Okay I do NOT own Harry Potter!
As I'm sure u kno; anywho I decided to redo my original story. See if it's any better.
Enjoy!
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Hermione woke up to a soft tapping at her window; she groggily got up and went to her window. She peered through the window and saw a large black horned-owl with bright amber eyes and a silver star on its head. She smiled at the owl and opened the window so the owl could get in.
"Why hello Silver Star I haven't seen you in forever. How's my dear owl?" Hermione asked as she stroked the owl's soft wings. The owl leaned into her touch and made a soft approving noise causing Hermione to giggle as she saw a note attached to her owl's leg.
"Hm, I wonder what it says?" Hermione asked as she removed the note from the owl's leg. The owl flew on to a large branch and began to fall asleep. Hermione smiled at her owl, left her window slightly agape the window and went and sat down on her queen sized bed.
Hey Scarlett!
I miss you so much!
I sent Silver Star back because he was getting annoying.
Anywho I can't believe it's your final year at Hogwarts that is so awesome!
Of course you could have graduated with me but whatever
Haha anyway I'm sorry for leaving you in the middle of July
You know with 'losing' your parents and all.
It's a bummer but I have a few surprises for you this year
Okay I'll see you later
Love Emerald
Hermione smiled at the letter and put it in the drawer next to her. She looked around the room to see that everything she needed was packed into bags. She sighed and went back under the covers with a smile on her face. Hermione went into a deep sleep, dreaming of how her finale year would turn out.
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Hermione woke again this time to the gentle rays of the sun coming through her window. She groaned and turned to her side to see what time it was. Her alarm clock flashed 9:30 in bright red numbers.
"Bloody hell I only have an hour and a half to get to the station and be on that train!" Hermione yelled as she jumped out of bed and into her bathroom. She looked for her clothes that she set out the night before for her shower.
"Where the hell are they?" Hermione yelled as she looked around her bathroom. She ran back into her room and saw some clothes sitting on a dresser. She quickly ran to them to see a note attached to it.
Sorry Scarlett but your surprises start here
There is no way in hell I was going to let you leave with those clothes
So I sent Silver Moon to drop off these
Then I told her to bring the ones you set out last night
I mean really girl you need to not be so…PREDICTABLE!
Enjoy your clothes; I'm sure the guys will
Love Emerald
Hermione groaned and brought her clothes to her bathroom. She jumped into the shower and quickly took a shower. Once she was finished she dried off then wrapped her hair up in a towel. She got out and looked at her clothes that Emerald left.
Her clothes consisted of a white lacy thong and matching bra, a white short sleeved shirt with a red skull in the chest the shirt clung to her body like a second skin, a red plaid skirt that went mid-thigh, fishnet stockings and black three inch heeled boots.
"What the hell was Emerald thinking?" Hermione groaned as she quickly changed into her clothes. Hermione ran out of her room and put her towel and clothes into a basket and threw it into a chute that led to the laundry room. She then ran into her room and began to comb her hair; she looked into the mirror and smiled.
"Ugh I know I should be mad that these are not my normal clothes that I wear to Hogwarts but it is something I would so wear" Hermione said when she finished combing her hair. She quickly did a spell and all her luggage shrunk, she put that in her black messenger bag. She went over to her owl and took it out of its cage.
"Silver Star go to Hogwarts and wait for me please" Hermione said to her owl. The owl bowed his head then flew out of her open window. Hermione then ran down her stairs grabbed Crookshanks and put him in his carrier. She then ran outside locked the door then ran to her car and threw everything into the passenger side. She then drove very fast to the station, once she arrived grabbed her belongings and put it on the sidewalk. She did a spell and shrunk her car and put it in her bag; she then ran to the station and quickly ran through the portal.
Once Hermione made it through the portal she began to look for her friends. She finally saw Ginny putting her luggage into the train, so Hermione began to walk towards her red headed friend. Hermione went behind Ginny tapped Ginny's left shoulder, then when Ginny turned Hermione quickly went to Ginny's right so Ginny couldn't see her. When Ginny didn't see anyone she turned and gave slight shrink and put a hand over her heart.
"What the hell is wrong with you Mio-" Ginny began to say till she noticed Hermione's outfit.
"Hello to you too Ginny" Hermione giggled as she put her stuff with Ginny's.
"Hermione what the hell are you wearing?" Ginny asked "You look hot but I have never seen you wear those types of clothes"
"Oh these haha well Emerald gave them to me" Hermione said giggling.
"Emerald oh who's that?" Ginny asked wriggling her brows suggestively as the two girls boarded the train and began to walk to their compartment just as the train started to leave the station.
"Eww Gin that is nasty Emerald is my cousin" Hermione said as she rolled her eyes. The two finally found their compartment and went inside.
"Mio-" both Ron and Harry began to say till they saw her outfit.
"Hey guys" Hermione said as she sat with Ginny opposite of the boys.
"What the hell are you wearing?"
"Where is the rest of that outfit?"
"What were you thinking?"
"What have you done with the real Hermione?" Hermione and Ginny rolled their eyes at the boys.
"I'm wearing an outfit. This is the entire outfit. I was thinking that this is my favorite outfit. And I am Hermione" Hermione said as she answered the boys.
"B-bu-bu-" both boys began to say but Hermione lifted a finger to silence them.
"No buts that is the end of this discussion. Now how was your summer Ginny?" Hermione asked her best friend.
"Oh it was good, well other than these two gits talking about Quid-" Ginny began to say but the compartment door slid open.
"Hermione you are needed at the Head's compartment" a third year Hufflepuff boy said quietly.
"Okay thank you" Hermione said as she got up, the boy blushed and quickly walked out of the compartment.
"Oh I almost forgot that you were Head Girl congratulations" Ginny said.
"Yeah congrats Mione" both Ron and Harry said.
"Thanks, I'll be back in a little bit" Hermione said as she waved and walked out of the compartment. She walked to the front of the train and saw the Heads compartment; she heard Professor McGonagall talking to the Head Boy. Hermione sighed, took the Heads pin and put it on her shirt before quietly opening the door.
"Ah Miss Gra- Oh my" Professor McGonagall said in a shocked voice as she took in Hermione's appearance.
"Granger?" Draco asked shocked as he looked at Hermione.
"Hello Professor McGonagall" Hermione said as she took a seat next to Draco and across from Professor McGonagall.
"Malfoy" Hermione said in a sweet fake voice.
"Oh uh well let's begin now shall we. Congratulations to the both of you for making Head Boy and Girl this year. Now as I'm sure you know you will need to come up with dates for the dances, Hogsmeade visits and assign the Prefects dates to patrol the castle. You two will be sharing a dormitory with two different rooms; I will show to you dormitory, after dinner this evening. Now I know you two are from rival houses but I do expect you two to act appropriately. That is all, I will speak with you later tonight" Professor McGonagall said. She then left the compartment giving one disapproving glance at Hermione's outfit.
"Okay Malfoy I agree with Professor McGonagall we need to at least act civil. Now goodbye and I will see you after dinner" Hermione said as she got up and walked to the door.
"Granger what the bloody hell happened to you?" Draco sneered.
"If you must know my cousin gave me these clothes" Hermione said.
"Ha I knew you would never wear those types of clothes" Draco said smirking.
"Actually Emerald took these out of my closet, this just so happens to be one of my favorite outfits" Hermione said as she left the compartment.
"Emerald? Must be a muggle name" Draco said to himself as he too left the compartment to go back to his friends, he needed to tell Blaise about the mudblood.
After a few hours the train finally pulled to a stop. Hermione and her friends quickly got off the train and began to head to the carriages. When they finally arrived at Hogwarts they all walked into the Great Hall what they saw made everyone gasp.
"Hello my students it has been a while hasn't it?" an older man said as he stood behind a podium just in front of the professors table.
"P-Professor D-Dumbledore?" all the students (minus the first years since they were with Professor McGonagall) asked as they stared at their said to be dead Headmaster.
"Yes, is something wrong? Please take a seat at your tables so that the first years may come in and be sorted" Dumbledore said. The students all went to their seat but looked at the Headmaster as if he would disappear from their sight at any minute. Just then the first years walked through the door with Professor McGonagall leading them to the front.
Professor McGonagall began to sort out the first years (both) as Dumbledore went back to his normal seat at the Professor's table. Once each first year was put into their house Dumbledore rose to give his yearly speech.
"Open the doors!" yelled a voice "Open the bloody doors!" The students began to look around to see who was yelling. Nearly Headless Nick flew through the door and flew over towards the professors table.
"What's wrong Sir Nicholas?" Dumbledore asked the twinkle in his eyes seemed to brighten.
"There is a hooded person on a black Hippogriff flying through the castle being chased by Fluffy! They were headed this way!" Nick yelled.
Dumbledore's eyes seemed to light up more, but before her could say anything the Great Hall doors flew open. The students leaned towards the main isle to see what had opened the doors. Sure enough there was a person in a black hooded clock on a black Hippogriff flying down the hall and behind them was a three headed dog.
"Bloody hell!" a few students yelled. The cloaked figure and the Hippogriff flew through the doors; the figure then grabbed their wand and swished it so the door closed. The figure looked around the room and swished their wand again and all the students were lifted up and pushed up against the walls and a barrier was place in front of the students. Another barrier went in front of the professor's table and the barriers made it so nothing could go in or out of the barrier.
The figure jumped gracefully off the still flying hippogriff and pointed their wand at a window; the hippogriff bowed and flew out the now open window. The figure then ran to the door to seal it shut but was pushed back when Fluffy barged through the door. A grunt of pain could be heard as the figure was thrown across the room and landed painfully on the floor. The figure quickly got up and went to point their wand at the dog but one of the dogs head hit the figure causing them to drop their wand and hit one of the barriers.
"Fluffy please calm down" Hagrid said trying to get the dog's attention but the dog just ignored him.
The dog went over to the figure the middle head went down to sniff the figure his tail wagging. The figure jumped onto the dogs head and began to climb on the dog; the figure took out a music box and opened it to play soft music. The dog began to sway before lying down and falling asleep. The figure jumped off Fluffy and walked wearily towards their wand. Once they reached their wand, they flicked it and the dog was levitated off the floor. The figure then walked towards the Great Hall doors and flicked their wand again so the doors opened. The figure pointed their wand towards the open doors and the dog floated out the door, the doors closed once the dog was through it.
"Where did you take Fluffy?" Hagrid asked his voice raising some. The figure had their back towards the professors and their shoulders began to shake signaling that they were laughing. The figure waved their wand and the barriers disappeared, then they turned around to face the professors. The figure brought their hands up to the hood and took it off causing everyone but Dumbledore, McGonagall and Snape to gasp.
"Honestly Hagrid do you think I would do anything to hurt Fluffy?" a female voice said with a slight Spanish accent. She had black wavy hair that was still hidden in her cloak, bright green eyes and she stood around five foot seven.
"Welcome back Admeta it's so nice to see you again" Dumbledore said his eyes twinkling as he looked down at the girl.
"Good to see you too Professor" Admeta said smiling.
"I can see you still know how to make an entrance" McGonagall said looking sternly at Admeta.
"Yeah I know I'm awesome" Admeta said laughing "Here let me fix up this place eh?" She said as she twirled her left wrist and everything and everyone was where it was before.
"Humph haven't changed at all have you?" McGonagall asked giving her a heated look.
"Nope and don't plan on it" Admeta said smirking as she began to walk towards the professors table. As she walked by the tables, all of the students watched her in awe; the way she walked showed she had confidence and an attitude. Once she reached the professors table she smiled and hugged Dumbledore.
"My dear child please take off your cloak and sit with us, I was about to announce the Head Girl and Boy and then start the feast.
"Of course" she snapped her fingers and the cloak disappeared. She wore a black and green diagonally stripped shirt that had no left sleeve, the bottom of the shirt ended just below her large breasts, the right sleeve was cut into long shreds, (shirt looks like Pinks in Don't Let Me Get Me) she wore tight leather black pants with a few chains on each side, and black three inch heeled combat like boots.
"Admeta what on earth are you wearing?" McGonagall asked as she stared in disbelief at Admeta's clothes.
"Clothes" Admeta said raising a brow.
"That is the most inappropriate outfit I have seen in Hogwarts. And what is that in your ears, lip, nose and navel?" McGonagall asked still in shock.
"Piercings can't you tell?" Admeta said pouting.
"Now Admeta please take a seat so I may continue with my announcements so the students may eat" Dumbledore said in a serious voice but his eyes betraying him by twinkling.
"M'kay" Admeta said disappearing and reappearing in a seat next to Snape.
"Now as I was saying this year's Head Boy is Draco Malfoy" Dumbledore said. The Slytherin table all roared in applause, while the other tables kindly clapped, Draco stood and smirked before sitting down.
"And the Head Girl is Hermione Gra-" Dumbledore began to say but Admeta cleared her throat and gave him a look.
"Oh I mean Hermione Celebrus" Dumbledore said amused. All of the other tables minus Slytherin roared in applause.
"Celebrus?" a few students began to ask themselves.
"Yezir, that's our last name" Admeta said smiling.
"Admeta what are you doing here!"Hermione yelled.
"Now little cousin that's not very nice" Admeta said in a fake hurt voice "I said you would be getting surprises. This so happens to be one of them. So shut up"
"Whatever" Hermione grumbled.
"Oi Scarlett! Why do you still have your muggle born disguise on?" Admeta asked cocking her head to the side.
"Shush" Hermione glared at her cousin.
"Nope! Release!" Admeta said and pointed her wand at Hermione. A white light went towards Hermione and engulfed her. Once the light disappeared every student gasped. Hermione wore black three inch heels, black stockings that ended just above her knees, the school skirt that ended about mid-thigh (her butt seemed more firm), a white tight button up shirt that showed off her womanly body and larger breast, the traditional Gryffindor tie. Her once messy hair was now in soft ringlets that flowed down her back to about mid-back, her hair gave off a more golden tint, she had cat shaped eyes that were brown with an almost red tint, her freckles blended more into her skin, her lips were full and pink, and her face seemed more womanly with no baby fat. She had red stud earrings, a red stud in her cartilage and in her nose.
"Hermione?" Ginny, Ron, and Harry said in disbelief.
"Yes?" Hermione asked blushing.
"Told you that you would catch people's attention this year" Admeta said sticking her tongue out. She stopped sticking her tongue out and looked over at Snape with a raised brow.
"What?" Snape snapped.
"Professor Dumbledore we need to start dinner now Snape is hungry, his tummy said so, rather loudly I might add" Admeta said giving Snape an evil smirk.
"You little disrespecting child" Snape said glaring at her.
"Admeta's right let the dinner begin" Dumbledore said as the food suddenly appeared on the table. Everyone began to eat and talk, Admeta was conversing with most of the professors but mostly Snape, and Hermione was not answering any the questions her friends were asking.
"She is so weird" Pansy whispered to Blaise and Draco.
"Now that's not very nice" Admeta whispered in Pansy ear causing Pansy to gasp and drop her fork.
Blaise and Draco stared in awe at Admeta who had suddenly appeared as though through thin air. Admeta looked over at the two Slytherin boys, whose mouths where slightly agape, and winked before disappearing in a blink of an eye. The two boys blushed and quickly turned to the professors table to see Admeta talking to Snape, she looked at them in the corner of her eye and winked again and continued her conversation as though nothing happened.
"That was bloody amazing" Blaise whispered.
"H-how did she hear me?" Pansy asked wide eyed.
"She's an odd one that's for sure" Draco whispered as he glanced over at her.
'She looks so bloody hot. That outfit shows off her beautiful body so perfectly; her stomach is so toned and that navel piercing looks so sexy. She has beautiful long black wavy hair and her green cat like eyes look so sexy. She looks wonderful in green; she doesn't look older than any of us she has to be seventeen there is no way that she's older. Her arse looks so big and tight I just want to squeeze it, and her legs are so toned and long so easily to wrap around my body and I want to massage her supple breasts….Ugh stop that Draco you are a Malfoy we do not want women, women want us.'
"Are you alright mate?" Blaise asked.
"Yeah just thinking" Draco said. Dinner continued just as it normally would when dinner was over Dumbledore stood up which caused all the students to quiet down and look up at him.
"I would like the Eighth years along with the Seventh years to stay please" Dumbledore said. The entire First through Sixth years left and only Dumbledore, Snape, McGonagall, Sprout, Flitwick and Admeta -who had her feet propped on the table-, were left.
"Now as I'm sure most of you know I was killed during the war but as you can plainly see here I stand. I will answer your questions all in good time. I would first like to properly introduce Admeta Emerald Celebrus, Hogwarts greatest graduated student" Dumbledore said as he introduced Admeta. She disappeared and reappeared next to Dumbledore who stood at the podium.
"Impossible she doesn't look old enough to have graduated and none of us have seen her here" a Seventh year Ravenclaw girl said.
"True but I have already graduated from here so suck it" Admeta said.
"So how old are you? Are you using some sort of anti-aging spell?" another Ravenclaw girl asked.
"No! I'm only eighteen!" Admeta yelled glaring at the two girls.
"She graduated at the age of ten, she had private teachings. She needed to graduate early so she could go and live as a muggle" Dumbledore explained.
"So you are a muggle born?" Pansy asked.
"No pureblood" Admeta said.
"Now, now we can get to know each other later. She will be watching you in your classes and hopefully she will help you all excel in your magic. Please make her feel at home" Dumbledore said.
"What house will she be staying at?" a Seventh year Hufflepuff boy asked.
"I'll just stay with Scarlett that is if she and you don't mind Professor" Admeta said.
"That sounds wonderful. Do you accept Hermione?" Dumbledore asked.
"It's okay I don't mind sharing with Emerald" Hermione answered.
"Scarlett? Emerald?" a few student's mumbled.
"Middle names" both Admeta and Hermione said at the same time.
"Okay so now that you know that you will be watched and trained by her I expect you all to respect her. That is all, everyone is dismissed but Miss Parkinson, Mister Zabini, Miss Weasley, Mister Potter, Mister Weasley and the Celebrus's" Dumbledore said. All the other students filed out to go to their dorms.
"Now I know you all will want to go into the Heads dorm so I will allow it, you may even sleep in there though I will not stand for violence" Dumbledore said amused.
"Awww" Admeta said pouting and descending down the stairs.
"Now Admeta show them to the Heads room, once they know where it is at the rest of you may go back to your dorms" Dumbledore said.
"M'kay sir" Admeta said smiling "follow me losers" she said walking away with Hermione laughing next to her. Hermione and Admeta were in the front, their arms linked, the Slytherins walked on one side of the hall and the Griffindors on the other.
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Okay so that was my first Harry Potter story
Yaay!
Any who… review and tell me if you like it
