Yay! My first story. First full SGE story EVER!

Waiting

The children of Gavaldon waited. The wind rattled the branches of the trees and the children shivered.

Everyone over sixteen patrolled outside. Those the correct ages bit their covers to keep from crying; no one wanted to leave, not even the future Evil students. The younger ones, the ones still "children," were scared that the Schoolmaster would make an exception on the age.

A stranger to the village would be frightened as well. The grim faces of the guards, the boarded up windows and doors, the dead silence that pervaded the place; even the animals sensed the humans fear.

The dreaded night had come. The School Master was coming. Hopelessness filled the hearts of everyone, because they all knew, deep inside, that if they could stop him

they would have, long ago . . .

Yeah, it hasn't really begun yet. Tell me what you think! R&R Please!