So I decided to go and rewrite the story why because I wasn't happy when I was reading it
Plus I'm also writing this on my phone until my laptop is fixed... Why does my laptop always break when I want to write things?
Chapter 1
'I feel so sleepy'...waking up to a pitch black room hearing wood creak
'Where am I again oh that's right' (rubbing sleep away from my eyes)
'Oh, that's right I'm on a Boat on our way to the capital, looking next to me seeing my twin brother he probably couldn't sleep last night'
'After all he doesn't like water that much after father pushed him into the Nile yesterday claiming he didn't see him good thing kuriboh was around otherwise I would have lost him'
'I wonder what if Ra is rising?' Pulling back the blanket and getting out of bed
Oh that was close almost falling on the floor from the sway of the boat
"Huh?" my twin said as he rises from the bed sleepy
"Go back to sleep Yugi"
"Ok" he said flopping back to sleep
'Gee my brother can sleep like the dead no matter how long he can always sleep'
Looking around I can see someone outside has lighting a candle, now I can see the room better, seeing twin makeshift beds, one with my brother in, nothing too fancy as this is not our boat.
'father was very displeased to find out that uncle had borrowed it without asking, now we had to greet the pharaoh in a small covered rowing boat with no symbol of wealth attached to it.'
'Father wishes to arrange a marriage between me and the prince of Egypt.'
'It is said that the prince is the one who decides on his future partner and that is the reason why I'm going.'
'My brother on the other hand is only going because mother is coming with us to save face because of something father has done in the past and I do not know what it is?'
'Huh speaking of mother, where is she?'
'I should go and look for her'
Heba where are you going?" I turn around to see yugi awake
"I'm going to see where mother has gone I'll be back soon"
Are you shore you should go alone? Yugi says
"I'll be fine besides if you are still scared you have kuriboh with you"
"Okay" yugi said in a sad tune
Pushing open the wooden door I see that Ra is rising looking around I see slave's paddling the boat.
'They must have paddle throw the night I wish father was not so harsh with them they look exhausted'
Looking to the front I see father and mother having to what looks like a very heated argument
'I can't hear what they are say but I can read their lips something about not allowing yugi to meet the prince and that grandfather should look after him'
'That's right grandpa is meeting us at the port so people know we are important people or something like that father said'
'I'm nine years old and my father wants to arrange marriage to lift up our states as nobles to future princess of Egypt...
I don't want to be married to a stranger and to someone I have no idea what they are like in real life, what if I'm not his light and we marry and he find his light what would happen to me...
"YOU WILL KEEP THAT CHILD AWAY FROM THE PRINCE!"
'What?! Why does father hate Yugi so much he has done nothing wrong?'
"I WILL DO NO SUCH THING! THE ONLY REASON WE ARE EVEN ALOUD INTO THE PALACE IS BECAUSE FATHER NEEDS HELP!"
Why...
Well that is the first chapter I know it's so different but I have made the timeline different to explain some bit better
next chapter will be up on 6th
