1This story takes place after day 4, my own little day 5.
The Fallowing Takes Place Between 11:00am and 12:00pm
11:00am
Truck Yard, Los Angles, California
He sat there and watched the clouds go by, remembering old times. He heard voices and stuck his head out from behind the tire that he was sitting near. He saw 3 men walking towards him, with hard hats on. Jack, out of fear for people, got up and looked for a place to hid. It was to late though, one of the men noticed him and they redirected there walk to him.
Man-"Hey, are you okay?"
Jack made a quick dart for the street.
The man called after him.
Man-"Hey, hey, relax, we are not going to hurt you."
Jack stopped and the men got closer. Jack crumbled to his knees, he was exhausted from lack of sleep and food, he was week. The men rushed to his side.
Man-"Hey, calm down."
Jack stumbled to his feet and one of the man put his hand on his back to steady him, but also realized he was shaking.
Man-"Do you have some place to go?"
Jack looked at him and shook his head, no.
Man-"Do you want us to give you a ride to the shelter?"
Other man-"Yeah, there is one that I pass on my way home, I can take you there."
Jack again shook his head, no.
The men looked at each other and shrugged.
One man dug into his pocket and pulled out a $5.00 bill and handed it to Jack.
Man-"Here, you can buy some coffee or something."
Jack looked at the money then looked at the mans face. He had brown hair and kind brown eyes, he meant well.
Jack took the money gently.
Man-"So, do you have a name?"
Jack swallowed hard.
Jack-"Frank Flynn."
Man-"Hi Frank, I am Marc and this is Eddie and Chris, we work at the construction site right across the street, so I guess we will be seeing you?"
Jack nodded and the men turned and walked away.
11:12am
C.T.U., Los Angles, California
Edgar looked at Chloe, they had been working forever to try to find Kim Bauer. He called her cell phone 10 times today alone, but he would have to try again later.
Chloe tried the number again, but the same thing happened.
'Hi, you have reached Kim and Barry. Sorry we can't get to the phone right now, but leave your name and number and we will get back to you as soon as possible, Thanks bye.'
She waited for the beep.
Chloe-"Hi Kim, Its Chloe from C.T.U., I know you don't want to speak with us, but you really need to call us back when you get this, it is very important, thanks bye."
She hung up and looked over at Tony who was going over something with Michelle. She waited for Tony to make eye contact with her. He gave her a hopeful look and she frowned and shook her head, no.
Tony nodded and sighed, it had been 3 weeks since the staged Jack Bauer's death and they still couldn't get to Kim, his daughter, to tell her what happened. He looked up at Audrey, she had taken Jack's death better then expected, she was doing very well so there was no use to bring it up to her again.
Michelle looked up from her files and looked at Tony who was still leaning over her shoulder.
Michelle-"Kim Bauer still does not know?"
Tony-"Yeah, she is not home and if she is, she just wont answer the phone."
Michelle-"I have an idea."
Tony-"Anything can help, what do you got?"
Michelle-"I could take a ride over to her house and talk to he if you want?"
Tony looked at her and smiled, he didn't think of doing that.
Tony-"That's why I love you, your to smart, you can go when ever you are ready."
She smiled and kissed Tony quickly and grabbed her coat and headed for the door.
11:24am
Kim Bauer's House
Barry-"Kim, I can't believe you would do this!"
Kim sat on the couch, tears running down her face, she couldn't handle when Barry got like this.
Barry-"How could you forget our anniversary?"
Kim-"I didn't forget, please."
Barry-"I...I have nothing to say to you."
He dropped the flowers her had for her on the floor and walked out the front door.
Barry and her had been going out for 2 weeks today. Barry considered every week for one month an anniversary, only she didn't agree with him. He got her something for this 'anniversary' but she didn't get him anything, and now he was in one of his moods.
For a Psychologist who helps people for a job, he had a VERY short fuse.
She whipped her tears away and made her way to the kitchen to get a glass of water. She noticed a picture of Chase. She had told Barry it was a picture of her brother so that she could keep it.
She missed Chase, she wondered how his hand was doing and how Angelina was. She smiled to her self, thinking of how her a Chase could have stayed together if it was not for her dad having to remove his hand years ago, right after that, Chase broke up with her. He said it was not because of her or her dad, it was just that he needed a little brake from everything. He said he wanted to keep in touch, but they never did and she was never sure why.
11:31am
Michelle Dessler's Car
Michelle stopped at the red light and turned on the radio.
The song 'Wake Me Up When September Ends by Greenday' was on and she started to sing along, to pass the time.
She was only about 5 minutes away from Kims house so she was trying to think of a way she could tell her the bad news she had too. She knew that Jack was not really dead, but she made promise to Jack that for Kim's own safety, she wouldn't tell her that he was alive no matter what happened.
She was one of the few people who knew Jack was alive. The only others were Tony, David Palmer, and Chloe O'Brian. They all made the same promise and they were going to keep it. As she thought more she remembered more about that day just 3 weeks ago. The day seemed never ending, but finally things seemed to be getting back on track for everyone involved.
She saw the house she was looking for. It was blue with a porch in the front, it was a cute little house.
She pulled in the driveway and turned off the car. She paused but opened the door and walked to the front door. She knocked and waited, no answer. She sighed and knocked again. This time the door cracked open.
Michelle-"Kim?"
She opened the door fully now.
Kim-"Hi Michelle..."
Michelle-"C.T.U. has been trying to call you."
Kim-"I know, I got all your messages."
Michelle thought about asking why she didn't call back then, but she decided to just let it go.
There was an awkward silence between the two women which Kim broke.
Kim-"So, you came here for a reason I guess, so come in."
She opened the door and Michelle walked in and closed it behind her.
Kim-"Make yourself at home, would you like anything to drink?"
Michelle shook her head, no.
Michelle-"No thanks, actually Kim, I have some very bad news for you."
Kim looked at her with a dreadful look of dispar and sat down.
Michelle sat down next to her and looked at her, not really sure of how to start.
Kim-"Michelle, just tell me."
Michelle-"Kim, its your father, he passed away, we were trying to get in touch with you earlier, but you would answer the phone, im so sorry."
The look of sadness on Kimberly Bauer's face was unmistakable. She turned away from Michelle and whipped the tears from her eyes quickly.
Kim-"When, How?
Michelle-"About 3 weeks ago, he was shot."
Kim-"Thank you Michelle, I am sorry to rush you out but I have to go."
He voice cracked and she grabbed her coat and her car keys and Michelle walked out the front door and got in her car. She pulled out of the driveway and drove down the street. She looked in the rearview mirror and saw Kim's car pull out a minute later and take off in the opposite direction.
12:00noon
End of Hour One
Next Chapter-Find out what Kim will do after learning of her father's death. Learn more about Jack and how he lives now. Find out how C.T.U. gets in touch with Jack.
What To Expect-In this story I will introduce new characters of my own, and some old familiar faces that we have not seen in a while. This will be like my own rewrite to season 5.
Cast-
Jack Bauer- Kiefer Sutherland
Michelle Dessler- Reiko Aylesworth
Tony Almeaida- Carlos Bernard
Kim Bauer- Elisha Cuthbert
Audrey Raines- Kim Raver
Edgar Stiles- Louis Lombardi
Chloe O'Brian- Marry Lynn Rajskub
Future Cast-
David Palmer- Dennis Haysbert
Charles Logan- Greg Itzin
Curtis Manning- Roger Cross
Bill Buchan- James Morrison
Martha Logan- Jean Smart
Wayne Palmer- D.B. Woodside
Authors Note-Thanks for reading. Hope you enjoyed and the next chapter will be up no later then Sunday.
