Hey, I'm back with my next story! Since I'm a VERY impatient person, I decided to act before the poll was through. And besides, poetry isn't on there anyway. This is my first attempt at writing something like this, but I want more stories of mine up and I need practice for my English class(not my best subject, no matter how much i enjoy it). Please do me a favor and review leaving behind any notes for things I could improve. PLEASE AND THANKS!
Sora~
Coragious, determined, happy-go-lucky, and kind,
Brother to none,
Lover of the warm island beaches, the sound of waves washing the soft sand and his friends who
walk along that very same path,
Who feels joy when sparing near the Paupu tree, loneliness in the dark, and excitement when
traveling,
Who needs laughter, happiness with those he treasures most, and a much needed consolation,
Who gives smiles, hope, and encouragement to others,
Who fears the shadows, or what lurks inside them, and the pain that comes with loss,
Who would like to see everything set right, his friends and family home safe and sound, or even
just a home,
Who lives in an island called Destiny in warm sunshine and bright sand, the blue-est ocean,
~Hikari
I hope you enjoyed this poem! it's not really serious, but i still want your feed-back on what I could/should possibly change. This is only the first chapter of a few. I need as much practice as I can get, so I intend to write for more of the Kingdom Hearts characters. DON'T FORGET TO CLICK THAT SQUARE RIGHT DOWN THERE!
(YAY, rhymes =D)
