' Im getting food'' ''wait for me babe'' ''Babe'' mimiced Drake . Diana slaped him on the head and walked off following Caine ''bitch'' he mumbled Diana look at him with deadly glear .

Here you go Lily this is your timetable and this is your dorm key i will help you find your dorm and we shall get you setteld in the office lady said , She was quite young she looked like she was a business woman whos ment to be off designing somthing complicated, Lily picked up all of the notices that she got given ontop of her folders books , Lily tryed to grab as much as she could but droped it all as soon as she picked it up , 'Craap ! ' uhh Lily do you want a hand with that ? uhh.. Yes please the office lady took some off Lily things and began to walk towards the caffiteria , I Think i can carry the stuff now i just didnt have a hold of it properly Lily said , Okay here are your things. Thanks Miss ' anytime honey ' , Lily could see the cafe from where they were now she was very nervous to walk though the cafe for the second time since the Coats opening day .

Drake was making his way back with his tray filled of Bacon , Eggs and butterd toast it smellt so good. ;' yum i cant wait to eat it , Wow drake you seem to look forward to eating this discusting food Caine laughed, to Diana this look horried somthing a hobo would eat , anything thing food wise looks good to drake cos hes being eating this crap since he could walk diana smurked , Caine Laughed and continued back to the table .

Lily walked in to the cafferteria she ran a bit to try to catch up with the office lady she thought her name was Miss Mitchell but she could be wrong ,

''SMAACCKK'' Lily blindedly ran into Drake getting both of them covered on gross discusting food, WHAT THE FUCK WAS THAT ! Drake yelled accross the cafe , Imm imm Sooo so-soo-sorr... SHUT UP BEFORE I HIT YOU INTO A COMA ! Lily began to collect tears in her eyes, Was this the whore you were talking about befor Caine, Pathetic. Disgusting. Your going to pay for ruining my breakfast yoou... Oi ! Drake Shut up and leave her alone shes new here Miss Mitchell said, Oh shut up you 25 year-old-woman who has no husband no friends and has a cat that she calls because she is lonley and has nothing to do apart from teaching at a freaking trouble school who has troubled children. Miss Mitchell Began to get tears in her eyes, Oh get over your self Drake , C'mon Lily ill take you to yor dorm and get your showerd and dressed. Umm... Okay .. Lily said confused , Drake im sorry for running into you , DONT do that ever again or i will cut you and laugh while you cry and then sell your organs for money for a better knife , Lily petrified she began to back up , I Mean dont get me wrong you would look hot for a skin coat .. but still it might be handy to get a little something befor i skin you , Hmm .. Good Idea Drake said to himself. . Come here Drake said to Lily, She crept closer about 2 ft. No i said come here i want to tell you somthing , Lily walked over to him , I Want to whisper somthing to you . Drake grabed her head and said , If you embaress me like that again i will hurt you . I Will give you about 2 seconds till i punch your face in , Oh and you are pretty hot Caine was right i wouldnt mind getting a bit of somthing somthing outta you aye , Wouldnt that be nice huh ? Hahaha Ill get you when i want you . Now Your 2 seconds are starting now.

Lily Ran , But Drake grabbed her hair and SMAACCK . Across the face Lily fell to the ground , Diana stood up walked over to Drake and smacked Drake across the back of the the Fuck ? Drake yelled acros the cafe, Shut up you Dick . Stop showing off you psychopath and get over your self... Honestly. Faaaaaark.

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