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Chapter 1

"Charlie, are you going now?" called Casey Conway from her kitchen doorway. She was excited and yet sad at the same time. This was her son, Charlie's, last year of high school and she was anxious for what the year would bring him.

"Yea mum I'm leaving now love ya," he said giving her a kiss on the cheek and then running out the door with his skates in his hand. Casey heard the door slam shut and let one lone tear fall down her cheek.

"Oh my boy is growing up," Casey cooed to no one but then she sighed a heavy sigh, "Now if only he could get a girl who could tolerate him."

Charlie was skating through the streets and soon turned the corner where he would meet the rest of his friends. Sure enough he turned the corner and saw all of his friends there.

"Hey Conway! Ready for our last year at Eden Hall?" Adam Banks called. Charlie laughed and called back as he approached.

"As ready as I'll ever be."

They skated though the park talking about Hockey and were skating alongside a hill that leads down to a path and then a lake.

"Now don't go trying to make me fat again Goldberg just because you won't be first goalie," Julie Gaffney warned. Goldberg looked insulted while everyone laughed at him.

"Aww come on Julie that was one time," he replied trying to defend himself. Julie just laughed and fell back to skate with Connie.

"This year is gonna be great," Luis said with a dreamy smile.

"Yea maybe this time you'll get one girl and stick with her," Charlie laughed. Luis glared and unexpectedly pushed Charlie to the side causing him to turn and start skating rapidly down the hill.

"Ahh!" Charlie yelled trying to stop. He saw something on his left and turned to see a Husky dog run past him on the path in front of him and then stop to watch him barking loudly.

"Lee come back here!!" a female voice called. While trying to stop and keep his balance Charlie looked from where the dog came from and saw a girl running toward where he was going. He knew they were going to collide and tried to stop her.

"Look out!" he called but his sudden shout caused her to stop on the path right in front of him. She turned to look at him and her eyes widened and she froze.

"Oh no!" Charlie shouted again as they collided. He unthinkingly grasped onto the girls shoulders and pulled her down onto the grass where they tumbled until they felt air-born for a split second where she finally found time to scream...the next second they found themselves soaking wet in the shallow lake.

Charlie emerged from the water and took off his helmet which let a whole bucket of water fall on his head. He spluttered and pushed his hair from his face watching his teammates rushing down the hill towards him he took off his skates in the water so he could get up easier. He heard a gasp from behind him as he stood up still knee deep in water.

His jeans clung to his lower half and were now hanging very low from the weight of the water and his green flannelette shirt stuck like a second skin. He turned around and saw the girl sitting in the water bracing herself back on her arms and her knees bent up to her chest. Her hair clung to her face and was almost black from the water and her eyes were clenched shut. She was spitting water from her mouth and she tried to stand up but then a bark from her right caused her to look up.

Charlie gasped and ignored his friends calling to him as they reached the grass above them. Charlie looked at the girls eyes and she struggled to stand up. They were unlike anything he had seen before. Her left eye was a light chocolate brown much like his former coach Gordon Bombay's and the other was a bright blue, so bright that it was like an icy blue. They were so different yet they complimented each other perfectly.

He suddenly snapped out of his daze when she fell down again but this time she was bowled over by the dog he had seen before jumping on her. It was a husky that looked to be around two years old. It was light brown and white with bright blue eyes complementing it and by the slimness of it Charlie guessed it was a boy.

Charlie bent down at the waist and offered his hand to the girl that had just gotten the dog off of her.

"Sorry about that my friend pushed me down the hill and I couldn't stop," he explained as she looked up. She smiled at him and let him help her up. He stumbled on his skates but was reinforced with the help of the mysterious girl.

"It's alright I should have been watching where I was going since I knew you were coming down the hill," she replied. Charlie was shocked, she knew he was coming down the hill and still ran in front of him.

"Did you wanna be caught by me then?" he asked with a smirk as they made their way back to shore and Charlie took in her appearance. She was wearing a black flannelette vest that tied into a knot just above her belly button so you could see some of her stomach. Charlie noticed that it wasn't flat like he expected but was definitely not fat. She was skinny and her stomach had a small, very small bump to it and it looked great.

She was also wearing a pair of faded jeans that clung to her almost like a second skin because of the water. Charlie saw her hourglass figure and loved the fact that she wasn't stick thin. He didn't know how to describe her body other than being a cross between Shakira (for her lower half) and maybe Fergie or Rihanna (for her top half). It was a perfect combination and her light tan made it all the more mouth watering...well for Charlie anyway he was a boy after all. He heard her reply to his comment that he made moments ago and snapped out of his staring.

"Oh yes because I just wanted to be pulled into a lake by a stranger skating down a hill...no I was trying to get Lee because he saw you rolling down the hill and went crazy," she said rolling her eyes and pulling to dog behind her with the leash.

"Charlie, are you alright?" Banks asked from the shore holding out a hand. Connie and Julie were helping the girl out of the water and Charlie looked at her as she was finally free from the lake, daydreaming once again.

"Dude, wake up!" he heard one of the guys call and soon felt someone smack the front of his head. He shook his head and took their hands getting out of the water.

"Geez Charlie what have you been eating you weigh a tonne," Guy said as Charlie got up. As soon as he was on solid ground Charlie plopped to the ground and tipped his skates upside down letting all the water flow out of them and go back into the lake. He looked up and saw Connie, Julie and the girl lifting Lee out of the water who shook all the water in his fur out on them. They squealed and tried to shield themselves with their hands but there was just too much water.

"I really have to go guys I have to get Lee back to dad before school starts in an hour," she said taking hold of Lee's leash. Everyone said their good-byes but suddenly Charlie thought of something.

"Hey wait where do you go to school? And what's your name?" he called out to her retreating figure. She turned to him and smirked.

"I'll see you soon Captain Duck!" she said before running away. Charlie stood up slowly stunned that she knew that. But what did she mean? Was she attending Eden Hall? But she said school started in an hour. Classes started in an hour but the Assembly started in...20 minutes!!!

"Guys we have twenty minutes let's go!" he shouted and started skating towards the school.

The whole time they were skating the guys kept 'congratulating' Charlie for 'snagging' the girl even though Charlie denied it and said it was an accident. They also teased him saying that they thought their captain would have had more control over his skating even if he was pushed down a hill.

The ducks made it to school with five minutes to go and raced into the Assembly Hall. Charlie found the Dean outside and asked if he could be excused to change his clothes after explaining what happened that morning.

He came back to the Assemble five minutes in and sat at the back with the rest of his teammates.

"What'd I miss?" he asked Averman who was beside him.

"Nothing much just the curfew times, what happens if you're caught and oh we are getting a Co-coach or assistant coach for Hockey," he said with one of his big, dorky yet awesome smiles.

"We're getting a what!?" Charlie whispered/shouted. He was outraged, why couldn't they have one coach. He didn't like new coaches as seen from his display in junior year.

"Yeah well apparently this dude's daughter is coming here and wanted to be close to her so they immediately signed him up to co-coach with Orion but we don't know who it is yet since he's not here," Averman replied.

"How did you find all that out?"

"I listen to things here and there," Averman said before sitting back in his seat smugly. Charlie smiled and shook his head at his friend. He was still pissed about having another coach but from his past experiences he decided to wait until he judged the guy. He finally started to listen to the Dean when he heard the word Duck.

"And I'm sure he will be here soon but so I don't keep you in suspense I will tell you who the Co-coach of the Eden Hall Ducks will be. Give a round of applause for the guy that isn't here yes G-," he suddenly got cut off when the hall doors opened and in strode a figure wearing jean and a sports jacket over the top of a shirt.

It had yellow sleeves, a green front, and a red back and in gold writing it spelt out in cursive writing 'The Mighty Ducks.' The Duck's mouths dropped open before they all stood up and started cheering as he walked down the aisle to the stage. He shook hands with the stunned Dean and took to the podium as the Ducks sat down once more.

"I always did like big entrances," he started which made people laugh, "But anyway, hello students of Eden Hall Academy. My name as some of you may or may not know is Gordon Bombay. I will be co-coaching the Ducks with Coach Orion this year as he will not be available for the whole season and I will do my best to keep these Ducks undefeated like he has, thank you," he said before going to sit in one of the teachers chairs on the stage.

The Dean took up the podium again but the Ducks tuned out, all they could think of was their coach, no one noticed the girl that entered after Bombay and nor did they notice her standing in the corner of the room watching the new Hockey coach with a smile.

"Oh my god I can't believe we have Coach Bombay again," Connie and Julie said once they got outside. They had ten minutes until class started and they had all their books with them already too they decided to hang out for a couple of minutes before they had to separate.

"I know he could have at least told us he was coming."

"This year is going to be awesome!"

Comments like this passed for a few minutes before Averman froze on the spot.

"What's the matter Averman?" Charlie asked which caused everyone to look at them silently. Averman looked a bit disturbed and awkward but then he looked at Charlie and said.

"You know how I told you the new coach came here for a reason?" he asked. Charlie looked confused.

"Yea I remember you said the new coach was coming because his....oh...OH!!!" Charlie exclaimed standing abruptly from his position on the grass.

"What is 'oh'?" Kenny asked.

"I told Charlie, because I had heard some things said, that the new coach was coming her because his daughter is now attending Eden Hall and he wanted to be near her," Averman explained.

"So?" Portman asked. Fulton looked at his Bash Brother with an I-can't-believe-you-don't-get-it look. Everyone else's eyes got big and Charlie swore.

"I can't believe Bombay never told us he had a daughter," he said and Portman's mouth dropped.

"Oh," he said.

"Yea 'oh' brother," Fulton agreed.

Here is chapter 1 guys I hope you like it!