Star wars (clone wars era fan-fiction) alternate universe account

The clone wars era was a period of devastation across the galaxy. Many peaceful worlds fell to picking sides to the CIS or he Republic. This is the story of the Separatist movement succeeding in my alternate is my first fan-fiction ever so free to note anything it is greatly appreciated! Enjoy. Note this fan-fiction was made under the assumption the viewer has seen the star wars movies and T.V show.

Chapter 1 Naboo invasion

This is the story of the confederacy's noble victory. we begin with our commander in his quarters waiting to be called down. the attack on Naboo was immanent.

Commander Kento was waiting to prove himself worthy to his new cause. he then said to himself "I was waiting in my quarters for the call down to the meeting room, viceroy Nute Gunray was going to summon myself and the other two commanders to discuss our plan of taking the surface." he smiled as he heard the announcement.

"All commanders please report to the meeting room." he walked down to the Lucrehulks command center and met his fellow commanders. A droid then briefed them on what was going to happen.

"Greetings loyal commanders of the trade federation army. Our objectives today will be the capital of Theed. Resistance is projected to be high but our enemy is unskilled. We must move swiftly or else the senate will act against capture the city ambassadors will be arriving shortly to negotiate. we must not allow them to return to the senate. We must kill them at all costs in order to buy time. The city is protected by some royal guard and presumably resistance fighters. Also they have star ships to hit us here in space. Your places to capture that are vital are as follows: 1. capture the city center and 2. Capture the hangar. 3. Kill the ambassadors. Thank you for listening and please take to your positions." Kento couldn't wait.

He was going to fight in his first battle. He checked his computer for instructions. He was then told he was to be a part of the ground invasion and a tank is to be used as his command center. he then walked to the hanger to receive his local droid control band. with it he could order around droids near him. The command droid then said,

"We are commencing landing. please get in your tank" and he did so. he felt lift off and got on his communication device

to report to the other commanders. his fellow commanders were Donato Kires, and Sonu Retune. Donato was tasked with taking the new fortress Harte Secur while Sonu was tasked with taking the spinnaker industrial plant. Kento was charged with taking Theed. he then landed at Theed and was met with the royal guard demanding that they leave. Of course Kento ordered to fire upon the guard and make way to the city center. as the droid army advanced people were seen hiding their children.

Kento did feel sorry but pressed on. Eventually he made it to the center and was met with resistance fighters. he ordered the droids to take cover and return fire. "the queen is in the palace! now is not the time for retreat" he yelled. with droids promptly saying roger roger. The droids slowly but noticeably pushed back the resistance fighters to the alley ways and gave authority to a command battle droid. After the fighting had concluded he had entered the palace where the queen was located.

"Hello queen, how are you today" she responded "why are you here? The senate will have your heads for this." "We are here to give our droids an oil bath...WHAT DO YOU THINK? This is an invasion and you are coming with us!" "Never" "seize her!" after the queen and her subordinates were captured and taken away the emergency communication signal went active. "Wonderful" Kento muttered. He opened his link." this is Kento what is the emergency?" he then heard "commander Retune reporting what is the issue." "this is Donato here what is the problem?".

Kento heard a frantic Nute Gunray say "THE SENATE HAS SENT JEDI! And they have escaped! they may be aboard one of your ships!" the three commanders said roger roger and continued with they're objectives. Kento's next assignment is to assist Retune with seizing hangar due to resistance from the royal guard. "droids i need you to come with me to the hanger Retune is ready for his attack." he shouted.

"roger roger" the droids said almost in unison. he then traveled to the hangar and talked with commander Retune." commander what is your position?" "I'm about 6 kilometers away from the hanger and droids are receiving resistance. can you assist?", "gladly" he shut off the transmitter and went on his way to the hanger.

he asked the commander droid "how many droids do we have to take the hangar?" the droid replied "143 of our droids are available for re-tasking" Kento replied "let's move in swiftly tell the droids we are moving to the hangar." as he arrived the enemy shot at him and nearly grazed his temple. the commander said "take cover near the low stone wall immediately!" "roger roger" the droids did as ordered and were firing back. Suddenly Retune ran up to Kento "i have sixty droids on this side and eighty two on the other side but the seven entrances are blocked by the royal guard. How many droids do you have?"

Kento replied "I have brought a hundred and forty three" "that will have to do. Commander Droid!" "Yes?" "I want six charges near the cracked wall on the building and I want fifteen droids in line formation for a distraction." "roger roger" the droids quickly formed a line and were taking a lot of the fire from the rebels. Retune had ordered the same to be done on the other side of the building.

After the explosives detonated droids swarmed the hangar. the pilots inside quickly surrendered and were detained. "Well Kento how was that for your first invasion?" Kento then replied "could have used less of the enemy firing back." the two commanders linked up with Kires and waited for the next set of orders.

Well fan-fiction readers should i continue this? It's completely up to you. And please give constructive criticism not hate. Thanks for reading.