Hey everybody! This is my first Fantastic Four fic, so if I make a mistake somewhere, please let me know!


Disclaimer: I do not own Fantastic Four. The only thing I own is the plot, the OC's you will be introduced to, and on occasion, Johnny Storm and Reed Richards.


SUMMARY!: What if there wasn't just the Fantastic Four members and Doom, that got effected by the storm? There is another one out there. Zay Swift. Victor's assistant. Who makes it Five.


Reed Richards and Ben Grimm approached Von Doom Industries. They looked up to see a giant statue of Victor being built in steel.

'Typical of Victor Von Doom, to build a 30-foot statue of himself.' Ben said, glaring daggers at the statue.

'Well, it's obviously aimed at first-time visitors to create feelings of smallness, inadequacy.' Reed answered back, nervousness aimed in his voice.

'Good thing it ain't working.' Ben retorted, looking at Reed to give him a boost of confidence.

'Reed, what are we doing here? This guy's fast-food, strip-mall science.' Ben asked, clearly not wanting to pay Victor a visit.

'This wasn't our first stop, in case you forgot. Or did you forget NASA? Besides, Victor's not that bad. He's just a little larger than life.' Reed replied, walking with Ben into the building.

Ben and Reed were sitting in the receptionists office, waiting to go speak to Victor, about a radioactive storm in the inner solar system.

That's when a girl came out, she looked to be no older than 19, with light brown hair, and green eyes, and a nice figure, Reed had to admit. She walked up to the receptionist's desk, and got a folder of the pile.

'Mr. Reed Richards, and Ben Grimm,' she called. 'Mr. Von Doom will see you now.'

We got up and walked towards the door to Victor's office. I gave her a polite nod of my head to say thanks, took a deep breath and walked through the doors into Victor's office.

And with that, I began.


Hiya! Thanks so much for reading my story! I don't really mind about how many reviews I get, although it makes me happier! SO REVIEW, REVIEW, REVIEW!