me: Hi! this is my first fan fic so be nice! no offense to the guy who made this website, but why the crap did I have to wait 2 days to post a stories? :( blah, ok, enough complaining back to the story.
Fang: You gonna say it?
me: What?
Fang: DISCLAIMER.
me: O
Fang: Waiting...
me: Be patient young grasshopper!
Fang: Do I really look like a grasshopper to you?
me: yes
Fang: Uh...
Max: Just get on with the story.
me: k, I DON'T OWN ANY OF THE CHARACTERS, JUST THE PLOT.
MAX POV:
"COME ON MAX!" Sigh. Obviously, you probably all ready know my name now but I'll remind you. I'm Max. Maximum Ride. Wonder why Nudge is yelling at me from down stairs? Well, that 15-year-old-motor-mouth-of-a-friend practically got down on her knees and begged me to go to the school dance this fri- "WE'RE GONNA BE LATE!" day. She used bambi eyes on me, which usually gets me to do anything, because nothing else does. See I'm that 15 year old girl with a hard life, but takes it as it comes, not many friends,back talks everybody who even attempts to mess with me, oh, and did I mention it yet? Nah, probably didn't. I'm not just that girl. I have wings. My psycho, deranged parents( except my mom, Valencia Martinez ) decided to inject 2 percent hawk into me. Nice, huh? NO. Only Angel, Nudge, Iggy, Gazzy, have wings too. My mom knows, and so does my sister Ella. We've been living in Collierville, TN for a while now. Though we know to still be wary of Erasers. They're wolf like creatures who have been trying to drag us back to the place called the School. *shudders* the scientists there are the ones who've messed with our gens and mixed in a little bird into us. Each of us has different bird in us. Me:hawk. Angel and Gazzy: possibly dove. Nudge: finch.( her wings ARE NOT SMALL THOUGH ) Iggy: snowy owl.
"MAX, I SWEAR, I DID NOT JUST PICK OUT THAT BEAUTIFUL DRESS THAT FIT'S YOUR WINGS, CURL YOUR HAIR, AND APPLY THAT AWESOMELY AWESOME MAKE-UP ON YOU FACE FOR NOTHIN'! NOW YOU GET DOWN HERE RIGHT NOW OR I'M COMING UP THERE!", she yelled again. "I'm coming Nudge!" I yelled back. Oh my god...I couldn't believe how amazing I looked compared to my regular cloths. Nudge had put me in a medium brown ball gown (THAT RYMED! ) with ruffles from my sweet-heart neck line that stretched down to the bottom of my dress,a small braided darker brown belt under my chest, my good luck neckless, and to give the dress a more outdoorsie look she put me in brown leather boots,(which was fine with me), my long brown-blond hair was in neat ringlets a bobby pin pulled some of it back, Nudge said that my skin was so flawless that she wasn't going to put any more of that sticky stuff she calls make-up on besides some light brown (complimenting my brown eyes) eye shadow, mascara, and a thin layer of pink lip-gloss on. I loved it, but I wouldn't admit , it covered my tawny wings perfectly. I headed down stairs to where Nudge was waiting. She was wearing a forest green ruffly dress that reached her knees with short-short sleeves, her black hair had a green feather in it, some make-up like me, her mocha colored skin had a green swirly design starting at her shoulders and going down to her elbow, and brown leather boots like me.
"Finally." she says,"Awe! You look totally hot! You know what? I think I should go into the fashion career. Maybe start out by applying for a job at that Super-Cuts at Saddle Creek! Yeah! And then, you could be like my manager or something, and we could get famous! This is gonna be sooooooooooooooooo cool!..." BLAH,BLAh,BLah,Blah,blah. I waited for a second and then decided that, yeah, we were going to be late. "Nudge...Nudge!", she looked at me with a bemused smile."Let's go, maybe, sometime soon?" She nodded with her smile still on and she hoped into the car. My mom was driving us to our school, Houston High. We sat in silence before we picked up Angel and Gazzy the cute brother and sister that were 13 years old. They both climbed into the car and Angel said, "Hey my peoples! Oh my god! Max! you look totally cute! Where'd you get that dress?"
"Arabella's." I replied. Arabella's is like, dress wonderland. Not my kind o' place. "Lucky." I heard her whisper. Angel was wearing a pink flowy dress (strapless ), her blond curly hair had one little pink flower in it, and a little make-up. Gazz was wearing a plain suit and tie, his sandy blond hair was spiked. They were going to Houston Middle for their Dancing In The Forest dance like we were, but different schools. Houston High is 9th-11th grade, and Houston Middle is 6th-8th grade. They were in 7th grade, and Nudge, Iggy, Ella, and I where in 9th. The Dancing In The Forest was a dance in the beginning of the year to " make friends quickly" as the teachers put it. I sighed out loud realizing what the crap I was getting into.
"Ok! Here we are! Max, Nudge, do you guys have your phones?" we both held them up for my mother to see. "Good. now you two have fun!" "See you later!" Angel and Gazzy said together and my mom's black Nissan drove off.
I WILL UPDATE SOON! :)
Max: you'd better, i want to know what happens.
me: your the main character.
Max: O
me: DUH!
Max: hehe, I knew that.
me: you'd better
Max: :D
-Riley
