Chapter one redux!

I've gone back and SUPER fixed my original few chapters so that they flow better. Not so much random scene changes, characters explain themselves better and like before, just made it generally less crap reading XD


"Big brother...why won't you love me?" Belarus said gritting her teeth, staring out the window. She sat in her room contemplating how she could go about making her brother love her, and then it hit her, she would find someone else to love and ignore him, "That would make him realize how much he's in love with me!" Simple stuff...one problem, who.

She sat in her room and thought about who would be the best subject. He needed to be cute, and funny, and easy to manipulate, and of course another country, lots of land with a ton of money, someone that would make Russia blind with jealousy and make him see that he was in love with her. China seems like a good choice, but, he's not really the kind of "cute" she was thinking of, plus that immortality thing is kind of creepy. Maybe England...nah, too old and grumpy. Then it hit her. "America!" she whispered in excitement at her realization " America is perfect!" She hated herself for saying that "He's rich, and he has all that land, and the bumbling idiot should be clay in my hands once he sees my incredible beauty, as was my brother, plus there was all that cold war tension between him and big brother, not to mention he is pretty cute." she said as a blush slowly crept onto her cheeks, much to her ire.

She dealt with political matters and told her boss she needed a bit of personal time. She pretty much just told him to kiss her ass and left.

That's that, with all matters dealt with, she would spend some time over at America's house. Belarus took the first flight to America's house, but not before telling Russia that she was going. He gave her a confused and slightly angry face before going back to what he was working on. She boarded her flight and took off for Eagleland.

On the flight over she started to think "Should I tell him that i'm just using him?" No, he might slam the door in my face, or pull a 'six shooter' on me." She then sat and assessed her situation. "Maybe I was too hasty to go over to America's house, he might not even let me in." She contemplated for awhile and then she said "I'll just tell him I wan't to spend more time with him maybe bat my eyelashes a bit to win him over" she said with a devilish grin on her face.

"Yea yea, i'm coming" America said with a blank look on his face. "Who the hell is at my door at..." he looks at his phone "four in the morning!" he opens the door to reveal someone he'd never expect... Belarus. "Wha- what the hell are you doing here Bel?" America said sleepily rubbing his eye (an action that Belarus found confirmed America's cuteness).

"I wanted to spend s-s-some time with you America." Belarus blurted out, as she averted her gaze to hide her quickly reddening cheeks. "Russia, Ukraine, even Lithuania...they've all been so busy lately that there no one to have any kind of fun with, s-so I thought, who is the funnest person on this whole Earth?" she kept her gaze to the ground for a while before peering up at him.

America looked confused for a moment and just stood there, it made Belarus uncomfortable, and for a second she thought he might see through her, but then he sleepily smiles and says "That's great! You know dude, I was getting kinda bored by myself over here! I was totally planning on visiting Japan next week too! But I think it might be a little late to do anything, and you look tired." He welcomed her in and she slowly followed America though his house until he led her to his living room "I don't really have any other beds but the couch is surprisingly comfy. I'll get you a pillow and blanket...do you have a change of clothes bro? I didn't see you walk in with anything..." America tilted his head at her as Belarus facepalmed at her own stupidity, she didn't bring a single pair of extra clothes.

"Nyet..." Belarus said, still with her hand glued to her face. "C-c-could I borrow one of your shirts?" she said, blushing again. America smiled and shook his head.

"It's cool dude, i'll bring you one right, kay?" he said giving her a thumbs up. He went to his room and pondered for a bit why Belarus wanted to stay with him, but he was a bit preoccupied trying to find a shirt for her without an American flag on it. He couldn't find one. So he decided to bring her his Captain America shirt instead. "Well my flag isn't on it..."

"Thank you very much Alfred." she said smiling at him, although the smile was quite fake.

"Well if you're all settled in, i'm gonna go back to bed." America said yawning and slowly making his way back to his room after playfully tossing his shirt on her head (she was not amused). Belarus waited until she was sure America was in his room before undressing and putting on his shirt. She felt strange being in America's house in nothing but one of his shirts and underwear. Her dress was folded in a neat pile with her knives laying on top on the end table by her head when she finally decided to go to sleep at five thirty in the morning. "Well that was easy, now I just have to get spread some rumors around that me and that idiot are getting...friendly, and my big brother with become so jealous that he will come down here and sweep me off my feet to bring me back to the motherland, where we can get married!" she smiled at her own devious plan before laying down and drifting off to sleep.


Thus completes the chapter one redux! Hope you enjoyed my remodeling, and if this is your first time reading, well I hope you enjoyed :D

With love

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