As the clock turns chapter 1
William: Welcome to the rewritten version as the clock turns. Chapters will be updated whenever we finish them. In this version, Sky is not related to the princesses. That would be extremely awkward.
Leon: Did we really have to rewrite it?
Fenrir: What do you mean, we? Me and William did all the work. You just sat there watching tosh.o
Leon: So?
Fenrir: Can I punish him?
William: Yes. Plan Omega. If he still doesn't listen you may use plan gamma.
Leon: *has look of fear* I'm sorry!
Fenrir: Too late, you have to watch G3.5 now.(You know what this is. And we all regret it.)
Leon: Noooooo!
William: Enjoy.
Canterlot castle, Celestia's pov
"Princess Celestia." The guards knocked on the door to my room.
I yawned and got out of bed. I was tired after raising the sun and moon for the last few days. Luna had gotten sick and I lost touch after she resumed her moon-raising duties. I opened the door to see two of my unicorn guards. I didn't know their names. They all look so alike. "Yes?" I asked them.
"A weird pony is at the front gates and he says he knows you."
I sighed. Why does everypony need me for their problems? They always use the same excuse that they know me personally. I left my room to see what the pony wanted. "What does he look like?" I asked the guard on my right.
"He is a red pegazebra with royal blue stripes." He answered.
A pegazebra, how rare. Yet those markings sounded familiar. "Did he say his name?"
The guard nodded. "He said his name was Straight Edge."
I froze. "Get guards to the elements of harmony at once." I told him urgently.
"Right away, princess Celestia." He said and ran down the hall.
I looked at the guard on my left. "Apprehend the pony at the front gates."
He nodded. "Yes, princess Celestia." He turned and was stabbed in the eye with a golden dagger. He never saw what had gotten him.
"Hello, princess." A voice said with obvious disgust. "Your guards are getting slow." Straight Edge was hovering above me. "You will die for the honor of my family." He struck at me and I moved to the side. He hit the ground leaving a small crater. He got up and I shot a paralysis spell at him, which he dodged. He moved behind me and punched me. I was pushed into the wall with a blade against my throat. Small trickles of blood were starting to flow out of my neck. "Any last words?" He asked me.
"Leave my student and her friends alone, Straight Edge." I pleaded knowing the end was near.
"If there is one thing I regret, it is attacking your student." He told me. "She may live, but you must die." He pulled the blade back and prepared to finish me.
"Not today, you ruffian!" Edge was tackled by one of my pegasus guards. One of the few whose name I remembered.
"Are you alright, princess?" A gray unicorn stallion walked up to me. "You look you're in trouble."
I growled at him. "Shut it, Swirly." Normally I don't growl at my subjects, but this one was different. Even Pinkie Pie, the element of laughter would get annoyed by him. The pegasus guard was getting overwhelmed by Edge. "Swirly, go help Draco." I ordered him.
He shook his head. "Don't feel like it. Besides, Si's got it covered.
I looked back to the battle and Edge was getting pushed back by A pitch black earth pony stallion. Edge scratched Draco's armor and he went berserk. He tore off his helmet revealing his pearl-white mane. "You scratched my hoof made armor!" He shouted. "For this, you die!" He erupted into the purple flames of wrath.
(A/N Leon: Read Katekyo Hitman Reborn and you'll get a good idea of what this looks like. It's a great manga until you get to the chapters that are all computerized.)
"Starswirl!" I yelled.
"I got it!" Swirly pushed Draco to the side while covered in his gray flames of pride.
Edge took this opportunity to attack me. A wall of white fire blocked his path. Si stood behind him with a blank expression on his face. "What the hoof are you looking at?" Edge asked him.
Si pointed to the wall of fire. Edge looked and was tackled by Swirly in flame form. Swirly swung him and he crashed through a window. Before Edge hit the ground, he regained control of his wings. "I'll be back for your head Celestia!" Edge shouted as he flew away.
Draco moved to chase him, but Si held him back and shook hid head. Draco sighed as he turned off his fire. "Fine." Si and Swirly turned off their flames as well.
"We have more important matters to deal with." Swirly said. "There are two others heading our way."
"Other what, Swirly?" I asked him.
"Aspects of death. And they're powerful."
Eternal Sky's pov, streets of canterlot
"So Shadow, where to next?" I asked my traveling companion and friend, Desert Shadow.
(A/N Leon: not going to describe Shadow, go to megatronious's profile.)
His stomach roared. "Somewhere with food." He complained. "I can't handle your cooking."
"I agree with with Shadow." My other traveling companion, Talon, a yellow and light green baby dragon, said. "Your cooking is terrible."
"Hey, I'm a great cook." I retorted. "The hell you are, remember what happened last time you cooked for somepony?" Talon asked.
Flashback, one week ago, Appleoosa
"Everypony run for your lives!" The sheriff screamed. "It's the ponypocalypse!" Every pony in the town was running around frantically trying to get as far away as possible.
Sky walked out of the saloon carrying something burnt and smelling of sulfur. "Who wants pancakes?" He asked with a smile. Everypony in Appleoosa screamed and ran. Sky turned towards his friends. "You guys want some?"
Talon and Shadow had looks of fear. They looked at each other. "Run." They said in unison. The smoke from the kitchen caused them to break out in a horrible coughing fit. Sky walked closer to them. "It's been nice knowing ya, Talon." Shadow said to her.
"You may be an idiot, but it's been nice knowing you, too." Talon told him.
"No regrets?" He asked her.
She nodded. "No regrets." They yelled a battle cry and charged Sky.
"And we just woke up yesterday." Talon said.
"Was it that bad?" I asked them.
"YES!" They basically shouted.
"Let's see you two do any better than me." I challenged them.
"Challenge accepted." Shadow said. He walked over to a nearby restaurant.
"Mind if we borrow your kitchen?" He asked a regal looking unicorn stallion standing outside the building wearing a monocle.
"Of course you can, good sir." The pony replied. "And I must say, you're wings are absolutely magnificent." He was admiring Shadow's dragon-like wings. He held out a hoof. "My name is Fancypants."
Shadow took his hoof and shook it. "Shadow." He pointed to us. "This is Sky and Talon."
His eyes widened at the sight of me. "An alicorn!"
"You can see my wings?" I asked him.
He nodded. "My monocle can see through all spells and illusions. Very useful for identifying changelings."
I shrugged and released the spell hiding my wings. The ponies in the street gasped and quickly bowed as they passed by. I stretched my wings. "Ah, been so long since I last flew. See you guys later." I waved to them as I took to the skies.
Canterlot castle, Celestia's pov
"An alicorn?" I asked in disbelief.
Draco nodded. "This information comes from sir Fancypants himself."
"I want you and Si to find this alicorn."
Draco nodded. "I shall return, princess." He flew out the open window to find Si.
As soon as he was out of earshot, I called Luna and Cadance. "LUNA! CADANCE!"
Luna walked in, still sleepy. "What dost thou require of us, sister dearest?"
"Luna, speak normal." I scolded her.
"Sorry, sister. Why have you woken me?"
"We're not the last alicorns left, Luna." Her eyes widened in surprise.
"What?"
"We're not alone in equestria anymore, Luna."
"We must find this alicorn, sister." Luna said.
"This means we have 4 alicorns in canterlot." Cadance said as she walked in with her husband, Shining Armor, by her side.
Shining bowed. "Do you wish for us to hunt this pony down?" He asked.
I shook my head. "Me and Luna will find the alicorn ourselves. Cadance, can you and Armor watch the palace for us?"
She smiled. "Of course, aunt Celestia."
Me and Luna took to the skies. "Sister, we should split up. That way we have a better chance of finding the alicorn." Luna suggested.
I nodded and Luna went east. I scanned the skies looking for something that could be an alicorn. I noticed that the clouds around me were acting weird . They were all moving towards one spot. The clouds swirled together and formed a beautiful white lightning bolt. A dark blue pony-like shape flew away from the lightning bolt cloud. I flew after it. I accelerated and accidentally crashed into it. My right wing broke and I cried out in pain as I plummeted towards Terra. Before I hit the ground I saw the dark blue shape in front of me. It was a dark blue alicorn with a lustrous silver mane and incredible gray eyes. He caught me and I was lowered onto the ground. "Thank you." I told my savior.
"No problem." He said. "Although you should warn somepony before you attack them."
I laughed and winced in pain. "Ow."
"Let me help you with that." A dark blue magical energy surrounded my broken wing. It realigned itself and with no pain at all. I flexed it, amazed that it hadn't hurt. "All better?" He asked me with a smile.
"Y-Yes." I told him slight hesitation as a blush formed on my cheeks. If he noticed this, he gave no indication.
"My name's Eternal Sky, what's yours?" He asked.
"Celestia." I answered.
"That's a pretty name."
I blushed furiously and looked away. "Th-thank you."
"Sorry, but I gotta go. My friends are waiting for me." He started flying away. "See you later, Celestia!" He waved to me as he flew back towards Canterlot. I felt a little pain in my heart seeing him go.
Unknown location
"So they finally meet. Everything is going according to plan."
End of chapter 1
William: Tell me if it was better or worse than the original. I always appreciate someone reading my story. How was the movie Leon?
Leon: It was horrible. I'll never disobey your orders again.
Fenrir: Be glad we didn't have to use plan gamma.
Leon: I don't even wanna know.
Edge belongs to Tristan, Shadow belongs to megatronious
we are still accepting ocs
(P.S. Fenrir: The unknown pony isn't Midnight.)
