OK, so I have decided to rewrite this chapter due to the crappy way I wrote it so here goes I guess...
Chapter 1
It was back in the end of senior year when Jimmy decided to be drafted into the army, and since nothing can ever separate the three amigops (If that's how you spell it) Carl and Sheen decided to be drafted as well, and its been them since then always training together doing whatever needed to be done, and its already been one whole year since they got drafted. As Jimmy laid in his cot staring at the roof he began to think about his childhood friends and how much they changed. Sheen and Libby started dating in 10th grade and their still going strong, come to think of it Jimmy always knew they were meant to be together. Hell they should be they already have a kid together that's 2 years old in a couple days. Their kid was a girl and they decided to name her Elisabeth and she was the cutest thing ever. Elisabeth had her moms hair but Sheen's skin to say the least Jimmy hoped she was more like her mom then Sheen cause one Sheen is enough. Also Sheen already told Jimmy that he couldn't wait to go back home and ask her hand in marriage Jimmy couldn't help but feel happy for his childhood friend. Next their was Carl he changed a lot in high school, Carl actually slimmed down in junior year, got control over his allergies and actually got pretty buff ever since he started working out with Sheen and Jimmy. His love life is a sore subject he is currently not dating anyone but hes working on it with Britney. Yeah shocker but they been dating off and on since junior year but Carl seems to be handling it pretty well. As Jimmy laid there he still couldn't sleep, so he thought about his life it had some ups and downs but who's life doesn't? Jimmy thought about his school years about his hair how it was in that ice cream style and how much Cindy used to tease how much it looked like a Hershey Kiss. He smiled to himself when thinking about how he and Cindy was, having a love hate thing in elementary then in middle school became friends then in high school started becoming closer flirting with each other then finally in junior year started dating. How much he missed her, "Jimmy you up?' came the voice of Sheen. "Yeah sheen?' asked Jimmy as continued to stare at the ceiling. "How much longer until we can go home?" asked Sheen as he looked at a picture of himself holding Libby who was holding Elisabeth. "Just two more weeks then we can go visit Retroville" Jimmy said still smiling. "Man these next two weeks is going to take forever!" yelled Sheen as he collapsed on his own cot "Sheen shut the fuck up I'm tired" said Carl still facing the wall trying to sleep. "Jeez someone woke up on the wrong side of the cot, go back to sleep" said Sheen as he made a face to Carl then smiled and laid back down. "Night Sheen" said Jimmy as he closed his eyes and let sleep take him.
It was the middle of the night when it happened. a huge explosion was heard as Jimmy woke up in a jolt trying to process what's happening. It was the loudest explosion Jimmy ever heard even with all the inventions that blew up on him. "Jimmy get up camp under attack!" Sheen said as he grabbed the rifle by his bed side and ran outside. Even though Jimmy's ears were ringing like crazy he managed to stand up. "Jim move your ass we gotta go!" yelled Carl as he grabbed his sniper rifle and pistol and followed Sheen and ran outside. As the ringing in Jimmy's ear's started to subside it was replaced with yelling, gunshots and explosions. "Fuck!" yelled Jimmy as he grabbed his own rifle and first aid kit and followed Sheen and Carl and ran outside.
End of chapter 1
Hope its better now,
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