This is my first story on here, so please don't be mean….

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Hopekit woke up to pretty sunlight. Her beautiful white fur lowed in the sun. Her gorgeous blue eyes turned different colors; like green, yellow, orange, and purple.

Her mother lay next to her; and her not- as- pretty amber eyes glowed.

"Hopekit, do you know what day it is?" she asked.

"No." Hopekit meowed.

"You become an apprentice today!" said her mother, whose name was Leaffurnace.

"Yay!" screamed Hopekit as she ran into the clearing where the cats were.

In the clearing was Skystar, a large, white, blind tom.

"Hopekit, you are now an apprentice." He said, "And I will be your mentor, Hopepaw, because you are really hot."

The clan nodded. Hopepaw lived in ThunderClan. The oldest cats in the clan were Dewscrewdriver, Amberelectricpencilsharpener, and Snowbutt.

Hopepaw followed Skystar out of camp. Suddenly a patrol of ShadowClan warriors jumped from the bushes!

"Die!" screamed Evilstar, a black tom with red eyes.

Five ShadowClan warriors attacked Hopepaw but she quickly killed them.

Finally she turned to see Skystar dead on the ground. Evilstar laughed and then ran away from the scene.

When she returned to camp, the Clan cheered for her.

"Hopepaw! Hopepaw! Hopepaw!"

The deputy of the Clan came up to her. "Hopepaw, for your bravery, I make you a warrior. You are now Hopelight!

He turned to the Clan. "Hopelight will be the new deputy of ThunderClan.

"Hopelight! Hopelight! Hopelight!" The Clan cheered.

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